VN Ren'Py Abandoned Lexi [v0.052] [Chatterbox]

vir_cotto · Oct 28, 2018

Eerie Entity said:
Personally I could've sworn that it was a drug addiction initially, but I very well might be confusing that part with a different game, Parental Love I think it was, that MC had a cocaine addiction and all, which resulted in a divorce, then many years later he and the ex-wife rekindle their relationship, fall in love with each other all over again, which is where the story begins, haha

You are right - it was cocaine addiction. I was also confused when MC started talking about gambling and fixing a fight.
I didn't start all over again so I'm not sure was it changed or it's error on dev's part.

bluehound36 · Oct 28, 2018

PrEzi said:
Plus- I must say that I like to see the other "pregnancy" variables here... I see where it is heading ;-)

Believable story and just the right amount of girls to maintain a reasonable amount of updates that don't and hopefully won't create a blueball fest just to milk patron titties and there's a possibility of pregnancy? Hopefully the MC knocks up both the sisters and gets to ditch the gold digging wife.

Shadowlash · Oct 28, 2018

This game is great, fun relatable characters, good engaging story, and great art. Can't wait to see how it develops!

Ignazzio · Oct 28, 2018

I wonder what mfm stat means. Male-female-male would indicate some secondary males which would be cool but I still don't know why it would be in a stats. Also I hope anger won't be just a game-over point system and it leads to something.

Krull · Oct 28, 2018

Fan Sig:

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https://attachments.f95zone.com/2018/10/180884_lexi-fan.gif
https://attachments.f95zone.com/2018/10/180885_lexi-fan2.gif
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2019/11/477637_lexi_fan3.gif
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2019/11/479385_lexi_fan4.gif

Eerie Entity · Oct 28, 2018

Krull said:
Fan Sig:
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https://attachments.f95zone.com/2018/10/180884_lexi-fan.gif https://attachments.f95zone.com/2018/10/180885_lexi-fan2.gif

Excellent, great work @Krull as always, hehe, and with those I can start promoting the VN, thank you

Is there a signature of Chelsea in the works?

Krull · Oct 28, 2018

Eerie Entity said:
Excellent, great work @Krull as always, hehe, and with those I can start promoting the VN, thank you
Is there a signature of Chelsea in the works?

When is more content , not for now.

@Furuichi Imadori same for sarah, when more content.

Furuichi Imadori · Oct 28, 2018

@Krull you rock.
Can you make a fan sig of Sarah please?

repuindy · Oct 28, 2018

@Chatterbox I really like your game i will become a patreon in november but just for know, how much time do you esteem between updates? I already read you are a very busy man/girl and real life is hard sometimes, i need only a roughly estimate, at least i'll know what expect. Anyway you create some lovables characters and i don't know others think but i like hear Lexy laugh, nice touch. Looking forward for next update.

Guardra · Oct 28, 2018

please don't add a money system to this pretty great VN. As much as I like this VN I am not sure how i feel about half the changes that were made to the story. To be honest the last version was awesome to me

kshyk · Oct 28, 2018

Fantastic beginning. I have a good feeling about this one.
(Kinda remind me the story of my favourite raper a little bit - Eminem. That's a good thing! :coldsweat:x'D )
It's gonna be hard to choose the right girl in here.

Can someone show it to PTOLEMY, to show him how his Alexandra should look like?

Chatterbox, could you consider give our MC surname? (same way it was done in Acting Lessons), it could be useful in some situations..

Eerie Entity · Oct 28, 2018

kshyk said:
Fantastic beginning. I have a good feeling about this one.
(Kinda remind me the story of my favourite raper a little bit - Eminem. That's a good thing! :coldsweat:x'D )
It's gonna be hard to choose the right girl in here.

Can someone show it to PTOLEMY, to show him how his Alexandra should look like?

Chatterbox, could you consider give our MC surname? (same way it was done in Acting Lessons), it could be useful in some situations..

I agree with all that mate, except, absolutely nothing wrong with Alexandra, except that umm, well, she's playing in the wrong league, well, maybe she plays in both leagues, but I guess I'm one of the rare guys that don't particularly enjoy M/F/F nor F/F content, it does nothing for me sexually xD

ThunderRob · Oct 28, 2018

great update..this game is moving up my favs list fast and no doubt will move up the popularity rankings here fast too as word gets out that another of the AL/WTHI/M quality game has arrived!

kshyk · Oct 28, 2018

Eerie Entity said:
I agree with all that mate, except, absolutely nothing wrong with Alexandra, except that umm, well, she's playing in the wrong league, well, maybe she plays in both leagues, but I guess I'm one of the rare guys that don't particularly enjoy M/F/F nor F/F content, it does nothing for me sexually XD

In this game called Alexandra plot is simply weird. Gangsters are joke. MC is unrealistic and weird psycho. Overwhelming plot..(I guess I'm not a fan of this developer)
And Lexi? Nice characters. Good and pleasant writing. You can identify with main character (he even kinda looks like me

) Interface (stats box) could be a little bit better but that's not important.

Heisemberg · Oct 28, 2018

This game have ones of the best renders i never seen. I think it will have a great future!!!

baku.k · Oct 28, 2018

Great game !! Please don't transform this one into a drama... (Some people will understand). VN likes this one help my brain to smile a little

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Keep Going !!

xmilteach · Oct 28, 2018

Thx..

thanks for the demos · Oct 28, 2018

Great update. I didn't really think a rewrite of the backstory was necessary, but it does make us even more sympathetic to the PC, especially in his struggle to get to see little Chloe. While Laura's reactions might have been somewhat justified before, now she's just a hysteric harpy trying to keep a good man away from his daughter.

I like the addition of sound effects, laughter/giggles were cute. One-Choice-Skipping is a great idea, especially on subsequent runs. Money system: not sure it's worth the effort, because let's be honest: if we'd ever miss a scene just because of too little cash, we'll use the console. Flags might be a better way of keeping scenes mutually exclusive, it seems missing scenes is more naturally accepted if it's directly tied to a previous choice rather than to a money score. However, if this system somehow makes your work easier/quicker, then definitely go for it.

And here's my proofreading of v0.02

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Keep up the good work!

kays · Oct 28, 2018

anyone can tell me how to get that should be very early but i cant manage to get it

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SomeOldFart · Oct 28, 2018

kays said:
anyone can tell me how to get that should be very early but i cant manage to get it

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Let her keep drinking and don't choose the "Overhear" them by the pool. Or vice-versa.... One of those combo's .... I think...

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