JLP603

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How do we meet the rainbow colored school girl in the previews?

Edit: found it. Its in the jerk off to porn choice

Also liking the game so far good graphics, likeable mc, no engrish. Hope to see more updates!
 
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Kinky Bully

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''text based'' ?
Idk why it is tagged text-based, this game is not text-based at all.
It has decent renders and it's of a decent amount with a good story, sure for some still pictures there are quite a few texts but this is definitely not text-based. Although it is quite short though.
 

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Ok, So I have played the game. It was short but, I am liking what I see. This game is about becoming a winner from a loser. And I kinda like the MC, a bit blank but he is a decent person.

Firstly, the renders. They are very good and well done.

Secondly, the story. It's not a very over-the-top story, it's just about you becoming someone better than a spoiled brat. It is a simple story, and the writing is very decent. There are some minor issues in the dialogues though.

Now, the models. Mikela looks kinda good, but Savannah looks like a skeleton. The nerdy girl looks like an average nerd. Anyways, the models need work, unfortunately. They look creepy for the facial part.

Now, the bigger issue. The sex scenes need more camera angles and a few more positions. They are quite short.

Overall, not a bad game. But I wouldn't call it perfect. One more thing to add. The MC has a mother and sister. But the game doesn't swing towards an incestual relationship. But I like it this way.
 

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Ok, So I have played the game. It was short but, I am liking what I see. This game is about becoming a winner from a loser. And I kinda like the MC, a bit blank but he is a decent person.

Firstly, the renders. They are very good and well done.

Secondly, the story. It's not a very over-the-top story, it's just about you becoming someone better than a spoiled brat. It is a simple story, and the writing is very decent. There are some minor issues in the dialogues though.

Now, the models. Mikela looks kinda good, but Savannah looks like a skeleton. The nerdy girl looks like an average nerd. Anyways, the models need work, unfortunately. They look creepy for the facial part.

Now, the bigger issue. The sex scenes need more camera angles and a few more positions. They are quite short.

Overall, not a bad game. But I wouldn't call it perfect. One more thing to add. The MC has a mother and sister. But the game doesn't swing towards an incestual relationship. But I like it this way.
Thank you for playing.
If it isn't too much to ask, could you elaborate on what you meant by minor issues in dialogue? Do you mean grammar or pacing?
And sorry about text-based. I thought since it's read by the player it would be there. I'll take it off.
 

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Thank you for playing.
If it isn't too much to ask, could you elaborate on what you meant by minor issues in dialogue? Do you mean grammar or pacing?
And sorry about text-based. I thought since it's read by the player it would be there. I'll take it off.
Here is one such example. I am not sure if there are any more such examples. But you might want to revise your script.
If I am correct % has an issue.
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Here is one such example. I am not sure if there are any more such examples. But you might want to revise your script.
If I am correct % has an issue.
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Thank you for the help. I've added a patch which fixes the issue. The patch also removes the limit on the number of save/load pages.
Enjoy!
 
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BitingTheBullet

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I've reworked Savannah's face and made it softer around the edges. Also added some meat to the bones. I've noticed some veins popping too much around the abdomen so I'll tone them down. Decided to keep the overall figure and style.

Let me know what you think.

test1.png test2.png test3.png test4.png
 
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Great game so far, BitingTheBullet.

Always a good sign when a dev posts regularly and replies to feedback. Just always remember you'll never please everyone, so make the game that you want to make.

BTW, is there a Quit button? On the Main Menu my only choices are Start, Load and Setting?
 
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Great game so far, BitingTheBullet.

Always a good sign when a dev posts regularly and replies to feedback. Just always remember you'll never please everyone, so make the game that you want to make.
Wanted to reply to the review but couldn't. To keep it short, the respect and rude is mainly meant as a moral scale for the MC. Accumulation of either will lead to MC addressing people differently. On rare occasions, it can be used against the MC as a means of "reputation around town".
Kept it hidden since I didn't want to bother people micromanaging stats. Might reconsider in next release.

Thank you for playing.
 

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You get bonus points if you also put it on the Save Menu. Only a few games do this, but it's really nice to be able to save and quit on the same page. Oh, also noticed your Instagram link is bad.
 
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Liked the game so far but please make it so saves are not limited...will we run into the girl who stopped James again? Is Harem or pregnancy planned?
To add to this you might want to clarify now whether or not the mom and sis will be LIs or not so people won't constantly ask and if they aren't maybe make a note of that in the op somewhere.
 
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