PaleGrass

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Hey Palegrass,

At First,A big Thumps Up and Appreciation for the work u have done, u have put a lot of hardworking for the first update without any expectation and now u r getting ur rewards for it,I feel happy for you that u are getting ur due criticism and appreciation for it.people acknowledging your work is the one of the big feat for creators.i hope this game gets big viewership and recognition due it, I can see the potential for it in the story.


Okay coming to my opinion/Review:

I was sceptical about the game after seeing that its in RPG Format,was hesitant but after seeing the renders(especially The bar scene) decided to give it a shot,

And oh man what a wild ride it has been,loved the characters build up, music and the emotional character development u done with it, only thing I disliked was the half baked/half renders mixed with rpg map like what happened in Theo’s bar.hope u don’t make like that in further updates.

Some Of The scenes are really well done like the forest adventure scene, swim trip and drunk bar scene(my fav though).

Your renders are really great when its in darker situation during nights and bar scene like that u have a great details like the sweat and fear look in Lisa eyes…renders are really beautiful and have matured a lot from the start of the game.

And Lisa is really hot btw,like to see her in very skimpy outfits in the future updates.

Dialogues are great,with building up the narrative so that people get engaged with the story line and acts as a great add up to the beautiful renders

The Mix of renpy and RPG is the best thing to happen in the game, and that’s why people like it due to its format, neither too old stylish nor to visual novel style ,acts as middle man between both.


My Suggestions (let me know your thoughts on it)

1.I Hope u can add sex sounds to the sexual acts happening in the game, not for everyone but for specific scenes like threesome and gang bang scenes(u can attach some porn audios to it if u can),so that it gets a lot immersive experience to the player.

2.Coming to the Anal Play,i Really liked how Danny Teased Lisa by licking her rosebud hoped that the tease will continue a little bit over before her first anal fuck,but anal fuck in bar was suprise ..though loved it, i hope it will be great tool for teasing audience before her first anal fuck now though see doesn’t remember it, people can tease her and touch her ,and play with her bum as she refuses to every move of it.will act as a great blackmail thing as people tease her ,as she refuses but her body says another things wish there would a lot teasing with her anal play before her first anal sex(With her Consciousness).

3.BLACKMAIL!BLACKMAIL!
I wish a lot of people wish to see Lisa getting cornered and told to do naughty things,
-Like Paul gets to know Lisa’s dirty fantasies of gangbang and anal sex,and one night Paul is partying with his friends (his aunt/landlady out of town),drunk and heavily aroused watching some dirty porn of girl being gangbanged/Blowbang,lisa walks in surprise to see the boys heavily aroused and shocked to see the porn and gets away but Paul and his friends have noticed her,paul decides to use this opportunity to lure her into the party blackmailing her do the some fashion walk infront of his friends with some skimpy outfits, and turns out they try to grope her and Paul uses his opportunity to tease her rosebud …and shocks her that she is such an anal freak, and it turns to be some heavy gangbang/blowbang party.

-I Hope Duncan and Peter will return, though Peter is kind of soft character ,hope Duncan has a lot of plans and lot more merciless friends with him who will eventually get Lisa and do some extreme stuffs in the future.

-I hope aoife’s Father will be great character and Lisa gonna mess with him who is directly connected to Duncan and his clan, think this will be the extreme path Lisa takes out ,and gets really messed up.

-as Lisa started her first photoshoot, hope Markus introduces her to one of his friends as a model who does shoots for playboy magazine and some porn shoots…and uses for her as a model for some porn shoots..one of porn director sets his eyes on her who is known for extreme gangbang stuffs.

I Hope u have lot of ideas too, love to see Lisa getting slowly transformed as a depraved and kinky girl..
Well first of all thank you my dude! Let me try to break down my thoughts on each point here :)

1: The sex audio was a consideration early in development but without getting the sort of "sweetness" that I imagine Lisa's voice to be in a lot of her sexual encounters and also on the foot a similar or same voice but more sexually explicit or expressive as she becomes more "deviant" I decided against it as I felt it cheapened the whole experience.

2: Lisa may have been weirded out by Danny launching himself at her at the pool but under the effects of mind altering substances Lisa may realise just how much she likes a little backdoor stimulation ;) it's explored in the upcoming release x

3: Where blackmail wasn't a trope I had originally written into the game, due to the overwhelming request numbers from users it's been introduced in several storylines - one of which IS Paul's line. The beginning of this blackmail arc is introduced in the upcoming release as well. As for Paul and his friends this was actually an idea I loved sent by a user a month or two ago and is definitely something I want to explore :)

Duncan returns briefly in the upcoming release too, Peter will later. They have quite a large role as the game develops and yes it is quite dark to extremely dark lol. Tony (Aoife's stepdad) is I suppose the grand antagonist of the entire story and though he is little but a silhouette of a bad guy now I hope that learning his story reveals just how twisted and evil he truly is. As for the Marcus porn shoot, it's not exactly one of his friends but you are in the right sort of ball park.

Oh and as for the Theo's scenes CG that was some attempt at doing something a little different, adding variety to how the game plays kind of the same as the speech bubbles above peoples heads during non cg cutscenes. :)

Whew! I hope that I got everything there my dude, thanks once again for the comment I do love reading all of these and sorry about the delayed response, I've been completely swamped since last weekend. Much love xo
 

PaleGrass

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This is the Italian translation of Lisa - Episode 2 Chapter 1 (Unofficial Ren'Py Version)
Sick dude! Added to OP <33!

When are you hoping to release ch2 beta?
2/3rd week of November~ x

Our Dev should be getting the new video sk today.:cool: Hey Dev! let us know how it goes! If you can anticipate release!:love:
Phew.. it was a rocky start I'll tell you that Geko.. but I got it working x) it is SUPER sexy to work with, quality of life increase dramatically but I lost a lot of work when updating Daz which was a bit of a bummer. BUT I've nearly built back what was lost thankfully :D! x
 

FlamesOfVengeance

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Seems very promising. I like that it has a sandbox feel to it (without actually having that tag lol). I always wanted to have more of a slice of life female protagonist game in which the player is free to do whatever they like and whenever they like. Really hope it's gonna have tons of more content later down the line with a lot more kinks (all of which should be optional of course) like maybe... pregnancy? Fingers crossed.

Keep up the good work!
 
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B10

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PaleGrass

What is the name for the switch for the chocalate?
I took the chocolate before the event due to having the correct clothes after switching to them in early game doing the gamer event.
Now I can't get the chocolate anymore.

Stuck @instagram 7
Due to this can't go on with Byron and Horton.
 
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rax0045

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Hi, i am stuck at Rubins third task. i visited the hub got the package and when visiting Rubins can't find any body there. i already the bug fix. but it is still the same
 
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