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This makes a lot of sense. Thanks for the reply.I'll try to answer your questions with the same criticisms I offered Nomo in their discord..
- Before delving deep into this game's development, the story should have been plotted out in advance. You can always add more side content along the way but a professionally made project at least has a plan for the completion of the main story.
- Regarding the lazy writing: The narration is weak and repetitive lacking substance. Nearly every scenario ends in the same linear way. The Dom route is almost non-existent at this point. Every 'quest' involves Sabia getting manhandled and raped, with rare options to let her take control. This also makes Sabia contradictory in nature. She's supposed to be a skilled warrior and a leader but she can't manage through simple negotiations and investigations without getting taken advantage of. Also, the dialog is weak. Other characters often speak not like characters in a medieval-style fantasy world but like modern people sometimes even using modern slang.
- As for getting the game back on track there are a few problem areas that need correcting:
1 - Return the art to the proper quality this game started with and be consistent. While you're at it, keep Sabia's body size consistent. She doesn't need to have massive tits to be sexy.
2 - Improve the narration and lay some proper clues to show that the story is on track. How is Sabia preparing for dealing with Jasmine and Lynn? When will she finally venture out of the Orc region or at least visit the shaman village? When will we finally learn what happened to the warchief?
To sum it up:
- The main story hook introduced at the beginning part of the game has largely been derailed for constant diversions that don't drive the story narration forward. The story and pacing of the game is stagnating.
- The illusion of a dom path feels unrewarding, most content is for the submissive path. (Quantity over Quality, it's not being executed well..?)
I can understand that, can you explain more what you dislike about the "rapey vibe" of the submissive path?
Noxian Nights played with those themes far more aggressively IMO.
That particular point I don't understand.