VN Others Completed Kyonyuu Onna Senshi Dogeza Saimin "Chikushou...... Atashi wa Omae no Omoidoori ni Nanka, Naranai kara na......!"[Final] [Lune]

[Beast Within]

This is a complete game from a Japanese company, I doubt Dnds is a developer of it.
Also, the tags you mentioned are all from the MC and dildos. Lesbian cause it's a slave story with MC and group sex cause... it's a slave thing
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They don't "get censored" they are. Legally, if they aren't censored, it's not legal to sale. Stupid, I know, but it's not companies do willingly.

ok cool. they removed it from the OP tag list either way.

 

[Toastedsnow]

Did you change the MC's name?! Have you read the Translator's Notes? Don't change the MC's name because it'll cause errors!

Didn't change the name, it's the default one. Also read the Translator Notes
Any other input?

 

[HOKORI SAMA]

Lo

That's still an MTL no matter how "edited" I'm not going to have this conversation will people. Those that don't know the actual language that use GPT ect aren't translators so even if the game sounds "fine" there's still going to be inconsistencies. People that are fine with machine translations can rave how they're perfectly readable all they want, it's cool I don't care but I'm not going to take their or the person that translated the work with machine tools that it's good when they don't know Japanese and are just feeding the script into a machine.

People that find GPT ect translation good is because they don't actually know Japanese.

Listen bro i have written in developer notes that I'll provide a better translation file of this game till next month.
I didn't had time coz of some urgent buisness i have to take care that's why i have write translation notes.
And as far as i am concerned i think it's
Enough for now to play this .
And also i am knew to translation so i know i did many errors.
I am translating another game of Lune and this time i guarantee that it will not be anything like this coz i am taking things slow and easy and manually editing lune by line .
Thanks for your feedback though
Also the game i am currently translating is-Kyonyuu elf oyako saimin.

 

[HOKORI SAMA]

Some scenes throw script errors, both in the main playthrough and the scene viewer. Can't read moonrune, so I have no idea what the error actually is, but the result is that the entire thing will loop back to the beginning of whatever scene to restart.
Issue is that the error will reoccur so you can't actually progress past the error point.
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Bro if someone else also gets this error
Then i think there might be something wrong with the srp file.
So I'll upload it again then you can replace that with the one you have.

 

[Protocol5T]

Bro if someone else also gets this error
Then i think there might be something wrong with the srp file.
So I'll upload it again then you can replace that with the one you have.

I got this error too.

 

[rickpool98]

Lo

Listen bro i have written in developer notes that I'll provide a better translation file of this game till next month.
I didn't had time coz of some urgent buisness i have to take care that's why i have write translation notes.
And as far as i am concerned i think it's
Enough for now to play this .
And also i am knew to translation so i know i did many errors.
I am translating another game of Lune and this time i guarantee that it will not be anything like this coz i am taking things slow and easy and manually editing lune by line .
Thanks for your feedback though
Also the game i am currently translating is-Kyonyuu elf oyako saimin.

thank you for translating these games i know you said you will be busy the whole month no rush man thank you

 

[fenrir612]

Bro if someone else also gets this error
Then i think there might be something wrong with the srp file.
So I'll upload it again then you can replace that with the one you have.

yeah half the game is unplayable with this error

 

[Zappky]

Oh very cool, I remember seeing this game a long time ago, and I wanted to play it because the red hair girl on the cover looks like an exciting design.
Thanks for the translation

 

[drache]

I love to have translations of Lune games but the translation at the current is really just a MTL with minimal editing, many sentences dont make any sense and the classic "he" "she" thing is everywhere.

If you really edit it more its fine but at the current i think the label "Fan Translation" is a little bit misleading.

 

[Doublethelewd]

Bro if someone else also gets this error
Then i think there might be something wrong with the srp file.
So I'll upload it again then you can replace that with the one you have.

same, got this error.

 

[4notherRandomGuy]

so based on comments, guess this goes in 'add to watch & don't touch for 3 months' list?
1 month for break, 1 for decensor(someone bound to get annoy at that huge censor), & another for all the bugfix/fest that come along with trying to mod stuff.

 

[John Bon Clay]

so based on comments, guess this goes in 'add to watch & don't touch for 3 months' list?
1 month for break, 1 for decensor(someone bound to get annoy at that huge censor), & another for all the bugfix/fest that come along with trying to mod stuff.

"censor" could be because it's japanese
bugs etc, people call them out but I rarely have any issues. Not here or any other game. I guess I'm just not looking for it.

I haven't played this game, it said netorare in beginning but then it got removed so I deleted it.

 

[clown48212]

where are you supposed to place the text dialogue file?

Seconding this. Does anyone know where the text dialogue file is meant to be used in installation?

 

[elliochness]

Amazing. My dream of translated Lune games isn't dead after all.

Could it be better? Sure. But I'll take it and say thank you for the effort.

 

[Blorg dog]

How do I fix this? I've changed my system local and local to japan but it still happens. I even tried to change my windows display settings to Japanese but it still did this. No idea what's causing it

 

[chaos1123]

Still has the broken loop during the VIP sex area. Deleted everything with a fresh install without renaming to SRP_2 and it's still broken. I think the SRP file is fucked.

 

[bakemongamer]

Does this have gameplay?

 

[Eland51298]

how to save game?

 

[KingRocket]

>Monster girl tag
>There's only dark elves

 

[chaos1123]

how to save game?

roll the mouse over the top of the screen, context menu says quick save, but it's for actual saves too.