THanks to you and Larry for the feedback. Very much appreciated.
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i hope u stick with the bibltheme from the museum exihibit,so we get our "wards" pregnant ,maybe stick with brooke for the new job so that the life for them turn better larger home or like in covid times so often homeoffice...,or macy get the idea from her sister that she like to share so brooke maybe get to be a part of the family
im really suprised to see some more or less realistic chars not the mostly used shining barbie dolls (ok they look good...),the eyes sometimes in the kissing look really big a bit animelike,and yeah im really happy that so far NO NTR is showing since im not a fan of this i can live with cuckqueen's but no NTR
im really suprised to see some more or less realistic chars not the mostly used shining barbie dolls (ok they look good...),the eyes sometimes in the kissing look really big a bit animelike,and yeah im really happy that so far NO NTR is showing since im not a fan of this i can live with cuckqueen's but no NTR
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I am pretty sure there will never be any NTR in this game. But i kinda like the idea with brooke moving in with them. But as the story goes so far i don't see this happening in any way atm. Could be wrong as well as i don't know where the story will take us.
Correction i DO know where the story is gonna take us. To the glorious Venus hills of those two. Will have my base camp near the thighs and prepare myself for the mounting of the hills.
So I've commented that the quality of writing here is exceptional. Please allow me to provide an example. So perfect that I damn near pissed myself. The line is the elder sister speaking about her manipulative younger sister. "I'm beginning to wonder if there is a connection between being short and a vicious little dictator."
To all the wannabe Napoleons out there, you've just been tagged and bagged.
Took me several minutes to break out of the game and post this and I'm still laughing my ass off. Kudos to the writer!
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So as we get to know the characters and they develop separate personalities the writer(s) have the opportunity to express those personalities in dialog.. This means that usually they have to build identities of the character before they can start turning phrases to differentiate them selves from a cookie cutter game blob. So if you have quality writing as the game develops great lines become more common and just "appear" as if they are perfectly natural. The youger sister to the older "Well at least I don't look like I went on a field trip to the local newspaper and fell into the printing press by accident".
NR: Damn man, it's not just a few one liners here and there, the lines fully enhance the personalities that you've created for these characters. Writing doesn't get much better than this.
To all the wannabe Napoleons out there, you've just been tagged and bagged.
Took me several minutes to break out of the game and post this and I'm still laughing my ass off. Kudos to the writer!
Edit:
So as we get to know the characters and they develop separate personalities the writer(s) have the opportunity to express those personalities in dialog.. This means that usually they have to build identities of the character before they can start turning phrases to differentiate them selves from a cookie cutter game blob. So if you have quality writing as the game develops great lines become more common and just "appear" as if they are perfectly natural. The youger sister to the older "Well at least I don't look like I went on a field trip to the local newspaper and fell into the printing press by accident".
NR: Damn man, it's not just a few one liners here and there, the lines fully enhance the personalities that you've created for these characters. Writing doesn't get much better than this.
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Two pictures of said lovely lady and no one has seen fit to provide us with a nameMh - I love this lady!
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It's because it's impossible to get her name ... but there's more of her in the
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! Two pictures of said lovely lady and no one has seen fit to provide us with a name
I've gotta say that Macy is a great character. When games have an "angry" character like her, it must be difficult to get it right but naughtyroad nailed it.
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The main character don't have a clue why Macy is angry at him at the begin of the game, but the player know why. This avoid Macy angriness from being annoying to the player, in my opinion.
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I came her to cum and stayed for the writting...
I'm confused...
I'm confused...
Thanks, added to the encrypted bookmarks folder.It's because it's impossible to get her name ... but there's more of her in theYou must be registered to see the links!
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is already coming but not arrived yet
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no need to ask and to wait for nice or less nice replies - if there is no update news from the dev (and usually it is better to not give any eta-s), try and check the op, see when was the last/main update, check when was the first release/first update, check how many updates it has so far, and calculate a rough estimate for yourself (be sure to add a few weeks to each update as it comes).what a nice reply
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I highly disagree. It should come out when it is done. So naughty should take all the time he needs. I want my masterpiece in top shape
It is the average time for updates. Plus a week.I highly disagree. It should come out when it is done. So naughty should take all the time he needs. I want my masterpiece in top shape
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Since there will never be a date given (for prudent reasons), its best to keep mindful of the progress indicator in their Discord over time:
There is still a ways to go and the extra scribbles indicate additional/unplanned efforts.
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That's gotta be one the most cryptic progress indicators ever. Like you think you get that they fill in sequentially but then you notice a sprite towards the end getting filled up... before sprites of her closer to the start get filled in and you're back to questioning just how to interpret it. lol
Then you have the various non sprite related images at the bottom and you have to wonder what a cargo ship has to do with anything. Then you finally magnify the image and notice the writing says 1 face = 1 scene but not specifically that character and you go "Oh!" only to look back up and now wonder why some have wrenches on them but others don't...