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Computer and database Problems held us back a bit we weren't running full tilt like we do most of the time,
Yeah i Agree.I Like this game and Story so far.Take your Time Guys and make it a Great game
it ends just after that when the girls jump in the pool, however i would save at that point.
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I couldn't even get to that. After the dialog I mentioned, the next dialog was blank but same image.
You have to type in a name in the empty dialog box. Then you can progress.
- Jun 29, 2017
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I loved her talking about wanting a kid. WAY too short for an update though, or maybe just feels that way since I've been looking forward to it.
- Nov 15, 2017
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And girls....but thanks.Here you go boys
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@gamersglory @lifewithmary456 there were a few things I noticed.
I thought his skin had changed to leather too. The trousers he was wearing in that scene were ones I don't remember seeing before.
At the same time there were some weird lighting effects on her boobs, most noticeably -
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66.webp & 70.webp
Finally there is the choice 'Pull your arm' (odd language, but hey) or 'Keep going'.
Keep going, understandably, loses you 2 points, changes from 20 to 18 for me.
Pull your arm <back>, loses no points, however, 2 dialogues later when she thanks you, my points go to zero.
Overall it felt a little shorter than the previous update, it also felt like a different writer (I know you've said Ptolomy is still writing it). Previously the MC's dialogue has felt like it was written by someone with an understanding of aspergers. This update felt like it was written by someone whose only knowledge came from previous updates, at times it was almost robotic.
I hope the choice at the pool is made clear next update so we don't have to trail back too far if we've picked a bad one. And is there any significance to the name you put as your previous GF other than maybe a little catharsis?
Aspe myself lol. Lighting can be a bit tricky when using Iray to render. You noticed the bad proofreading on my part. As are normal Proofreader went MIA. So as one of the native English speakers I stepped up. I have never been good at grammar. But the good news is we should have a better Proofreader next release.
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Sorry, you want me to start on the grammar?
Seriously though, my comment about the writing was about how it felt to me, so no more than an opinion really. If you want help proofreading, give me a shout and if my schedule works, I'll help out.
My biggest concern was losing all my points and how this may affect others (I'm happy to cheat) in the future.
I'd add a few more tease CG's between cuddling in bed and her suddenly sitting up with the top off. Too many games have instant nudity where an extra transitionary CG or two (eg. the top is halfway off, exposing underboob etc.) could result in a much more fluid and rewarding end.
Altogether a nice albeit short update
Altogether a nice albeit short update
- May 18, 2018
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Hi
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Heres my suggestion:
I think one of the things I really things that could be a good idea, would be to allow play after the story finishes and just set things to loop and up to repeat ok so it might be a bit repetative but some things can work rather nicely in that way... Also then the story can continue even if it does not progress past the current level of development.
Also the Random event factor of doing things unexpectedly can be good thing as well, in our case maybe Mary is the one suggesting the random events, Still can be very enjoyable...
Let me know what your thoughts are on the matter, Please.
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That one's been wrangled before, from the intro. The point no one made is that in speech, we don't usually say "could have," we more often say "could've"--and the contraction does sound more like "could of" than "could have." I would like to see the correction myself, though.
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I hope it's brought up again. Maybe we can do something to help her achieve this.
The game is reporting DirectX 12 as out of date, windowed fullscreen is not available. Save thumbnails are off colour, and stretched out in B/W in fullscreen mode.
