- Sep 10, 2019
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Like the game.. it's a wee bit vanilla but the premise and the setup is decent. What the dev now kinda needs to do is bring some conflict.. love/hate.. without having a 'game over' at the end of it. You've shown us that you can make a decent game, now show us some oh shit moments.. some cringeworthy or eurika times.. put some humor.. Give the game the flavor it deserves..
Don't get me wrong.. I'm coming back for more.... BUT you really need some of those times to start bringing in more numbers.
A girl talking about him as she takes care of herself times. 'I wish he'd pushed the door open and come in with me moments' A kiss she starts ending with a slap from her. lol MC hearing her finish thru the door as she takes care of herself.. Hell I don't know... I play these.. not write them.
Make the MC beat somebodies ass at the bar for grabbing a handful of ass.. Or the MC getting his ass beat for the same reason.. somebody grabbed her ass and he tried to be a knight in shining armor... and got his ass stomped.. She helps him home and 'rewards' him..
Get rid of the vanilla and put some Flavorflav into this ride.
Good luck!!
Edit: Really the graphics are strong.. the game idea is good.. Whip this ride like you own it..
Edit/Edit: We chatted on discord and Nymphs understands what I was saying.. Wish nothing but good things for this game. Bookmarked it and waiting for more.
Don't get me wrong.. I'm coming back for more.... BUT you really need some of those times to start bringing in more numbers.
A girl talking about him as she takes care of herself times. 'I wish he'd pushed the door open and come in with me moments' A kiss she starts ending with a slap from her. lol MC hearing her finish thru the door as she takes care of herself.. Hell I don't know... I play these.. not write them.
Make the MC beat somebodies ass at the bar for grabbing a handful of ass.. Or the MC getting his ass beat for the same reason.. somebody grabbed her ass and he tried to be a knight in shining armor... and got his ass stomped.. She helps him home and 'rewards' him..
Get rid of the vanilla and put some Flavorflav into this ride.
Good luck!!
Edit: Really the graphics are strong.. the game idea is good.. Whip this ride like you own it..
Edit/Edit: We chatted on discord and Nymphs understands what I was saying.. Wish nothing but good things for this game. Bookmarked it and waiting for more.
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