i just started game. it looks very nice and i'm looking forward to see development.
here are some tech details i find that dev need to fix:
- you can't rollback text. so pressing space twice by mistake and skiped text is lost. back function is standard at renpy games and should be used here too.
- fonts: should be larger and maybe some other type. i have to force my eyes to read text and still have difficulties in guessing some letters (maybe use the ame font used on lily's pc when she looks for job and hoavy town history)
optional:
- english is ok, but professional proofreader from native english speaker could make it much better (grammar, spelling...)