I personally want to see that fuckin cheerleader... god damn the cheating stuff was SO hot.
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Guys, I gotta say...
You gave me a lot to think about...
If I was Jackie I'd be cursing the voices a lot right now...
On the other hand if I was Danna I'd say you are spending too much time with MC...
Alex would say you all are good guys and good guys don't do this kind of thing...
Planting ideas on my mind like that...
Thanks a lot by the way!
You gave me a lot to think about...
If I was Jackie I'd be cursing the voices a lot right now...
On the other hand if I was Danna I'd say you are spending too much time with MC...
Alex would say you all are good guys and good guys don't do this kind of thing...
Planting ideas on my mind like that...
Thanks a lot by the way!
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Olha, tá mt bonito, mas tem mt texto, pra q isso td, fiquei com tanta preguiça q passei no ctrl e perdi toda historia, as vezes menos é mais. Gosto do genero, já joguei tds q tem ai, tirando a parte do brilho no começo q me deixo puto e o tanto d texto, as modelos são bonitas, bem renderizado, mas n me agrado com tanta coisa, joga My Wife Star, The office Wife, até Dmd, texto fácil d ler, agradavel, dizem só o q importa, n enrola, isso envolve bem + o publico... Só uma crítica construtiva pq sei q é br e qro t ajudar
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Rapaz, fico até sem saber o que te dizer...
A essência do termo VN é ser text based... Não quero te entristecer, ofender ou chatear de forma alguma, mas fazer uma VN ou jogá-la só pelo fap quando a estória é boa...
Eu já postei aqui no f95 a respeito de ser muito prolixo. Ao mesmo tempo isso é uma falha e uma qualidade. E infelizmente essa é uma característica minha. Tem gente que ama o excesso descritivo de cenas e tem gente assim como você que odeia. Não importa o que eu fizer sempre vai ter alguém insatisfeito nesse aspecto.
Sendo assim prefiro não agir contra uma característica inerente minha.
Shotz, por favor não fique chateado comigo. E eu te agradeço sinceramente pelo seu feedback e sempre que possível, tento me moldar pra atender às necessidades do público que se dispõe a me dar conselhos, mas a questão do excesso de texto não vai mudar.
Grande abraço Shotz e o próximo update vai ser na rota cuck da Danna. Pelos jogos que você mencionou tenho certeza que você vai gostar muito.
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Man, I don't know what to say...
VNs are supposed to be text based... I don't wanto to upset you in any way but making a VN or playing it just to fap quen story is nice...
I already posted here on F95 about being wordy. This is a quality and a flaw at the same time. Some people love it, some hate it. It doesn't matter what I do in that regard, there will always be people complaining.
That being said I'll just stick with the wordy thing.
I thank you sincerelly for your feedback and know I always try to accomodate the player's needs, but the wordy thing is here to stay.
The next update will be on Danna's cuck route. From the games you mentioned I am sure you will like it very much.
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How about adding some english translations, hhm? If you want to talk to each other privately in your native language why not use DM?
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Yes, there is. And while it was instrumental in gathering what you replied to shotzpro (as I sadly only know very little Portuguese) and ultimately led to me 'liking' your post, there is also 1.5 of the general rules asking for any non-English post to be accompanied by an appropriate translation (which reasonably shifts the work of translating it from the many shoulders of the readers to those of the poster).
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I tried to be nice and suggest a way to talk to eachother in your own language instead of being an asshole and just reporting the posts because you break a rule.
Instead it seems you like to be the asshole in this instance, good job
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I don't think you meant to come off as a jerk. We still love you, I think.
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No worries I am an asshole/jerk regulary, it takes one to know one I guess
Whoa dude , this game surprised me.I didn;t expect a story at all Let alone engaging one. Last sex scene kinda dragged and how MCs intro was I didn't expect someone happy . Anyway but loved the intro chapter and Loved the Jackie character. Hope you keep focusing on the story. And I guess better face models. But It's good attempt for first game.
I think I can help you with the BR-PT translation, send me a PM (cause I may be a little stupid and didn't found a way to PM you)
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Very interesting and good looking game!
Thank goodness there isn't a super young MC, that along got me interested.
Girls look good, and the setting looks gritty and great, and able to avoid NTR makes for a big win for me.
Thanks and keep up the good work!
Thank goodness there isn't a super young MC, that along got me interested.
Girls look good, and the setting looks gritty and great, and able to avoid NTR makes for a big win for me.
Thanks and keep up the good work!
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After the prologue you have 3 paths to choose for Danna(the blonde in MC bed) Love, Lust, or NTR. The NTR path part will be in the next update.
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