Ok time for review 2 since the game has changed to renpy.
Vast improvement. That said some major issues. The first is the affection grind. 29 days of sitting in a house,on the couch,shower,or in bed to do ANYTHING with the woman who is totally taking care of our every need. Why? Just why?
See the twins finally(after getting a stupid grind done with our new friend and fingered twice). "I must be a mascocist because I feel like every time I hit skip I am flogging myself with a whip tipped with glass"
Back to grinding(whip)...oh a random check of the quest guide...apparently I can get a job now(no idea how long that was possible before day 30,but I had checked the quest guide before). Great apply for a job...WTF! Seriously 1 hour every few days cleaning a pool for $10.00? OMG kill the MC alread....we press on(whip).
Job...twins(they invite me back after fingering me but alas,the dev does not think we have any reason to go back)...suppose I should take this paper back to press my case(at the right time)...wait a few days and see what happens(why do I smell like chlorine,and fk am I hungry)....moving on.
Well now that I have found out how the computer actually works(they after all do it differently on other planets) I have an email.
A visit to the womans home(and a now jealous GF) she can not help me,but knows someone who may be able to.
40fk days on this shithole planet most stuck in this house hitting skip(flog) because...well not much else to do.
Lets see about another job...great 8 hours a week as a maid...but wow $12.00 an hour this will solve all our problems!
Pressing on(whips self a few times for good measure)...though I think I cut off an ear or appendage at this point.
New job(get my ass out of bed for it to...early). Sigh,no morning sex for me today.
Oh,I can still apply for other jobs great! Apply apply...not available. Sigh.
Next part I believe was a glitch. Seems I lost my maid job? Was this due to me appling for other jobs...no clue,but seems I lost my job(whip,flog,bashes head against almost the only walls I ever see).
Waiting on an email from "helper" still stuck in the house 99.9% of the time,but hey I can go clean a pool for 2 times a week for two hours total and earn $20.00 dollars...life is grand after 43 days on this rock.
Waits for someone to do something...anything interesting before my soul rots in purgator on this very very drawn out trip to either heaven or hell.
Oh yea that was just what I needed. Got that off my chest.
Now the renders are good,and I usually listen to music so lack of any is not a problem for me. The story well it is new and could develop into something entertaining. What the dev needs to do is cut the bullshit grind by at least 90%! Everything I have done thus far could have been easily done in week 1 and at most 2 weeks. Then you have the start of a fun game,right now it is painful to even play. You will hit skip more than any other button by far,and are locked looking at the same apartment scene for the vast majority of your stay in purgatory. Now it is up to you dev.
In short after a loooong and needless grind a few things happen in the game. You develop a GF,get her to finger you(and eventually around 1000 affection oral each other),and of course get fingered by a couple alien females. Plot wise you find out someone killed your dad and they are powerful enough to hide it well,even making it so neither you nor he ever existed. Along the way you figure out the planet sucks and you rarely leave your GF's apartment for any reason.Grind,grind,grind.....whip,grind........why just fking why?
V2.1
