I have to ask, am I missing something on Day 16? I'm currently doing two different play throughs: One loving wife, One dirty. On my dirty run through when I get to Day 16 and watch that whole sequence, Lily takes John upstairs where they run into Fred. She gives Fred some excuse and eventually he tries to blackmail her into changing their deal. Later that night she thinks Fred is trying to blackmail her again, resulting in her becoming a whore. But what I'm confused about is, what exactly is Fred trying to blackmail her with and why would she even consider "Obey his demand"? She didn't do anything with John. Worst case, if Fred went to Nick and explained what he saw, all that Nick would learn is that his friend John is a pervert who ejaculated on Lily while she slept. They might stop being friends. Or Nick might be mad but ultimately forgive his drunk friend. But either way, that doesn't hurt Lily. It's not her fault that John is a pervert. It's certainly not enough for her to give up the control she has over Fred at this point in the story. And definitely not enough for her to prostitute herself that night. So, is there a scene that I missed or something that would explain why Lily would feel she had to hide something between her and John from Nick? If not, I think the story needs something during that Day 16 morning event to make Lily feel guilty. For instance, Lily slightly wakes up while John is touching her. She assumes it's Nick (she still mostly asleep and doesn't look) so she tells him to to have sex with her, but in a generic way (like "baby, fill me" or something.... just don't expressly say Nick's name). And drunk John follows her instructions. After which she falls back asleep and John passes out. Then in the morning, Lily wakes up, realizes she's in bed with John instead of Nick, realizes it was John she had sex with, and freaks out. At least this way, when she runs into Fred, there's actually something he can blackmail her with.
Also, the final library scene on the Dirty path doesn't make much sense to me. Just because she is a "dirty whore", why would she screw the high school kid while he still held blackmail material against her? She should force him to delete the material because even considering his sob story. And if she chooses not to screw the kid, why would she get "loving wife" points for that? Not screwing him doesn't have anything to do with whether she is a good wife or not. My opinion is, have her start off with the phone threat. Then open the door with the strap on and take the selfies. After that, she gets the kid to walk her through erasing the files from his computer and the cloud. While she's erasing the files, he could be giving her his sob story about being a virgin and maybe being gay. Once she's destroyed the blackmail material, only then give the option to either "Show him the path" or "Mind your own business". And even then, if she walks away, she shouldn't get any loving wife points because, again, at this point in the story she wouldn't be making that decision because she loves Nick.
Also, I think I noticed an issue with 1.6 on the loving wife path. On day 33 after going to work and working in the garden, Lily goes to take a bath. During that scene, Fred comes into the bathroom, eventually gets into the tub with Lily and ultimately tries to have sex with her. But on the loving wife path, Lily has never had sex with Fred. So why would Fred come into the bathroom in the first place, let alone try getting into the tub with her? And why wouldn't Lily be screaming her head off, trying to get Fred to leave? And, of course, the biggest question. Why would you get the "Put it in" option on this path? Don't get me wrong. I think the scene is pretty great when you're on the dirty path. I just think something is missing in the code when you're on the Loving Wife path. Fred should never enter the room. Boring, but most of the loving wife path is fairly boring.
I also kind of wish Nick would see something slightly different depending on whether he checks the bathroom or not. Like, if he heads straight into Fred's room, Lily and Fred are still having sex in the tub when Nick removes the painting. Lily decides she's not enjoying it so she tells Fred to get off, and she gets out of the tub. Then the rest of the scene plays out.
Finally, I'd really love it if there were more scenes between Nick and Briana. Just so we have more reasons to dislike Nick. Of course, I also think we shouldn't be given an option for Nick to have his date with Briana. That should happen no matter what because even if Lily is on the loving wife path, Nick is still a cheater.