My english isnt that great either, but doesnt that mean her husband is 10 years old? ^^ - The engrish is very strong in this game *g*
Oh and a better title for the game would be "Exposition: The game" - so much of that in the begining ... Yeah we get it, she is the perfectest and bestest and cutestes and faithfulstes woman in the whole world ... but we just started a game that tells us that she will be corrupted ...
That goes on and on - the "author" discribes everything that we see. She is drinking. "Jenny got a drink" ... ah yeah and she drank "alchogol" ..
Like in this scene ...
And then that banking stuff - they try to contact his next relatives for 1000$ in debt as a business? ... And she think they are bankrupt? wtf? ^^
The next thing ... she is angry bc her hubby is drunk all the time and say it is to relax and what does she do? She goes into a bar to relax ... yeah.
Then the slide-in effect for transitions is annoying ... you cant even go back or save during that repetitive crap talk.
After the prologue the horror continues. I can bet on it - this game will never use that free roam mechanic for anything but a pure linear story. I really dont get it why ppl waste their energy for that bs.
The story ... she will work at school as a whore for the rich kids ... and probably later the standard stuff - girl will work in bar and wear skimpier outfits every few days and will finally strip and whore herself out ... because the business of them is in debt ... with 1000$ ... I am without a job for several years now, but even I could payback 1000$ in a few days when I have to.
I mean they have a house - you dont care for that amount as long as you still own a house. I dont know here the dev lives, and maybe 1k$ is an enormous sum for him, but just for immersion the value should be at least 10-25k or even more.
Her look - i like makeup and that doll/comic look is ok ^^
So many problems here ... in general it looks ok, but the base story is stupid as fuck (or maybe there will be a great twist later why the husband acts so weird. No free save ( you cant save at the end of the content, bc you cant save during dialog and the game stops in one), pointless (currently, and I bet that will never change) free roam - with an ugly UI.
With some proofreading this might become at least a stupid but fun game nonetheless - after the devs cans the free roam and just tell that hilarious thing as a pure VN ^^
@ Dev ... maybe try
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the german/english translation is way better than google.
And they support some languages including Russian and Polish.
