VN Ren'Py Abandoned Lawyer By Trade [v0.3] [AdultJunkie]

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AdultJunkie

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Sorry guys for the mess with the links. I accidentally removed links... Hope you enjoy the game.

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Yeah 90% of the review is spot on. That 10% is maybe missing a point of him having this unique gift/curse that he has a Pheromone disorder or rather strange that he has them at first place :)
Which version did you play?
 

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Yeah 90% of the review is spot on. That 10% is maybe missing a point of him having this unique gift/curse that he has a Pheromone disorder or rather strange that he has them at first place :)
Which version did you play?
It was 0.2

The story concept, I wasn't really having any issues with, just the issues I mentioned... I understood the backdrop/theme of the story... There were several things going in the story that didn't really always make sense why they were happening, but I chop that up to needing more in-depth story to give the reader a better sense of why some things were happening, rather then just throwing them at the reader willy-nilly... Sometimes it's the writers style, but sometimes (especially when the author's native language isn't English) it's a translation/interpretation issue... This one was a hard read for the reasons I already listed...
 
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I invite everyone to participate in the poll on my .
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Yep, the voting is almost equal so far.

Definitely making some progress in better rendering of characters. Environment will still be an issue at least until i upgrade hardware.
 

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Not played yet, but tongue piercing in the preview pic makes this an instant download
 

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Yes that was intentional. I made her imperfect so she could be more realistic not like every other character - generic.
 

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I do get what you try to do, and I like that very much. But the small shoulders make it seem unnatural to me.
 

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Yeah, I`m looking at some other pics that I rendered in this set and it looks worst on this pic. Maybe the angle and lightning.. I hate when i have to adjust model proportions just because of angle and lightning...
 

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Version 0.22 should be up on patreon site in about an hour.
I have decided that every next release will be patron only for a few days before they become free to the public.
Thank you for the support.

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AdultJunkie

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0.22 is public on my patreon site( mega links). Should be updated here as well.

In the next update I will implement money and inventory system. Also, court sessions and new character... I hope you will like it.
 
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Updated to 0.22. Will add mirrors soon.
 
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Not really my cup of tea, I was kinda turned off by the looks of the first two women you encounter. I do think that the legs/body proportions of that short-haired entity are a bit off.
 

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Thanks for the suggestions. Stay tuned for the next updates, there will be new characters and maybe you`ll find them interesting....
 
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