As I'm sure you are fully aware of there is a lot that needs fixing. I'm personally ok with mixed styles as long as characters don't start to look different. But In all honesty, the Ciri scene, is out of place and makes no sense. What is going on with what is either the mom or aunt, she's referred to as both and it's confusing, makes no sense, and is also out of place with what appears to be the main part of the game. I personally say take out the mom and Ciri scenes since they provide no substance to what's actually going on and keep it linear to the life is strange parody. I do like the idea of the focus being around life is strange, there is plenty of characters and lots of content you can work with that and just start it off as he's about to go watch porn and then gets sucked it just like you have it. Also narratively everything moves way to fast, and there are no explanations, or even much questioning going on. A simple " Where am I", " who are you, or "what's going on" and branching off the from would help a lot. And then you can lead it too Rachel, max and Chloe having to help you figure out how you got there, which can propel the story forward into the drama of the story. LiS is a very story driven game, and I think you should keep that theme going. Also when doing character writing think things like " Would Chloe say that?". Also maybe an option make a post asking someone on here if they are willing to help with the writing or at least correcting the writing so it makes more sense. The dynamic camera isn't horrible, but when it is repeating the same scene within 1-2 seconds and is filled with tons of movement its off putting. Most dev's tend to do the camera movement then have it stay in the last position or on the focal point of the shot, so like when the mom/aunt walked in it went from dick, to computer to door, back to dick then loop, with the loop happening very quickly. Instead just go from dick to computer to door and stop at door cause that's where the newest focal point is since something is happening there. Also if you can fix Chloe's teeth, make them a bit closer and whiter, the look dirty, tiny and spaced looks odd in my opinion. You have a good idea here, just isn't layed out too well yet. I know at the end of the day its just an adult game, but a poorly written story can throw someone off of playing, and it doesn't have to be great, it can be cliché just have decent writing. The ones that have poor or almost 0 writing, are always just go get raped repeatedly by monsters in a dungeon until you beat all floors in the dungeons, and even many of those have some pretty good writing
Sorry for the paragraph, but I would like to see this project grow, and become something good! I hope I provided some insight, and best of luck if you keep up development on this project!