General comments:
For the most part, I love this game. It's a little linear, but there's enough choice for different outcomes on many interactions. The dialogue is sometimes very funny and her relationship with Nicole hilarious.
Some misspellings and odd word choices:
In the initial elevator scene with Mike, it's "weather" not "whether" when talking about how sunny or cold it is. And you would "introduce" herself to him when you give him her name not meet him. She meets/met him when she first walked up to him at the elevator. Probably a translation issue if you're not a native English speaker.
Some spelling errors during the pool scene with Nicole. Also, talking about her "haircut" was really confusing. It wasn't until later that I realized she had been referring to "trimming her Bush" or "styling her pubic hair" or "shaving her pussy." There's a lot of aphorisms you could use but the ones used in the scene are more commonly used to refer to styling the hair on her head.
As for gameplay:
I thought it was unfortunate that the only real "cheating" you are allowed to partake in early on is with Fred. The guy's presented as a real creep with a very punchable face. I would have preferred she have "cheating" opportunities with other men and it's definitely possible to have her cheat with the guy at the bar after getting drunk, or randomly run into some other male character she knows. There could be scenes after working at the bar where she gets drunk again and has sex with someone. I just wish there were other corruption paths that involve similar kinds of cheating just not with Fred.
There also appears to be a lot of content that is only available if you have sex with the disgusting creep of a Father-in-Law. And according to the walk-through, you miss a lot of corruption potential and many cut-scenes that are not available to her and not really contingent on her cheating with Fred. By avoiding him and kicking him out of the basement, you're denied many of these other opportunities in addition to the corruption you get from cheating with Fred. For instance, one such lost opportunity is the Nick/College girls interaction. If he chats them up in the park, the cut-scenes with him chatting with the girls online and her discovering his online activities only appears to be available if you're cheating with Fred.
Why is it not possible for her to randomly stumble across his online activities after the park scene? I think it's unfortunate that you're denied such scenes just because you give the cold shoulder to Fred. It's also kinda hypocritical for her to get upset when she's already cheating on him. The outrage would seem more realistic if she hadn't really cheated before then and did run across his online activities, providing her a with a motive to cheat too. I get that some cheaters have double standards. It's just kind of inconsistent with her personality up to that point.
You don't really get access to the metro until later for no good reason. I just accidentally stumbled into it near the end of the current update, but when I tried in subsequent walk-throughs you aren't allowed to access it until later and even then you don't really have any indication that it is a metro, nor when you can access it. This also follows on with the general problem with the maps. Not a lot is clearly marked. Granted Nicole's house won't have a sign on it, but the gym, the library, the boutique, the bar, etc would all normally have signs associated with those places of business. It sometimes makes it difficult to find things.
Anyway, I usually only provide such feedback for games I think are good and have real potential.
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