Geko1711

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It looks good, but now you don't have Office Wife in your signature line. They need to make it possible to three banners in your signature line.
It seems to me that only donors are allowed 3 banners, The Office Wife, I have Stacy as an avatar
 

PaleGrass

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Damn, the pub scene was disturbing. Felt really bad for her so if that was intended, kudos.

Otherwise a very great game so far.
I hope it didn't scare you off my dude! <33

the scenes in the pub was the best scene I have seen in an adult game play.I have not seen a better game scene in the whole forum,but this is not the scene for the Puritans.
if the protagonist was more beautiful (with a better body-leaner with normal tits)this game would be no1 in f95.
I believe that he will go on a diet and in the next episode he will be with a model body.;)
Lisa 2: Post Atkins? xd

Here you go if the MOD when he has time wants to put it in the OP of this thrad
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Holy shit dude that's so sick!! I'll pop it on my sig now :)!!!
 

Devastatot177

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Bro the game was awesome and I like the graphics but it was fully pictorial I hope u could add some more animations. When will be the next episode gonna release?
 

PaleGrass

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Bro the game was awesome and I like the graphics but it was fully pictorial I hope u could add some more animations. When will be the next episode gonna release?
Ya my dude, animations are well outside both my skillset and my hardware unfortunately. I will inevitably attempt them again but it's not likely to be anytime soon <33

Edit: E2Ch1 will be released at the start of September :)!

Not at all, mate. I ignored the warning, was one of many to me and didn't take it seriously so here I was: Disturbed/Stunned by it. By how well made it is. Goes for the whole game so keep it up, mate!
Aw man thank-you so much! I will certainly do my best! :)xo
 
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sguru

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Hey dev why don't you add blackmail in the story then it would spice up things much more.
You can use the rape scene for blackmail or maybe anything else but if you ask me I want you to go with that rape scene because it was fucking awesome and I think many people here will agree to this blackmail thing:p
 

PaleGrass

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Hey dev why don't you add blackmail in the story then it would spice up things much more.
You can use the rape scene for blackmail or maybe anything else but if you ask me I want you to go with that rape scene because it was fucking awesome and I think many people here will agree to this blackmail thing:p
Oh many people do agree with you and I promise; blackmail is coming <33

Uhmmm! Reminds me of someone...:unsure: this one has half the boobs though, o_O I prefer the original :love:
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the scenes in the pub was the best scene I have seen in an adult game play.I have not seen a better game scene in the whole forum
Then you clearly have been going through the wrong VN's and games.

Don't get me wrong it was a decent scene, better writing than 50% of what I've seen so far and there's nothing wrong with decent.

But please there are dozens of VN's with far better scenes and better writing, still for a 1st release this was decent as it should be.
 
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TheLecher

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What kind of Blackmail though? In these types of games the female lead always gets blackmailed in the most stupid way possible to do the stupidest things.
Sure, a lot of people who make porn games (or porn in general) take very little time with and put very little effort into blackmail plots, but it's not really that difficult to come up with something which is hot and believable. I'm sure that PaleGrass will manage it. He's done well, so far.

However if Lisa was the one doing the blackmailing now that would be something new and interesting to see.
That would be completely out of character for Lisa, at least based on what we've seen of her up until now. I don't think that I would find such a huge character shift believable, unless it had an equally huge catalyst.
 

sguru

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What kind of Blackmail though? In these types of games the female lead always gets blackmailed in the most stupid way possible to do the stupidest things.

However if Lisa was the one doing the blackmailing now that would be something new and interesting to see.
Nah I don't like your idea where lisa is blackmailing. And I believe in dev that he is going to do something marvelous again in this blackmailing plot.
 

PaleGrass

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What kind of Blackmail though? In these types of games the female lead always gets blackmailed in the most stupid way possible to do the stupidest things.

However if Lisa was the one doing the blackmailing now that would be something new and interesting to see.
I generally dislike blackmail in adult games for those very reasons, I have one major blackmail arc in mind - it's relating to Lisa's identity as she's "hunted" by the Deloitte's but this is still some time away.

I have been toying with another perhaps less intense blackmail series introducing a mystery caller which would link a lot of Lisa's relationship paths with the upcoming exhibitionism path but it's not fleshed out in any real way yet.

I think blackmail is often comedic in a sense in a lot of games so I just don't want to tread off the wire I'm on right now because I want the opposite effect as the story progresses.
 

sguru

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Dev why don't you jake and troy for blackmailing
I would love to see that and many others also
 

PaleGrass

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Dev why don't you jake and troy for blackmailing
I would love to see that and many others also
Jayce is already written extremely differently into the next few chapters, Troy on the other hand will be involved more "willingly"(?) in future too. Their involvement just doesn't lean towards any blackmail scenarios as it stands currently :)
 
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Geko1711

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I'd be for letting the DEV do it, he doesn't lack ideas and honestly seeing Lisa in a suggested scene is no longer a surprise even for those who proposed it, it's just a reason to say: "See! He did as I suggested!" Instead with the bar scene and then the bathroom scene the DEV surprised and devastated all of us and no one had suggested or proposed anything to him because it was the first episode.

I don't want to be a wise guy, but you can't please everyone, there will always be someone who will say: "I would like to see Lisa with: 2 men, 3 men, 2 men and a woman, 2 women, 2 women and a man, not to mention the races! An endless list would form that would then expire into the mediocrity that some games are a part of, or I would watch porn and have the same result.

I haven't written a review yet because I'm waiting for the second episode and in my personal evaluation for the games I support, factors such as: good graphics, a little bit of content for each version, the creativity of the DEV without being influenced and the punctuality of the releases must come into play.

Excuse my English but Deepl did his best :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
 

PaleGrass

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There will be more thressomes with two males for Lisa? or sharing scenes?
ABSOLUTELY xD (only two though? :( )

I'd be for letting the DEV do it, he doesn't lack ideas and honestly seeing Lisa in a suggested scene is no longer a surprise even for those who proposed it, it's just a reason to say: "See! He did as I suggested!" Instead with the bar scene and then the bathroom scene the DEV surprised and devastated all of us and no one had suggested or proposed anything to him because it was the first episode.

I don't want to be a wise guy, but you can't please everyone, there will always be someone who will say: "I would like to see Lisa with: 2 men, 3 men, 2 men and a woman, 2 women, 2 women and a man, not to mention the races! An endless list would form that would then expire into the mediocrity that some games are a part of, or I would watch porn and have the same result.

I haven't written a review yet because I'm waiting for the second episode and in my personal evaluation for the games I support, factors such as: good graphics, a little bit of content for each version, the creativity of the DEV without being influenced and the punctuality of the releases must come into play.

Excuse my English but Deepl did his best :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
I feel you there brother, there are of course things I'm working to improve through user input but in regards to the story it is already written. Almost all characters have their endings jotted in my little log.

BUT.. how we get there isn't absolute and honestly there have been some pretty incredible ideas people have suggested that really get my head working. I write A LOT of them down for reference. Sometimes you just read a comment and it's like "holy shit, that would be perfect for X" and that's just so so great.

I really do appreciate everyone that comments, you're all frickin' awesome.

Also your English is great! xo
 

golorz

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Wow, this game has a lot of potential, I liked every quest, the script is written perfectly. It is interesting to follow the development of the heroine and interaction with other characters, each character feels like an individual personality . Developer has put his heart into the game, waiting for continuation
 
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