VN Ren'Py Karlsson's Gambit [v0.8.2B Final] [Grym Gudinna Games]

[kinkyshin]

Kitty and Chanel are the characters I can't stand. Kitty in nearly every scene and Chanel for sub path.

She takes so many liberties in her position and acting bratty I was hoping beyond all things that Olivia would humiliate her in front of the slaves just to humble her so she would understand her position and take her job seriously. The vault scene on the sub side sticks out to me where Olivia nearly did it.

Kitty has some good ideas though. Like enslaving Junko. Or, Kane fucking everyone and becoming chairman. Also, maybe you get your wish on humbling her in front of slaves too which would be nice, she might even enjoy that lol

Chanel has big tits.

She is kind of a redundant character for roles in the story when you have Sam. What is the point of Scarlett anyway?

I think some people like girls farting. She's the main girl for that I guess.

 

[Kxca]

Also, characters like Delilah and Phoebe (inspired by her friends) rather seem like self-inserts now ( not counting the cameos of Tess herself and her boyfriend). Any criticism of the above two ( for any reason whatsoever) will not go down well. Case in point - Delilah was initially not guaranteed to survive but Anais was pushing for that. And now she suddenly is sure to survive..

 

[The_Man_With_No_Name]

Kitty has some good ideas though. Like enslaving Junko. Or, Kane fucking everyone and becoming chairman. Also, maybe you get your wish on humbling her in front of slaves too which would be nice, she might even enjoy that lol

Chanel has big tits.


I think some people like girls farting. She's the main girl for that I guess.

Fucking everyone and becoming Chairman is the point of dom route. Hardley a novel idea from Kitty.

There might be scenes where Kitty will be humbled but it won't matter since she already has with Olivia and Elena and the lesson didn't seem to stick.

I won't hold my breath for Chanel. She has rich girl plot armor and the opportunity to humble her passed without Olivia doing it despite threatening it. Her character also seemed to flip quickly from "Girl enjoying privileges without responsibility thanks to position given by Auntie." to "I am a focused operator who gets orders done." without much triggering a change. Sure that was the point to being assigned to Olivia but when did she change and why?

(I realized what I said before could be applied to both and it was a little vague. Edited it for clarity.)

 

[The_Man_With_No_Name]

Also, characters like Delilah and Phoebe (inspired by her friends) rather seem like self-inserts now ( not counting the cameos of Tess herself and her boyfriend). Any criticism of the above two ( for any reason whatsoever) will not go down well. Case in point - Delilah was initially not guaranteed to survive but Anais was pushing for that. And now she suddenly is sure to survive..

Yeah Delilah's position in the future really stuck out as something strange in the faction document released. As for Phoebe I'm very sorry to hear that Tess has a friend whose husband she wants to torture and kill. That's very unfortunate.(Does Phoebe have much of a character beyond that? )

 

[minibaer12]

Yeah Delilah's position in the future really stuck out as something strange in the faction document released. As for Phoebe I'm very sorry to hear that Tess has a friend whose husband she wants to torture and kill. That's very unfortunate.(Does Phoebe have much of a character beyond that? )

The Allessandra, Celeste, and Phoebe combo, as crappy as it may be for some, only makes sense to me in one path: the Dom/Evil path.

Ultimately, I don't care what happens or might happen later.

 

[Esti]

pure Dom patrons are just as valid and make up a fairly large portion of patrons as pure Sub patrons

I think you misunderstood me. I'm not saying that Dom patrons aren't valid or that there aren't any. It's the opposite, really. As evidenced by the very same forum we are on, crowd of Dom players and Harem enjoyers is at least somewhat bigger (and more often than not, way bigger) than that of the submissives. BUT! There's a great deal of difference between enjoying some content and paying for it, and between paying modestly and paying big time. Extreme submissive crowd tend to be in the latter category on both cases, while dominants are, generally, in the former. And I'd bet that, while there are a surprising amount of Dom players amidst Tess patreons, the highest tiers are firmly in hands of the sub crowd. Which would explain a lot.

As a mostly dom player I'm not too happy about it, but the writing, as they say, is on the wall.

 

[Mwanted]

yes. It's crazy that girls are always naked or tit out in sub paths. But in dom path they are clothed.

but you talked on sub poll images and not on previews. but it is same in game.

I saw dev reply to you, she said something about how she will feel in that situation she knows. I mean what kane is going to do now from ep9, always going to parade his dick swinging to feel he is dom.

So she replied and then they banned me? Oh well..
Thanks for the info anyway.

 

[akki_sky]

Fucking everyone and becoming Chairman is the point of dom route. Hardley a novel idea from Kitty.

That's what i also thought about dom path that we will at least get to have sex with every board member. but dev is not giving us that from what i understand till now.

In sub path most basic thing subs has to do is lick feet or grovel as they say. but when kane meets his W2 pod, he don't even get greeting like that. Then next thing everytime is used is toungue chair or face sitting which is kane not going to get. Then most common for sub is constant humiliation, dom kane never did that. Then sub gets body shock while giving oral, dom kane has used shock stick but don't use body shock. Then subs have to move crawling, but dom kane never did that to others. Then s class slave he won from Tess was also walking alongside him and all his pod girls too. I don't know what else is common on sub path but this is what so far i'm aware of. how can this will be fair for dom players.

