VN Ren'Py Onhold It Could Be Worse! [2.4.2] [eHellJay]

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Overview:
If you agree with me that the guy on the left looks like an idiot, you're right: he is! If you agree with me that the girlfriend in front of him looks pretty good, you have good taste! And if you're wondering what the handsome guy behind her is doing there, I suggest you play my very first game: "It could be worse!"​

Thread Updated: 2023-11-10
Release Date: 2023-11-04
Developer: eHellJay -

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Version: 2.4.2
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
Other Games: Think Twice - Debbie
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[Dunav]

Looks good

 

[Canto Forte]

A game where the guy in the left just caught the girl in the middle letting the guy on the right fondle her insides in the men bathroom .. to which she is ashamed of but would not put a stop to. Really mature of us to game yet another whoring woman getting objectified for naught.
What is there left to say?
To whomever this feels appealing, game on!

 

[Canto Forte]

No, it could not be worse than being a tool and making it your mission in life to become even more of a tool for whomever wants to make you even more of a tool for themselves.

 

[RolandG.]

Makes a good impression!

 

[Shozui]

Good luck!

 

[Trash_Panda]

Scenes need a lot of lightning, cant see shit.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[mike7jordan]

My English is not very good. Can you please share your walkthrough.

 

[Deleted member 4548362]

A game where the guy in the left just caught the girl in the middle letting the guy on the right fondle her insides in the men bathroom .. to which she is ashamed of but would not put a stop to. Really mature of us to game yet another whoring woman getting objectified for naught.
What is there left to say?
To whomever this feels appealing, game on!

Good. What can I say to that?
First of all, you are not entirely wrong!
But I still wonder if you played or just looked at the picture.
Then I copy what I wrote on itch : "Short, unpretentious story in two parts. This is a first attempt, and your feedback would be greatly appreciated. So, please leave me your comments, even if they are critical; we learn from our mistakes… ».
Have mercy!

 

[Deleted member 4548362]

My English is not very good. Can you please share your walkthrough.

What motivates a player to play is the losing. Try a little harder, (this game is really not difficult!) and you will deserve part 2...

 

[Deleted member 4548362]

Scenes need a lot of lightning, cant see shit.

Thanks for the comment. I work on a Mac with a very average graphics card. I suspect the Mac's gamma is playing tricks on me. I'm going to pay attention to it anyway. As my next story takes place under the sun and not at night, this should temporarily fix the issue...

 

[Sbogo]

is there a way to get to the final scene ? Text option in there but the scene doesn't go further.

 

[Deleted member 4548362]

is there a way to get to the final scene ? Text option in there but the scene doesn't go further.

You mean the scene in the secluded living room, I guess.
I just checked once again and... you're right. It's a stupid programming error !
As you may see, I'm a real newbie... I fix that and upload a new version.
I just still have to learn how to manage versions...
Many thx !

 

[simurg29]

It's feels good thanks man

 

[karlosos]

Should there be an NTR tag?

There are different types of NTR
This looks NTR like where the boyfriend doesnt know.
Thats the only NTR type I like by the way.
Hope she's not too easy or slutty and resists a bit.

 

[Sbogo]

You mean the scene in the secluded living room, I guess.
I just checked once again and... you're right. It's a stupid programming error !
As you may see, I'm a real newbie... I fix that and upload a new version.
I just still have to learn how to manage versions...
Many thx !

Ok now I can progress the scene in the "orange light room", but the last scene doesn't trigger. I have tried many combination with dialogues. Are you sure it can be triggered somehow ?

 

[DavDR]

Good. What can I say to that?
First of all, you are not entirely wrong!
But I still wonder if you played or just looked at the picture.
Then I copy what I wrote on itch : "Short, unpretentious story in two parts. This is a first attempt, and your feedback would be greatly appreciated. So, please leave me your comments, even if they are critical; we learn from our mistakes… ».
Have mercy!

I really enjoyed this and look forward to to the next.

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[Alleykatt]

Great premise and nice renders. Unfortunately the English is phrased so that it is impossible to discern the inpact of many of the responses. And there is no indication after the choice as to potential consequences. This makes it all feel a bit random.

 

[Deleted member 4548362]

Should there be an NTR tag?

There are different types of NTR
This looks NTR like where the boyfriend doesnt know.
Thats the only NTR type I like by the way.
Hope she's not too easy or slutty and resists a bit.

How can I put it?
This story is so short that it only contains about 100 screens (often cut in half). It only aims to train me, perhaps by entertaining you. As a result, there are two possibilities: either she resists or she gives in. If she resists, I will frustrate half of the players who will resent me for having led them on, or she succumbs and I will frustrate the other half who do not like easy women (like me, by the way).
Someone once told me: choosing is never a mistake, not choosing is. I chose!
See you in part 2?