VN Ren'Py Karlsson's Gambit [v0.8.1 Part I] [Grym Gudinna Games]

[TessSadist]

Based on the last post on Patreon, update will probably be in a couple days

I have Test Version 0.2 ready right now, but I am having trouble loading Patreon right now. If I get it on there and the tester tiers help me test it well, then I would guess 1-4 days after that at most for wider release.

 

[FroKe88]

Patreon just now works for me again

 

[TessSadist]

Patreon just now works for me again

Thanks! I was able to get the test version out!

 

[FroKe88]

Then I'm going to test it this evening

 

[TessSadist]

Just played this game i have to say the story is excellent for the world it has set into

i just wanted to ask if there is a proper maledom path where we have somewhat equal content as of femdom or its just a kinetic novel where iether one can enjoy femdom or skip it and have nothing else to enjoy. dev just make it clear whether its gonna be a equaly distributed femdom/maledom content game or us maledom players gonna feel leftout and if its equaliy distributed then whether thier be something for maledom players or not(and i hope maledom will be light/medium and enjoyable not like the femdom/extreme humiliation type thing as already in the game)
i am noy insisting to change anything just want you to make it clear what this game will be like

Now to the serious matter i have read some of the comments saying people are criticising dev of their way of presenting femdom kink in a extremeeeeme way in the game and some are compairing it to the real world and saying its normal that rich people have that much control over poor ones but i think thats not the fact. i think people cannot tolerate that much humiliation as depicted in this game (and yet its the first release hah) if they are not into submissive stuff even if they are poor/slave(not prisnors) you can force them but they are gonna get back to you somehow people are willing to die ratther then humiliated that extremely (both male and female). this game can be realistic if dev has depicted the slaves thoughts that they like to be humiliated and pleasing their mistresses but thats not the case. and also in real life we have more control over our choices then in these VNs/Games.

its just a game so i can enjoy it but if i have to campare it to real life its cringy,unnatural,and unrealistic so please stop compairing it to real life its just a work of fiction i mean almost all games in this plateform unrealistic but this is the most unrealistic of them and yet they dont compare their games to real life and here in this thread....

i am neither a sadist/dom nor masochist/sub in real life i just want to live in peace(romantic in a sexual way). but i am aggressive/brutel if someone is on my bad side i will leave all things behind just focus on that person. if someone(either male or female i am not favourable to either gender) will be that sadist/cruel to me or to someone else infront of me i am going to kill them(regardless of what will happen next ofcourse i will save my loved ones from the effects but i am not going to care about my life) and make an example of them for those who want to cause pain to others for their own pleasure against their will

i know i am aggressive but i am not sorry for that cause this is just a fatansy(not mine) and you are saying its real and normal. it can alter someones personality maybe someone is normal but after reading those comments they will turn masochists or sadists and if these are light these are enjoyable but their are chaces that they will turn extreme masochists or sadists

and last thing sorry for my engrish not my native language

Hi Rogue,

That's a lot to tackle but I would just say I would hope all games are fantasy. If people can't really separate that from reality, they probably had issues well before playing any game on any site anywhere. You sometimes hear that a violent video game for example caused say a school shooting but I tend to believe it was many more issues and variables that impacted that well before they played any game. Millions play that same game and never do anything at all, so it's hard to say that particular variable was the key one, but of course you never know.

Also, the only thing I would say about some reality based femdom is that unfortunately I have personally seen some very cruel women (I can't speak for men as much because I mostly have interacted with well off women in ways that they let loose and say things casually when alone and men would never do the same around me because that is probably men only stuff) that are well off, and some people in this world are great...and some aren't. For example, one aspect of this game later will involve a mining operation overseas. I have personal knowledge about a lot of this from life experience and know absolutely firsthand how callous some people can be, but this of course is just a porn game and not a big focus, etc. If you can't separate playing this game from reality or it bothers you at all, maybe this isn't the game for you, and that's ok. Nothing is for everyone, and it should be fun. If it's not fun, play something else, there are so many games on this and other sites.

If you have read my thread, I hope I have made it clear that I am going to have both a dom path but also sub path. However, I will have more sub tracks than one (from very mild to very brutal) and with dom I won't have as much variety. So maybe think of it as 65/35 or 70/30 ratio perhaps. I have currently 15 endings in my head, and about 9-11 are kind of sub based (it varies based on character relationships) and 4-5 are more dom based if that helps.

