88stanford88

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SpaceBall1 it is your story??? :oops: ... it is wrong that you can't imagine your self in good shape;)
You are the creator the DIRECTOR
you have to use the model in your game as actors

you have to serach for an ACTOR AS old guy like you but at the maximum shape!!!

just use the models as they are ACTORS ,,, and try to make more money as possible!

Kimberly is in the best age to be fucked
good luck!
 

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No, they are pretty normal size for a human. Did you see Cody's dick? his is above average for a normal person. average size is 4-5inches. Clothing shop owner is exactly average. Sorry if it disappoints you, but it is science.
Worldwide maybe but with us western guys it's more like 6 inches. Well at least I feel like very average with what I got...

That said, nothing wrong with smaller dicks. Too many shotas with horse cocks in porn games already.
 
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Impressive work so far and thanks for the engagement! Seeing as you're interested, I'll give some unfiltered thoughts kinda free-form.

The basic concept of unwilling corruption is well defined with good character setup and a variety of situations.

The beginning of the game does feel a little more of a rapid fire of setting up corrupt intentions on every life-front imaginable for the MC. While I feel like the pacing is good overall, it actually feels like the individual plot lines were a little rushed while they all started the slow-burn simultaneously. This later leads to a very rapid escalation in various storylines, but also a bit disjointed as the MC doesn't re-hash crossed-corruption-boundaries much in cross storylines. In a somewhat refreshing departure from devs that might like to milk a bit of content, I wonder if a bit more restraint and linearity of individuals stories and their development might have been a more satisfying path.

This feeling kinda culminated with the big payoff this latest update. As others have conveyed, I did actually feel bad for the MC. The whole thing felt as rushed and unceremonious in execution as well as setup, but that might almost be a commentary on the situation itself. I mean, it had an almost PSA feel to it, a very "In Russia art watches you" sort of effect, and I think the aforementioned overall multi-path escalation exacerbated this feeling. This is not a complaint, perhaps even done intentionally, the constant assault from every angle, combined with an understated, almost half-aware disgust and revulsion at the overwhelming events that are happening is palatable enough that clearly some real story-telling is going on here.

Another aspect that feels a little rushed and a little disappointing is the level of disgusting and ugly the payoff subjects are... but not because they are disgusting and ugly, but just that this was the starting point. If we had started with less-troll-like instigators, but definitely still demeaning, I think the current level of troll could represent additional payoff down-the-line. I'm honestly not sure where we go from here on an ugliness level, and I'm not sure I want to, maybe we start adding "darker" fetish tags?; maybe we just keep corrupting more girls to start the payoff cycle over again?

But, I mean, if my biggest "complaints" are - "Dev provides multiple interesting corruption paths simultaneously but then pays them off a little too fast in regular, well-sized updates", then I only wish we could be so unlucky with every other game on this site. Overall its a very interesting game that somehow strays into a weird space of "almost too over-the-top" and "uncomfortably relatable".
 
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Impressive work so far and thanks for the engagement! Seeing as you're interested, I'll give some unfiltered thoughts kinda free-form.

The basic concept of unwilling corruption is well defined with good character setup and a variety of situations.

The beginning of the game does feel a little more of a rapid fire of setting up corrupt intentions on every life-front imaginable for the MC. While I feel like the pacing is good overall, it actually feels like the individual plot lines were a little rushed while they all started the slow-burn simultaneously. This later leads to a very rapid escalation in various storylines, but also a bit disjointed as the MC doesn't re-hash crossed-corruption-boundaries much in cross storylines. In a somewhat refreshing departure from devs that might like to milk a bit of content, I wonder if a bit more restraint and linearity of individuals stories and their development might have been a more satisfying path.

This feeling kinda culminated with the big payoff this latest update. As others have conveyed, I did actually feel bad for the MC. The whole thing felt as rushed and unceremonious in execution as well as setup, but that might almost be a commentary on the situation itself. I mean, it had an almost PSA feel to it, a very "In Russia art watches you" sort of effect, and I think the aforementioned overall multi-path escalation exacerbated this feeling. This is not a complaint, perhaps even done intentionally, the constant assault from every angle, combined with an understated, almost half-aware disgust and revulsion at the overwhelming events that are happening is palatable enough that clearly some real story-telling is going on here.

