VN Unity Abandoned JSMN [v0.3] [TSODEON]

[Hyperserver]

Well i dont think this game will last long. People bombing it and very little support on patreon are a letal combination for a dev

not "bombing" - just being brutally honest.
Honest feedback is the best way for every developer to change things. There is no need to "dip words in honey" just to please a dev. Brown noses is all you get for that.

Right now it's fact that:
1.) engine is not the best to use for VN
2.) writing needs urgendly english proofreading
3.) Story telling overall feels kind of blunt
4.) Certain scenes are NOT avoidable (even dev announced otherwise though) - like unavoidable NTR in harem path
5.) Instead of either pleasing "harem lovers" OR INSTEAD pleasing NTR-lovers, this game is upsetting BOTH groups
6.) Last but not least: there's a lot of inconsistency within the story besides above mentioned issues.

So yeah - if there aren't some HUGE changes (which would be hard to do either way), this game will not last long.
You have to remember: the players (like myself), don't "bomb" a game on purpose - we LIKELY would see some new fresh good games over here... But there's no reason to hold back and tell the most honest way about what we think (reviews)!

 

[Hyperserver]

I will check this game on weekend. The render looks nice doh. I just don't understand why they give such a low rating on this.

I only can speak for my review:

decent renders are a must have - but that's not even the top of the iceberg.
Gameplay, the story arc, the style of writing, naming the MC (for better indentification with MC), the possibility to decide to see certain content, and much more are WAY MORE IMPORTANT than just good renders. If i want to see nice renders, i can watch nudes - i want to experience a story, hence is why this game fails so badly.

 

[Deleted member 770309]

Real shit excuse for a so called harem. And of course we have the classic annoying so called friend character that you just want to beat up with a inch of there life.

 

[Actually Autistic Gaming]

The writing contains such gems as...

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I personally prefer the "I am going to orgasm you so hard!" Line from Trisha. It is like those movies that are so bad they are good. Fails on the whole as a sexy game, more like a comedy as I can't stop laughing at the writing, though I am pretty sure that is unintentional on the writers part.

 

[EvolutionKills]

I personally prefer the "I am going to orgasm you so hard!" Line from Trisha. It is like those movies that are so bad they are good. Fails on the whole as a sexy game, more like a comedy as I can't stop laughing at the writing, though I am pretty sure that is unintentional on the writers part.

Indeed, on all fronts.

 

[Gamesstar]

Renders looks really good . I personally like the femdom scene in the game. The scene was written well. Writing and the renders were pretty well balanced in the scene. Good work.
TSODEON Will you make more femdom scenes in your future updates?

 

[zetsupetsu]

Game tags seem to imply sharing. How much sharing content is there so far?

 

[Deleted member 770309]

Man wtf is wrong with the MC Trisha is a mega hoe and so is Jasmine. The MC has really poor taste.

 

[DarkMask]

Am I missing something or does the game just start out with the MC attending a party thrown by the girl he's crushing on?

 

[Axiside]

the game is okay, keep it up dude

 

[stahalle]

is it just me or is the rating really going down with every update?

 

[Hyperserver]

is it just me or is the rating really going down with every update?

it is - and there is no wonder why

 

[stahalle]

it is - and there is no wonder why

yeah ok i see. from what i read the only good are the renders. im all for devs doing theire own thing but with a rating like this and only 2 patreons he really should think on rewrite the story from scratch and decide if he wants to go ntr or harem.

 

[HM60]

Is anyone else's MAC file not working, or is it just me?

 

[MangoMeta]

one of the devs Sakil facepalmed everything then deleted his account. guess this is dead TSODEON ?

 

[Hyperserver]

one of the devs Sakil facepalmed everything then deleted his account. guess this is dead TSODEON ?

well ... it doesn't surprise me. Honestly it's for the best that way.

When you are new to a business and want to succeed, then you will need to listen carefully about all feedback. Normally there is positive AND negative feedback. But over here there has been only nagatives so far, so he had to come up with one of 2 choices:
1.) Change things which were mentionned in ALL reviews (which could lead to success, but also leads to hard work
OR
2.) take the emergency-break and stop wasting more time into a dead project (easy way)

Overall i respect this developer and appreciate his decision for the second. Too many developers try to continue and afterwards blame the community for not supporting, instead of thinking about WHY they don't support.

 

[linkinn]

well ... it doesn't surprise me. Honestly it's for the best that way.

When you are new to a business and want to succeed, then you will need to listen carefully about all feedback. Normally there is positive AND negative feedback. But over here there has been only nagatives so far, so he had to come up with one of 2 choices:
1.) Change things which were mentionned in ALL reviews (which could lead to success, but also leads to hard work
OR
2.) take the emergency-break and stop wasting more time into a dead project (easy way)

Overall i respect this developer and appreciate his decision for the second. Too many developers try to continue and afterwards blame the community for not supporting, instead of thinking about WHY they don't support.

The only thing to respect here is the renders and coding, if they get a decent writer they could make a good game. It felt like the writer had no idea how to write outside of his comfort zone (cuck/femdom) but he still tried and turned out a mess.

 

[Snatchy eyyyyyyy]

This game does not run with a native Mac at all, there´s no .app-file in the downloads.

The only way to open it is having an older system like 10.11 and Wine installed. There the 32 Bit version
is running really fine.

So maybe you might want to remove the OS x Tag and stuff?

 

[Armensajo]

Hello guys,
how to go to setting menu?
how to save/load data?
Thx

 

[Candy Suxx]

The thing is for a game to succeed , first it needs is to create a fanbase that usually is created when the first one or two updates are out . In these two updates the dev gotta have to make sure the fact that they try and build hype around the game by providing a good startup to story and also they take into consideration all the reviews they get from the people who have tried it . Sadly in this case , the start was quite rocky as dev straight shoved the fact that the game is for NTR lovers and they don't give a fuck about the rest , hell one of the devs pretty much facepalmed all the negative comments regarding the game and his behavior This was also shown in the game's story and its dialogues. Later on when they got backlash for it , and hell even NTR lovers didn't gave two shits about the game(I think the one patron they have is pretty much one of the devs itself only) .They tried to fix the issue by talking softly and making changes but the damage was already done. So the fact that this game was gonna get abandoned was already fixated even before the last update came out. Hopefully they learn from their mistakes and just in case try to make another one know how to deal with the reviews .