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I don't think sex was necessary, but I agree I wanted more alone time with Denise.I felt myself wishing the lesbian sex scenes would end to get back to the father and daughters bonding moments even the ones without any kind of sex which left me feeling "Meh" with this chapter.
Yeah I understand that. Hopefully the next chapter will allow us to feel more involved than just a bystander that this chapter made us feel.Subjective Opinions Warning:
I don't think sex was necessary, but I agree I wanted more alone time with Denise.
I did really enjoy this Chapter though. Incredibly well crafted. But I do think it would have been more satisfying if there had been more contact initiated by the MC with the wards. The make-out scene was very nice, but it was short, and I think the Chapter would have felt more robust if it had ended with a Home Coming. Complete with a coffee from Denise.
That being said, many people might disagree, for good reasons. Just my humble opinion.
The likelihood of siblings diddle each other is far greater than any of them do their father. Story telling is like brick laying, one stone at a time. The phase of this game is just right for the story it tell.I dislike how the D's are basically having full blown sex with each other but we are tip toeing with F....
I tend to agree.Yeah I understand that. Hopefully the next chapter will allow us to feel more involved than just a bystander that this chapter made us feel.
this is especially ironic since you apparently like "my new family"Dialogue of nothing is not a dialogue. Good dialogue is good but this is not. There is nothing. Why did he make this update? Too much pressure to produce? Many thought it was abandoned. Well with updates like this it might well have been. Dick insertion is not required but a good story is. This was a terrible siding and can we get back to the main line.
Yeah, I know that the chapter is about Macy. Sadly at least for me the entire chapter was a big long turnoff because of that lesbian heavy stuff and it definitely colored the only foreplay that involved the main character to being not as enjoyable as it would of been.I tend to agree.
This is Chapter about Marcy, so the focus is on the girls. Might be why you felt left out.
I'm Team DeniseYou don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.so I'm hoping the next Chapter is Denise focused.