Ren'Py Abandoned Live Your Dream [v0.1.0] [SantsStudio]

[cigffarguymt]

This appears to be the story of Freddy Krueger...

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No that's Deadpool for sure.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

What predominates is the Rpg tag that makes all the others relative to each one's choice

I don't see an RPG tag on current or future tags. Otherwise I don't quite understand what you mean.

I guess I'll wait to see if there is a harem in the future or not.

good thing, beside renders, is pov style so we can't see is this usual mc for these kind of games: underage, feminized face dude, elementary school height with bwc size 1/3 of his body
oh yes other goodies: no harem, no mother+sisters - both for now, but there are usual sidekicks - auntie and cousins (looks like incest is comming to town after all)

Well, future tags include incest.

 

[DrakoGhoul]

That is one hot blonde in that preview picture. I'll check this out.

 

[SantsStudio]

I don't see an RPG tag on current or future tags. Otherwise I don't quite understand what you mean.

I guess I'll wait to see if there is a harem in the future or not.



Well, future tags include incest.

say that many things will not be exactly defined at the beginning of the game and how many tags will be based on events that will depend on the choice

 

[Weasel_Face]

No that's Deadpool for sure.

Sorry dude the striped shirt on the beach says it all, he's just pre-claw mode and hasn't found a haberdashery yet to trade in his ballcap for a fedora...

 

[YogSothoth1982]

say that many things will not be exactly defined at the beginning of the game and how many tags will be based on events that will depend on the choice

I'm weird at playing, and without the possibility of a harem I'm not likely to be interested in a game: I'm very unlikely to play again, so I prefer to be able to be with all the LIs that interest me in the first game (and have a unique ending to them). If a game has only one LI that I'm interested in, then I don't need the harem, but this is rarely the case.

So I'd rather wait and see how the game evolves before trying it out.

 

[Socko55]

I don't know why anyone is ever surprised when there's a dead father involved, it's a key plot point in the godfather of all incest stories.

At least porn games don't make us kill him ourselves. We get to be a lazy Oedipus and let mysterious circumstances do it for us.

 

[COLLECTOR_69]

Here is my Android PORT for Live Your Dream [v0.0.2b] [SantsStudio]

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Hope you Enjoy it & drop a LIKE!!!

 

[fromabove]

Good luck with your game, SantsStudio. My only advice to you is to denoise all your renders. If you have an nvidia GPU, you can use this.

 

[leg28]

I guess I'll wait to see if there is a harem in the future or not.
Well, future tags include incest.

incest is comming? what a surprise... who could have guess that?
and don't worry about harem. in these teen dreams it goes with incest and lost father as bees with honey

 

[General F. Apper]

this is a small introduction about part of the story, still need to be revised the grammatical issues, some images with better renderings for that and still a small Beta phase, but as it is an Rpg everything can happen in the course of the story
I don't want to turn the story into another cliché
but the whole unfolding of the story will be based on the interaction with the characters and even on past or future facts, so that everything can be expeculative

i am here to tell you to embrace the cliché and make it arousing and sensual as you can

 

[YogSothoth1982]

incest is comming? what a surprise... who could have guess that?
and don't worry about harem. in these teen dreams it goes with incest and lost father as bees with honey

About the incest, if it's with the MC's aunt and cousins, in my country he could even marry them if he wanted (with one, not more, but nothing prevents having the others as lovers). On the other hand, the rest of incest (Father with daughter, mother with son, brother with sister ...) isn't illegal either. You just can't marry a relative who is less than three steps away on your family tree (that is, you can marry your niece, but not your sister).

I guess that each country has a different appreciation of how to treat incest.

 

[DisabledAccount1110202308]

I love Incest in my VNs, it's my favourite genre, but this looks about as generic as they come, both in models and premise. Also, I'm sure the resolution of these renders isn't even 720p, quality (or lack thereof) like this is unacceptable in 2021. With how grainy the renders are, I expect these girls to have sandier vaginas than what their beach visit would result in.

Sorry, but I don't think this VN is good and it's certainly not going to cut it. With how many great Adult VNs there are, you'd need at least passable visuals to even be considered competition, which this lacks; and a good narrative would only be a bonus, but not enough on its own to make it. I know how cliched Incest VNs can be, I've played most of them, but for it to be considered good you'd at least need to have decent renders, for me story is secondary when it comes to this genre.

I hope you take this critique in good stride and further improve upon your work, because in my opinion there can never be enough Incest VNs, and I see the potential in this. Good luck, take care SantsStudio!

 

[zeus04]

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Nightless]

....so many dead fathers...

 

[PeggyBlackett]

waiting for more before i try

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[nimsen]

Can't go to sleep or is that end of update?

 

[I_Only_Support_Real_Onez]