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Phillip: "I loved you Steph, we could have worked it out."There's no question Stephanie's story is the weakest link ... less the plot than the details. If you put any thought into the timeline (which I haven't been able to resist) it all breaks down spectacularly.
But the overall story -- Even Stephs sans her basic plot -- is strong enough (for me) to overlook that glitch in the Matrix.
Stephanie: "I know you did. But I was a young girl, scared shitless. Terrified of fucking up everything."
Wait, what???
That was only 2 years ago, if you were a young girl then, you're barely a slightly older young girl now!
also, how young of a girl were you actually? to be a federal agent who goes undercover, you almost always have to have a college degree. So she was 22 posing as 18 and now the MC is 20 and Steph is 24 and her excuse is that at 22 she was a "Young girl scared shitless"?? yeah, the details absolutely break down and fall to pieces. takes a lot of pretending or just plain disbelief to move on with Steph if you put any real thought into her explanation.