HTML Completed Karen's Secret [goddamusername]

Ryahn · Dec 31, 2017

Overview:
You take the role of a man in his late twenties/early thirties, who is head-over-heels in love with Karen. After a blissful eight months together, you are ready to propose to her. One day, however, you stumble upon a secret she had kept hidden from you. Your choices will determine how the secret affects you, your perception of Karen and the state of your relationship from now on.

Updated: 24/12/2017
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Version: 1.0
OS: Linux, OSX, Windows
Language: English
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iamvqb · Dec 31, 2017

A good read, kinda feel bad that i can't find any ending where me and karen bang the girl at work, without sharing karen with other guys

morpheusahrms · Dec 31, 2017

Quite good, lot of content, even if it is impossible to avoid

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fantasianme · Dec 31, 2017

must admit i love text and hentai games where the girl(s) are very perverted or quick to become it so a game like this where you actually get to choose that you want to be just as weird as her is something i love

cant find many of those for me there are just too many where the girl is either not perverted at all and you are the one that runs around having fun or she is and your protag dont like it

goddamusername · Dec 31, 2017

iamvqb said:
A good read, kinda feel bad that i can't find any ending where me and karen bang the girl at work, without sharing karen with other guys

Ending 6 sort of has what you want.

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fantasianme · Dec 31, 2017

morpheusahrms said:
Quite good, lot of content, even if it is impossible to avoid

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true and even fewer where you can choose to like it

goddamusername · Dec 31, 2017

morpheusahrms said:
Quite good, lot of content, even if it is impossible to avoid

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You can avoid sharing her with other people (not just guys specifically) if you try for Ending 2.

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89tasker · Dec 31, 2017

Read the description... looked at the tags... got bad feeling that Karen's secret is that she is really a dude. Now hesitant to play the game...

r3ck5 · Dec 31, 2017

89tasker said:
Read the description... looked at the tags... got bad feeling that Karen's secret is that she is really a dude. Now hesitant to play the game...

Disclaimer: I haven't played the game. I'm pretty sure the secret is simply that she cheated on you multiple times (hence the cockholding and open relationship tags). Could be wrong tho.

iamvqb · Dec 31, 2017

89tasker said:
Read the description... looked at the tags... got bad feeling that Karen's secret is that she is really a dude. Now hesitant to play the game...

nah the girl is a slut before you know her though, not atm, she 100% loyal to you at the beginning of the game.

Deleted member 50069 · Dec 31, 2017

Karen xD sounds familiar to me hah

happybrother · Dec 31, 2017

It's a shame it has no pictures.
Would be better, I say.

Centrophy · Dec 31, 2017

happybrother said:
It's a shame it has no pictures.
Would be better, I say.

While I don't mind text adventures. Text adventures with no images at all is a real turn off. It's like going back to the days of the Star Trek AIFs on BBS's except more verbose. I don't really have the patience most of the time, especially in a porn game where I'm skimming through the scenes thinking "get on with it!"

Vignum · Dec 31, 2017

happybrother said:
It's a shame it has no pictures.
Would be better, I say.

Sometimes it's worse, at least for me, like when they use pornstar pictures, it just doesn't feel natural to me :FeelsBadMan:

goddamusername · Dec 31, 2017

happybrother said:
It's a shame it has no pictures.
Would be better, I say.

Unfortunately, I'd mess up drawing even a straight line. So there's no art for the game. :teary:

I did think of getting images online for the story, but it personally ruins my immersion if the pictures don't match the text properly. And some of the scenes I've described are very specific. For example, I would need an image for the scene with the sushi and have the same pornstars in images for other scenes as well, to match continuity. It was not worth the effort.

Finally I just tried to be as descriptive as possible. The lack of pictures forces me to make sure the reader can visualize exactly what I wanted. Some stories tend to... not have the best writing when they have images to fall back on.

But I can understand why the lack of art can be an issue. It's just that getting exactly the art I want is currently beyond my means.

morpheusahrms · Dec 31, 2017

goddamusername said:
Unfortunately, I'd mess up drawing even a straight line. So there's no art for the game. :teary:

I did think of getting images online for the story, but it personally ruins my immersion if the pictures don't match the text properly. And some of the scenes I've described are very specific. For example, I would need an image for the scene with the sushi and have the same pornstars in images for other scenes as well, to match continuity. It was not worth the effort.

Finally I just tried to be as descriptive as possible. The lack of pictures forces me to make sure the reader can visualize exactly what I wanted. Some stories tend to... not have the best writing when they have images to fall back on.

But I can understand why the lack of art can be an issue. It's just that getting exactly the art I want is currently beyond my means.

Understandably. Don't worry though, your text is very good and doubly so, considering the large ammount needed to make for different paths. Good work overall. If I'd been more talented myself I would even offer to do at least character pictures for it, as I really enjoyed it. Alas I am only good in drawing architecure and tech. But who knows, maybe someone else turns up with such an offer.

Other than that, it is not that bad to simply rely on the good old gpu in your head for "character renders" from time to time...keeps the imagination engine from rusting. I must admit that the quick and easy tittilation of abundant visuals is not always a good thing in my opinion.

Anyway, thanks for a good game and good luck with any new projects you might set your sights on!

Zmeu · Dec 31, 2017

Hey @goddamusername - glad you finally got around to adding it here

iamvqb · Dec 31, 2017

goddamusername said:
Unfortunately, I'd mess up drawing even a straight line. So there's no art for the game. :teary:

I did think of getting images online for the story, but it personally ruins my immersion if the pictures don't match the text properly. And some of the scenes I've described are very specific. For example, I would need an image for the scene with the sushi and have the same pornstars in images for other scenes as well, to match continuity. It was not worth the effort.

Finally I just tried to be as descriptive as possible. The lack of pictures forces me to make sure the reader can visualize exactly what I wanted. Some stories tend to... not have the best writing when they have images to fall back on.

But I can understand why the lack of art can be an issue. It's just that getting exactly the art I want is currently beyond my means.

So uhm, when's the next update

abbott · Dec 31, 2017

A refreshingly mature take on fucking. Props to ya.
Decent writing, too; while not terribly illustrative, I think it's sufficiently descriptive to faintly jump start a healthy imagination, not unlike the stirring, erotic surge of an ass slap.

What other endings are there, 'sides 4? I'd be interested in hearing about the congruency of the other paths with their respective conclusions, as opposed to the natural stream of competence within ending 4, in relation to its narrative branch.
I reckon it'd be worthwhile to challenge some of my personal favoritism in regards to the canonically convential archetypes prevalent in writing.
Cheers.

goddamusername · Dec 31, 2017

Zmeu said:
Hey @goddamusername - glad you finally got around to adding it here

You should thank @Ryahn. (S?)he was the one kind enough to put it up for me.

iamvqb said:
So uhm, when's the next update

The story's done with, I'm afraid. No more updates except for minor rewrites/edits.

abbott said:
A refreshingly mature take on fucking. Props to ya.
Decent writing, too; while not terribly illustrative, I think it's sufficiently descriptive to faintly jump start a healthy imagination, not unlike the stirring, erotic surge of an ass slap.

What other endings are there, 'sides 4? I'd be interested in hearing about the congruency of the other paths with their respective conclusions, as opposed to the natural stream of competence within ending 4, in relation to its narrative branch.
I reckon it'd be worthwhile to challenge some of my personal favoritism in regards to the canonically convential archetypes prevalent in writing.
Cheers.

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