 

[Jstforme]

Also, the only thing I would say about some reality based femdom is that unfortunately I have personally seen some very cruel women (I can't speak for men as much because I mostly have interacted with well off women in ways that they let loose and say things casually when alone and men would never do the same around me because that is probably men only stuff) that are well off, and some people in this world are great...and some aren't.

So maybe think of it as 65/35 or 70/30 ratio perhaps. I have currently 15 endings in my head, and about 9-11 are kind of sub based (it varies based on character relationships) and 4-5 are more dom based if that helps.

My experience is the opposite...Most of my adult life has been with extremely wealthy people, and I can say first hand that Male Domination is A LOT more prominent in that spectrum of society. There are women like you described in high society of course, but in most cases, it's them trying to cope with being dominated by giving role reversal stories, where they are the ones dominating instead.
When I started this game, my first thought was this is based in the future, where social justice, me too, women are great, men are bad narrative prevails, and this twisted world is the result.
I'm a bit disappointed the male dom is so much less of the story, I wish you luck, and I'll still check it out every few releases.

 

[asehpe]

My experience is the opposite...Most of my adult life has been with extremely wealthy people, and I can say first hand that Male Domination is A LOT more prominent in that spectrum of society. There are women like you described in high society of course, but in most cases, it's them trying to cope with being dominated by giving role reversal stories, where they are the ones dominating instead.
When I started this game, my first thought was this is based in the future, where social justice, me too, women are great, men are bad narrative prevails, and this twisted world is the result.
I'm a bit disappointed the male dom is so much less of the story, I wish you luck, and I'll still check it out every few releases.

My life has been mostly with upper-middle-class people who can also be very cruel (women as much as men) and also surprisingly empathetic (sometimes the same person), so that I have a somewhat more complicated view of "domination in reality." But hey -- we're living at a time in which a rather cruel guy got to the position of President of the United States, and a bunch of cruel women (e.g., the "Karens," or the ladies going on and on about how wearing a mask is "a horrible attack on their civil rights") are becoming famous too, so it's easy to see that this exists and plays a role IRL.

Whenever a game follows a path (and it has to, you can't make a game about EVERYTHING), this means some people won't want to follow it. Maybe you like fantasy and maybe you don't, maybe you like sci-fi, realism, romanticism, character psychology, plot twists... and maybe you don't. I'm sure there are many games that will be exactly what you're looking for. Me, I'm 100% into femdom (to the extent that a game that has none of it loses all interest to me), so this game here is pretty much exactly what I love. But that's just me, it takes all kinds, etc.

 

[TessSadist]

My experience is the opposite...Most of my adult life has been with extremely wealthy people, and I can say first hand that Male Domination is A LOT more prominent in that spectrum of society. There are women like you described in high society of course, but in most cases, it's them trying to cope with being dominated by giving role reversal stories, where they are the ones dominating instead.
When I started this game, my first thought was this is based in the future, where social justice, me too, women are great, men are bad narrative prevails, and this twisted world is the result.
I'm a bit disappointed the male dom is so much less of the story, I wish you luck, and I'll still check it out every few releases.

Oh, I've definitely seen bad men too, just that I don't have that kind of access to the kind of private conversations that I have heard from well off women. I don't think they would say certain things they say casually if men - especially their often domineering husbands - were around just as much as I probably don't hear what men say casually without me around. My experience in America at least is with two specific cities, Honolulu, and Highland Park, TX. I've seen a LOT of bad behavior from men but that's more behavior versus conversation and certainly I can't write as much realistic dialogue with these kind of men as much as women I would say if you get where I am coming from with life experience. Thanks for the input!

 

[Pipo12334]

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Hi Rogue,

That's a lot to tackle but I would just say I would hope all games are fantasy. If people can't really separate that from reality, they probably had issues well before playing any game on any site anywhere. You sometimes hear that a violent video game for example caused say a school shooting but I tend to believe it was many more issues and variables that impacted that well before they played any game. Millions play that same game and never do anything at all, so it's hard to say that particular variable was the key one, but of course you never know.