After playing first time, i thought this will be game i will pay for. I can't afford to support games continuosly but i paid for couple of games when there update is dropped and was going to do same for kg when update is available. but after seeing difference between sub and dom paths, i realized dom kane is not going to get same love as sub paths. evil path is also canceled. I mean dom evil path was mild compared to all the stuff they do on sub path. So now after reading about dev attitude, I don't have any hope for dom path. So my interest in game is going now.

 

[akki_sky]

So she replied and then they banned me? Oh well..
Thanks for the info anyway.

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[Maviarab]

I wouldn't say those were all minor criticisms. People were bashing her pretty hard.

People can say whatever the fuck they like away from her channels. This is a private site she has no control over and more importantly, in her own words, doesn't care about. Sure seems like she cares about what is said here, the site that gained her all her popularity in the first place.

Give it up already will you.

 

[CollectorTivan]

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Lol hilarious, so that was the reason she banned the other player? and seems like she did it personally or at least the ban is approved by her, lmao that's actually very childish in the sense that no other dev would have given a single fuck to such a mild remark.

And btw he makes total sense, anticipation adds to the arousal.

 

[Stan5851]

People can say whatever the fuck they like away from her channels. This is a private site she has no control over and more importantly, in her own words, doesn't care about.

That's correct.

Sure seems like she cares about what is said here, the site that gained her all her popularity in the first place.

If she didn't care about what is written on this site, she wouldn't send her spies here.Remember that I was banned on her discord specifically after I wrote a critical post in this thread. So she can say whatever she wants, but the facts say otherwise - she herself or her spies continue to monitor this thread.

 

[mytest111]

So much drama over game by an amateur dev.
No, this is not a representation of your personal femdom/maledom/bdsm/domination/whatever fantasy.
Actually it doesn't even fit any of the above.
No, the dev doesn't have to listen to you.
Yes, hers and her bootlickers behavior is childish.
No, she's not a real Dominatrix.
Its just a game. Play it the way you want and enjoy. Or don't, nobody cares.

 

[Cybershot007]

So much drama over game by an amateur dev.
No, this is not a representation of your personal femdom/maledom/bdsm/domination/whatever fantasy.
Actually it doesn't even fit any of the above.
No, the dev doesn't have to listen to you.
Yes, hers and her bootlickers behavior is childish.
No, she's not a real Dominatrix.
Its just a game. Play it the way you want and enjoy. Or don't, nobody cares.

Thanks, but we'll decide what we do and what we talk about. You can keep your passive-aggressive tone to yourself, it doesn't work here.

 

[Silver_Crow117]

I think you misunderstood me. I'm not saying that Dom patrons aren't valid or that there aren't any. It's the opposite, really. As evidenced by the very same forum we are on, crowd of Dom players and Harem enjoyers is at least somewhat bigger (and more often than not, way bigger) than that of the submissives. BUT! There's a great deal of difference between enjoying some content and paying for it, and between paying modestly and paying big time. Extreme submissive crowd tend to be in the latter category on both cases, while dominants are, generally, in the former. And I'd bet that, while there are a surprising amount of Dom players amidst Tess patreons, the highest tiers are firmly in hands of the sub crowd. Which would explain a lot.

As a mostly dom player I'm not too happy about it, but the writing, as they say, is on the wall.

Yeah there a decent amount of players for each dom and sub, so who truly knows the percentages… I do know tho that most sub players don’t talk on this forum at all… it’s just primarily me for what reason who knows but it’ll be interesting to see how things will develop…

 

[HiHaHo]

Thanks, but we'll decide what we do and what we talk about. You can keep your passive-aggressive tone to yourself, it doesn't work here.

you'd be surprised how it actually does work.
got you as a new guy ,telling how stuff "works" around here

 

[h4rt11]

The piece is disturbing in both tone and content — steeped in gratuitous death, and driven by a cast of delusional women who believe that repetition alone can turn fantasy into truth. It’s not just poorly written — it’s hollow and psychologically unwell.

You inserted your parents into a porn game and built this ridiculous fantasy around being some untouchable, perfect woman. How out of touch can one be?

 

[CollectorTivan]

The piece is disturbing in both tone and content — steeped in gratuitous death, and driven by a cast of delusional women who believe that repetition alone can turn fantasy into truth. It’s not just poorly written — it’s hollow and psychologically unwell.

You inserted your parents into a porn game and built this ridiculous fantasy around being some untouchable, perfect woman. How out of touch can one be?

I know she inserted herself, her friends, her fiance into the game but her parents that's a new one lol.

On a side note, at least this game got you out of your eggshell, no offense, I am just surprised. congratulations on your first message here

 

[IDONTHAVEANAME844]

ridiculous fantasy around being some untouchable, perfect woman. How out of touch can one be?

that's called "femdom" lol

 

[h4rt11]

There's a difference between a role you play and actually believing it but yeah