Angmir

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Another character that will be Instrumental to the plot is Kia.

She seems like totaly optional side character - but I bet she will be haunted by Sabia's Mother as neccessery component to their plans.
At first It was strange for me how main storyline was beeing locked before you do quest, now I see that she is integral to the storyline.

It seems they are trying to crossbreed Mahors with something, probably usual Anime ploy - to create Magical beeing of Godlike power and use it to become god themselfs.
 

Angmir

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Well, if it comes to that, not having seen it coming would be normal: we play one update at a time at months of distance. Unless one replays constantly the game from start to finish it's hard to keep track of minor stuff.
Yeah I just played the game in one go (over 2 days) - I guess it makes it easier for me to pick it up.
 

Mayra

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I think there is too much hints in the Jadk own dialogues to be coincident.
Like for example when we go to him ask about Catgirls raid - he admits he is the one that schedules their convoys routes, and he feels responsible that the Catgirls ambushed it !
Sly bastard is so smug he doesnt even hide it, and everyone is still sympathetic towards him.

I cant say if that was intention from the start but I sure looks like it is now.

OFC game is in development and they will no doubt modify the initial plans as they go.

So it is possible that I could guess storywriters intend right now, but it will never be confirmed in a story ;]

Devs hate to see their carefully laid plot twist plans get found out early, so if enough people get a whiff of what is going on, they can change it out of spite ;p
It happens a lot even in mainstreem movies, games and books.

IF I am right I still have to give kudos to the writer though. - He did a great job to leave the clues all over the game, but in a subtle enough way.
Most people will not see it comming, but people will not be able to tell it is deux ex machina when it is revealed.
Nicely played
What happened exactly between the original writer and the artist? They did not agree on how the story should've developed? What was the author's original intention then?
 

Angmir

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What happened exactly between the original writer and the artist? They did not agree on how the story should've developed? What was the author's original intention then?
Oh I wasnt paying attencion to that drama (Like I said - I just picked up the game 2 days ago)

Now that you mention it - I heard storywriter abandoned the project or something ?
I guess that makes the rewrite of that intended storyline a big possibility.

Shame - I didnt like it at first, but when it got going, and I noticed the hidden "Deception" in it I kind of begin to like it.

PS !

Last piece of "clarevoyance" from me.

Vehlis is obviously playing a game too. I am not sure if you will be able to eventualy steal her loyality, but for now she is working against Sabia and the Orcs.
She convinced the old Chief to go to that meating after all - again - sly biaich saying so blatantly.
I imagine she is there spying on Sabia too, but she probably didnt reveat that to Tyra yet.
 

Count_Chocula

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What's the point of making a game so complicated that it can only be played while meticulously following the developer's walkthrough? :unsure:
 
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plan C failed

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Do we know if saves are going to be compatible with future updates from now on?
Also can I cheat by increasing both Sub and Dom points without that resulting in a broken game and getting both options at times?
Thanks in advance, love the game .
 

random.person

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Do we know if saves are going to be compatible with future updates from now on?
Also can I cheat by increasing both Sub and Dom points without that resulting in a broken game and getting both options at times?
Thanks in advance, love the game .
Saves have worked for the past few releases, if I'm not mistaken.
You can increase both those with no problem. But be warned that there are a few instances in the code where the check is not for absolute value of dom or sub, but for which of those is higher.
 
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Count_Chocula

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Wait, there isn't a "developer's walkthrough".
Oh, I thought it was Hreinn games’ Patreon that was linked for the walkthrough but I was wrong. Still, I’m disappointed that the only feature this game is missing is streamlined, unmissable content.
 

random.person

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Oh, I thought it was Hreinn games’ Patreon that was linked for the walkthrough but I was wrong. Still, I’m disappointed that the only feature this game is missing is streamlined, unmissable content.
It's not that hard to get most of the content even with no walkthrough, honestly.
And being a Ren'Py game when in doubt you can always look up the code.

Besides, I suggest using the mod by John Dupont, which you can find posted by the author on this forum in its public version, that has a gallery toggle. That way you can either watch all scenes you missed or you can toggle them temporarily to read their description, thus getting an idea of how to find them in game.
 

clades

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Am I crazy in thinking that the writing in the new scenes is just atrocious? They feel so out of place compared to the old scenes, the dialogue feels incredibly modern and the descriptions feel utterly amateur.
I honestly don't really notice a difference. The writing never stood out to me as something special, other than not being as terrible as many porn games are, but if I didn't know the writers had changed, I probably never would thought that I was reading anything different.
 
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baneini

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I don't really see how you would get that invested in a story or remember characters idiosyncrasies when you play a new patch of a game you previously played 3-6 months ago.
Most people are motivated to see sexual situations, since thats the reward of playing a porn game. If a dialogue is irrelevant to that goal it's easy to ignore it.
 

random.person

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I honestly don't really notice a difference. The writing never stood out to me as something special, other than not being as terrible as many porn games are, but if I didn't know the writers had changed, I probably never would thought that I was reading anything different.
I feel some discrepancy too. It's clear that some stuff comes from a different pen, it's unavoidable.
Might take some time to get used to it.
 

Viressa

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I have all the art skills of a pre-schooler so I'm limited to writing in fanfic scenes that re-use existing assets (either in the base game or in the bonus scenes). I'd be happy to write more though if you have requests, with that limitation in mind.
 
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Calkos

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I have all the art skills of a pre-schooler so I'm limited to writing in fanfic scenes that re-use existing assets (either in the base game or in the bonus scenes). I'd be happy to write more though if you have requests, with that limitation in mind.
Viressa

It was good as it says in spite of being small and adjusting it with the hellhound scene of the bonus I think, it is maybe and I speak for some that we expected content in many updates as in NN but as the game they want to take it in a linear way and put content with time , but while we wait for good scenes or content different from the creators themselves, and until I get to that, to wait but I have to say that I get to be disappointed with certain updates of the game itself but as a fan they take the game to wherever they want, but seeing the fanfic content that you did, I got to love it, I tell myself because the creators did not do this and I say that many like or many have asked, you adjusted it so that this game is something that I liked a lot, something I do not know how to do it and it's great, it makes me think that things like the scene of Sabia works in the new bar bonus #2 with something more submission with better content are possible but that was not bad but I expected it to be more for the submission route of sluttly like what was seen in NN with Riven who was reluctant to whore, but I already went the other way but the hellhound fanfic was very good, small but with good content I would like to continue watching others so not to feel forgotten the NN with the KoD that I like as many but it is slow is the truth, and if it were possible other fanfic that you would be incredible as the one cough cough you or others with Sabia I love the submission route but that's my taste.
 

Viressa

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Here's a new version of the fanfic mod as requested by @Kerlon. Watch the old scene once, and the next time you come back you'll have a new option that leads to a bad(?) end.

These are a nice break from my usual work so if anyone else has any scene ideas they'd like to see me write, hit me up.
 
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