- Aug 22, 2016
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In order to avoid creating more posts about this topic, I'll just mention here what I've found:
I'm not sure if this was intentional or not (it might be a nickname), but at some point, before Simone walks out of the apartment, she says: Are you going to walk me out "Mare"? (it might be a nickname)
While the MC is taking a bath, there is a sentence which certainly needs to be fixed.
"You're don't feel qualified to comment on her talent, but she's certainly enthusiastic."
While she's hugging you after reading you Ana Karenina, the narrator says:
You just sit there for a few minutes with her not seeming to not want to let go.
(which also needs to be fixed)
I'm not sure if this was intentional or not (it might be a nickname), but at some point, before Simone walks out of the apartment, she says: Are you going to walk me out "Mare"? (it might be a nickname)
While the MC is taking a bath, there is a sentence which certainly needs to be fixed.
"You're don't feel qualified to comment on her talent, but she's certainly enthusiastic."
While she's hugging you after reading you Ana Karenina, the narrator says:
You just sit there for a few minutes with her not seeming to not want to let go.
(which also needs to be fixed)
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