Another aspect that feels a little rushed and a little disappointing is the level of disgusting and ugly the payoff subjects are... but not because they are disgusting and ugly, but just that this was the starting point. If we had started with less-troll-like instigators, but definitely still demeaning, I think the current level of troll could represent additional payoff down-the-line. I'm honestly not sure where we go from here on an ugliness level, and I'm not sure I want to, maybe we start adding "darker" fetish tags?; maybe we just keep corrupting more girls to start the payoff cycle over again?

But, I mean, if my biggest "complaints" are - "Dev provides multiple interesting corruption paths simultaneously but then pays them off a little too fast in regular, well-sized updates", then I only wish we could be so unlucky with every other game on this site. Overall its a very interesting game that somehow strays into a weird space of "almost too over-the-top" and "uncomfortably relatable".
That’s a lot to respond to. I agree with you. My own lack of patience is partially to blame. I had and still have all these ideas and I found it hard to hold back on them and move slower, one-by-one. I am trying to rectify that. Also I felt that the sex scene was a culmination of the beginning of the story when Cody first went after her and asked her to have sex with Tyler. But I don’t feel the sex scene was rushed, imo I think it fit perfect. I’m not sure about the “unceremoniously” comment. But it’s all good. I thank you for taking the time to comment and for liking my game. I want to move slower with Hayleigh so that should help. But just because she had sex, doesn’t mean she is going to have sex again real soon. Again, thank you.
 
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I think you misunderstood me... your game is great as i said months ago!
It is just aconstruttive criticism that can help your game
I just read this as you want to see big dicks
I think games must stimulate the imagination of the much people as possible.
doing Art is not that you are cheating someone if you enlarge the size

There is no excitement in watching a small penis fucking... I would laugh and I think girls would too
if you are interested in getting your game famous... of course
players alwaus comparing one game with another one... so enlatge the size is not cheating if you do that to add more fans

you have to think of yourself like a hero... and there are other males in the game...

your game is great as i said months ago!
It is just a constructive criticism that can help your game to get more followers...

It is a game for god sake!
This is all your opinion and may not be other peoples. There are lots of games out there. When people make something they make what they want. Not what you want. This is what is wrong with the world. Everyone thinks because they want something that everyone else does too. Play the games that have what you want and stop trying to change the games that do not with contrsuctive critisism when a dev says they are making what they want. The more you try to explain what you want and think others want will not change that.. That is why there are so many different categories of games available. Everyone has their own fetish. If you want to see large dicks find a game with large dicks, if you want a harem game there are plenty of those, if you want to see a midget fucking a tiger women I am sure that is out there too. There is something for everyone and if you cannot find exactly what you want be a developer and make it. Not everything is everyones cup of tea. I wish people would just stop trying to push their own fetishes and in larger extent thoughts beliefs on others in all aspects of life.
 
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That’s a lot to respond to. I agree with you. My own lack of patience is partially to blame. I had and still have all these ideas and I found it hard to hold back on them and move slower, one-by-one. I am trying to rectify that. Also I felt that the sex scene was a culmination of the beginning of the story when Cody first went after her and asked her to have sex with Tyler. But I don’t feel the sex scene was rushed, imo I think it fit perfect. I’m not sure about the “unceremoniously” comment. But it’s all good. I thank you for taking the time to comment and for liking my game. I want to move slower with Hayleigh so that should help. But just because she had sex, doesn’t mean she is going to have sex again real soon. Again, thank you.

Thanks again, it really is great work! And I totally understand wanting to get to the point, especially if this particular genre is what gets you going and your own work is going to deliver it to you fastest. I do have to concede that I did not re-play through the game with this update, just most of the previous update and then this one (I intentionally miss the last saves for every game so I have to replay some amount to get back in the story), so that is likely where the "unceremoniously" came from, merely a reflection of my experience with this update and imperfect recollection of the previous story. =)

Looking forward to your future contributions!
 
