SadgeGames all that's good must come to an end and I'm really glad you completed this game.
It might seem short compared to other works but it was fantastic as your first experience as a developer.
The writing is really emotional, there's no fake shit going on here. Granted, it's noticeably dark sometimes but it was to be expected when you were trying to capture your current state of mind and vent during these hard times.
Music helps a lot in that regard. The game's soundtrack just plays in the background but it's really nice and soothing, it suits the atmosphere perfectly.
Anyway, apart from the "intimate" story, the artistic aspects of the game are also fantastic. Those girls are HOT AS FUCK and all of them are sweet and interesting in their own way. Besides, I haven't played the latest update yet (I'm downloading it as I write) but you have created one of the sexiest scenes that I have seen in any game here. I'm obviously talking about the final scene on the yacht in the previous version. I repeat, one of the hottest scenes ever in any VN/game on F95.
Many devs should be ashamed thay you, a rookie, were able to create such a long, exciting scene while others just whip up a bunch of lifeless renders and call it a sex scene.
Things to improve in any future project: the game dynamics. The way we progress in the story should make the scenes feel more connected. But I know you already thought about that.
For what it's worth, just remember you're not alone in that feeling. Many of us feel trapped and it's like the year 2020 has been stolen from our lives. We are suffering on many fronts, so it's always wise to look for things that keep us going.
In your case, you did very well to start developing games. I honestly believe you're gifted for it and think you should just keep making them.
Also, mach nur so weiter! Ich freue mich wirklich darauf, ein neues Projekt von dir zu sehen.
Aber bitte, nächstes Mal ohne jede hässliche Karte
Keep it up! I'm really looking forward to a new project from you
EDIT: Typo