Also, the only thing I would say about some reality based femdom is that unfortunately I have personally seen some very cruel women (I can't speak for men as much because I mostly have interacted with well off women in ways that they let loose and say things casually when alone and men would never do the same around me because that is probably men only stuff) that are well off, and some people in this world are great...and some aren't. For example, one aspect of this game later will involve a mining operation overseas. I have personal knowledge about a lot of this from life experience and know absolutely firsthand how callous some people can be, but this of course is just a porn game and not a big focus, etc. If you can't separate playing this game from reality or it bothers you at all, maybe this isn't the game for you, and that's ok. Nothing is for everyone, and it should be fun. If it's not fun, play something else, there are so many games on this and other sites.

If you have read my thread, I hope I have made it clear that I am going to have both a dom path but also sub path. However, I will have more sub tracks than one (from very mild to very brutal) and with dom I won't have as much variety. So maybe think of it as 65/35 or 70/30 ratio perhaps. I have currently 15 endings in my head, and about 9-11 are kind of sub based (it varies based on character relationships) and 4-5 are more dom based if that helps.

Femdom game is very rare, i hope u continue focusing on the sub path. Maledom game are just so common and can be found anywhere. Good femdom games are hard to find and yours suit my taste, stick to what youre planning Looking forward to how the story end !
Btw eta for official release ?

 

[Jgkhmhjjhn]

It's very good I really liked it
When will be the next update

 

[TessSadist]

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Femdom game is very rare, i hope u continue focusing on the sub path. Maledom game are just so common and can be found anywhere. Good femdom games are hard to find and yours suit my taste, stick to what youre planning Looking forward to how the story end !
Btw eta for official release ?

My Patrons are seeing a version 0.2a today, if you notice the first page, I am already making some tweaks in preparation (some added preview pics, other information) but want to get feedback from Patrons on possible errors/corrections (I don't really have play testers or any other help, it's kind of all me) that I might have missed before going full on public.

 

[asehpe]

My Patrons are seeing a version 0.2a today, if you notice the first page, I am already making some tweaks in preparation (some added preview pics, other information) but want to get feedback from Patrons on possible errors/corrections (I don't really have play testers or any other help, it's kind of all me) that I might have missed before going full on public.

I'm sure you can count also on the people here to look for and report any errors and/or necessary corrections. Maybe that helps to lessen the burden?

 

[Frosty2000]

Didn't notice any bugs. Just some typos. Even forced myself to go through some dom guy choices.

And btw, the update was great! Also longer than I expected. Pretty sure femdom lovers will love it.

 

[TessSadist]

Didn't notice any bugs. Just some typos. Even forced myself to go through some dom guy choices.

And btw, the update was great! Also longer than I expected. Pretty sure femdom lovers will love it.

Thanks Frosty,

I'm glad you liked it! I went through it hard today and I've caught 91 tweaks I want to make on grammar, typos, and minor dialogue edits so going through that now...but nothing will impact the choices/flags/points or anything so after this last set of changes, any further mistakes I missed will probably just be part of the err flavor of the game.

 

[TessSadist]

I'm sure you can count also on the people here to look for and report any errors and/or necessary corrections. Maybe that helps to lessen the burden?

I hope so, but I hope it's a little presentable already at that point too! I assume I might want to do one last set of tweaks after it's out everywhere, but we shall see.

 

[TessSadist]

Sorry, I can't link images directly on my sig (links keep screwing up) so trying something for prepping...I might delete this later...

 

[Ayhsel]

Sorry, I can't link images directly on my sig (links keep screwing up) so trying something for prepping...I might delete this later...

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Wow.. the last one, sis_fan, is absolutely gorgeous!

 

[UncleVT]

Sorry, I can't link images directly on my sig (links keep screwing up) so trying something for prepping...I might delete this later...

If you keep this post, I'll add a link to it in the OP.

 

[TessSadist]

If you keep this post, I'll add a link to it in the OP.

Thank you! I am going to keep them, just the sig edit for my profile didn't allow outside links I guess, but this attachment style seems to work. I haven't figured out how to link the sigs to this thread either but will...

 

[TessSadist]

Wow.. the last one, sis_fan, is absolutely gorgeous!

Thank you, she was hard to make as a character too! I think she is a combo of six different models!