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88stanford88

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This is all your opinion and may not be other peoples. There are lots of games out there. When people make something they make what they want. Not what you want. This is what is wrong with the world. Everyone thinks because they want something that everyone else does too.
It is not just an opinion.
I have checked the most famous games that have more than 1000 paying supporters and if you check the size of the cocks.... you will see that i'm right:cool:

I personally do not have problem in the size fetish ...and I understand that there are very ridiculous body proportions in those games
but this are not opinion
if the dev is looking for more paying supporters he had to consider all the aspects and comparing the size is a macho things ;) ...
If he does not care about success he can continue as is!
 
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No, they are pretty normal size for a human. Did you see Cody's dick? his is above average for a normal person. average size is 4-5inches. Clothing shop owner is exactly average. Sorry if it disappoints you, but it is science.
Just my feeling, it's too long but too thin. Not a big or small issue indeed. Feels odd. Never mind if it's just me.

However, they might start to feel some pleasure during the act of sex, but still be disgusted and not want to do it and not like it.
That i totally agree.
It's no fun if they start to like it.
Feeling pleasure but disgust by it is the best.
 
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hans2014frans

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My god ... aren't there any other worries as the cock size in a porn novell?
I'm a bit older, but so far satisfied with my instrument, because it also always depends on the size of the hall in which you have to play with it!
 
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giomartin95

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The update is great.
I like such a well structured and well done plot.
Kimberly's cousin Hayleigh looks very nice of her and I like the story of her and how the character was presented. I can't wait to see grandpa's face when he learns that Hayleigh has arrived and that she is in the same condition as kimberly (no home, no money, no outside help) along with the elders of the bar they will bribe and blackmail her.
Events at school will get more interesting in the game, the principal and teachers can use her to corrupt Kimberly more and maybe even integrate Vanessa.
The scene at the hospital surprised me a little. Is the nerd related to the school? A relative of the principal or teachers?
 
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giomartin95

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I don't like the idea of making the main character a slave, bdsm, sex hungry, it would ruin the game.
There are so many games of this type and from my point of view I find them boring. A good plot makes the story more pleasant and interesting to follow is like reading and watching a good Japanese manga-anime. Most of the games on the forum are all about sex, sex, sex.
The events at school where the teachers abused all the girls is horrific and disgusting, to be linear to the game the principal and the teachers can abuse female students who are in the same situation as Kimberly. Students who risk losing a scholarship to go to university or students who come from poor, infamous neighborhoods and have problems with criminal gangs.
 

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I like the way you are going with the story.. Kimberly is being forced to allow this stuff to happen... She doesn´t like it, and fights it the best way she can..
I like Hayleigh.
Not into BDSM, slave or pet training, and i personaly think it will ruin the game...
From my point of view this is a blackmailing of a young girl kinda game. Is not even corruption game...
It´s a game about everyday young or old guys craving on a beautifull girl and some of them are able to force themselves into her life (and panties) because of her fragile financial condition... I would keep it that way.

Just a piece of advice: beware of making her a slut that, at some point, will love to fuck everybody and everything... that would ruin the game, in my view... like Anna Affection... Anna started beeing naive and lovely, became blackmailed (all fine) and somewhere in the story she just fucks everybody, everywhere... and likes it...

Please don´t make Kim like that.

Suggestion:

Since Kim is at School, how about, she and other girls beeing abused/groped at school by some ugly old teacher that calls the girls to the board just to see those schoolgirl curves, sits them in his lap to explain something and, tries to touch them further evertime... they don´t like it... but.. must obey.. not because he is mean, but because he is their teacher... and can give them bad grades.. maybe sometime the teacher could call them to his home to do further teaching... always in the spirit of some implied blackmail... not really a direct blackmail..
I completely agree with this dude.
 
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