Wolf RPG Completed Living With Sister: Monochrome Fantasy [v2.0.0 + DLC] [Inusuku]

[Shadesishere]

By the way, Shadesishere.

Words like 'Chuu' & 'Rero', if I remember correctly, are meant to be words for sound effects of Kiss and Lick.
Though, I don't really know if it's better to translate that and put something like **; considering that it's in the dialogue as if the sister actually says it.

I have seen it actually being said in some animes.
(Rero in that popular scene from Jojo's Bizarre Adventure, and a character in D.Gray-Man who uses that as a suffix or something after every word/sentence.)

Can't read japanese, so this isn't certain, but these could actually be one of the sfx that pops up in sex scenes.

(Also, could you capitalize the 'no' in the Yes or no when peeping on the sister when she goes to the toilet? Just a little nitpick but it bothers me, so I just really wanna say it.)

Nitpick away, I'm happy for anything that can improve the translation.

Also, regarding the chuu and rero's... I'm debating how to actually word these things so that it's more natural... I could go for *kiss*/*lick* style.. but I think that would look weird overall, and using something like smooch just wouldn't work either... maybe bracketing them? ehh...

and honestly... the chuu and reros themselves don't bother me or break immersion too much...

#TranslatorProblems

*edit* weather just decided it's time for rain thunder and lightning... joy... hope I don't need to shut off my pc...

 

[Clusterfucced]

I think it's cute actually, and is part of the unique atmosphere

Well, I gotta agree to that.
It wouldn't be there if it wasn't meant to be there, now that I think about it.

Disregard all that then, Shadesishere.
Except the toilet peeping.

 

[Don Tebjos]

Birororon! ━(◯Δ◯∥)━ン

 

[namesareweird17]

and honestly... the chuu and reros themselves don't bother me or break immersion too much...

I'm the same way. But I'm a deviant that also plays eroge VN's and those "noises" are typed out that way, so it almost keeps the immersion in my eyes.

Again, deviant and all that, so...

 

[Clusterfucced]

I forget that this game is a japanese game, an eroge.
'Chuu' & 'Rero' has been in my mind since v1.3.1, I got lost in that. (I think it was also because I woke up at 3AM, hungry, at a time where no open store that sells proper food. Which would be at 5AM.)

Those words/sfx, Onii-chan, and whatever else familiar words in anime and hentai are the important essence of eroges, I guess.
Translating those would break the immersion, rather.

You guys have opened my eyes and brought me back to the right(?) path.

 

[namesareweird17]

I forget that this game is a japanese game, an eroge.
'Chuu' & 'Rero' has been in my mind since v1.3.1, I got lost in that. (I think it was also because I woke up at 3AM, hungry, at a time where no open store that sells proper food. Which would be at 5AM.)

Those words/sfx, Onii-chan, and whatever else familiar words in anime and hentai are the important essence of eroges, I guess.
Translating those would break the immersion, rather.

You guys have opened my eyes and brought me back to the right(?) path.

3am with no decent food open...that's nightmare fuel right there. I can't blame you in the slightest

 

[namesareweird17]

Spoiler: Brothers

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Weren't they explained as one massively muscular guy defending his smaller brother so he could do spells or something in the back? ...I call foul, game!

*edit* I'm wrong. Was probably thinking of another group that was explained to me. I've been redoing this fight forever because there's a random event that I accidentally clicked past that I wanted to make note of rewording and can't...get it....to show again...

 

[Markuno]

do not know why,

But seeing them use my mod excites me a lot.

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Haha my friend your mod is really top notch, I think many of us (including me) were looking forward to it, keep up the good work.

 

[RodRyo]

I assume that these are not changed in 1.4.

Other than one bug fix in one of the answers, everything is still the same. i've updated the comment.

 

[hurrdurrderpderp]

also, some lines seem a bit off because I'm also working with space constraints (long lines have to be squeezed into the text box, and don't look good or become unreadable, an issue when a short written sentence in japanese balloons into 3 or more sentences in english)

Have you considered adding another text box after first one runs out of useable space?
Since you're editing CommonEvent.dat already there is nothing restraining you from launching WolfEditor and putting new text box instead of squeezing lines. Or is there another technical reason I'm not aware of?

Can't read japanese, so this isn't certain, but these could actually be one of the sfx that pops up in sex scenes.

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pretty neat website for those pesky sfxs

 

[Shadesishere]

Have you considered adding another text box after first one runs out of useable space?
Since you're editing CommonEvent.dat already there is nothing restraining you from launching WolfEditor and putting new text box instead of squeezing lines. Or is there another technical reason I'm not aware of?

...
Everyone forgets, but if you look back in the monochrome thread waay back in december 2021... I didn't know ANYTHING about translating... everything I do now has been through trail and error... so... the technical reason for not using a new text box? didn't know, leery of experimenting a bit too. (might try it though)

heck, this all started as me asking myself "can I?" and snowballed.

 

[Daseson]

...
Everyone forgets, but if you look back in the monochrome thread waay back in december 2021... I didn't know ANYTHING about translating... everything I do now has been through trail and error... so... the technical reason for not using a new text box? didn't know, leery of experimenting a bit too. (might try it though)

heck, this all started as me asking myself "can I?" and snowballed.

Wow I felt quite identified with your message, it all starts with a "what if I try?" and then everything flowed over time.

 

[Shadesishere]

Just hunted down my first forays into translating the (at the time) demo version of Fantasy...



and holy... seeing the differences in the translation from those early days to now... no comparision.

 

[Markuno]

Look, someone already reported to inusuku about the cowgirl before the big adventure.

I also noticed that about the eyes that he mentions there, although inusuku's response is that he doesn't quite understand what they are trying to tell him...

damn translators

 

[DoodlesTheBob]

Mkay, Shadesishere, I've got more text suggestions, but a majority are sex scenes. I debated even posting these because you already know, but am thinking it might at least help in some small way, so I'll just put them all in one spoiler tag for conciseness and you can ignore or save at your leisure.

Spoiler: Possibly redundant sex scene changes

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There are a couple funny ones that I want to mention, though also ask that they don't change. When you ask your sister to strip naked, the line at the end says something like, "I had my sister show me naked." Clearly could be worded better, but it makes me chuckle when I see it and like that it's that way.

The legendary cook visit...did you name him? Or was that Inusuku? Either way, that simple humor is always appreciated. I want to find your little Easter eggs that you sprinkled in, but I'm not always great at references.

The waist thing I'd leave in. Not everything needs to be localized. "My hips are going crazy" and "I can't stop shaking" = essentially the same thing and I see it as no less poetic. Part of the charm of Japanese games is seeing how other cultures dirty talk and the little sister gets quite lewd with her words after her trust is high enough. I think it's part of her characterization and it should stay. Otherwise, I think the suggestions are okay.

 

[Clusterfucced]

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pretty neat website for those pesky sfxs

Neat indeed, god damn.
Still had to use the Japanese language in windows though, so I didn't have to play identify with the letters, just typed it.

But here's Rero/れろ:

Here's Chuu/ちゅう: Yamete/やめて , actually.

 

[taotio]

Neat indeed, god damn.
Still had to use the Japanese language in windows though, so I didn't have to play identify with the letters, just typed it.

But here's Rero/れろ:
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Here's Chuu/ちゅう:
View attachment 2712168 Looks like it at least.

Second one looks like yamete - stop it

 

[DoodlesTheBob]

Neat indeed, god damn.
Still had to use the Japanese language in windows though, so I didn't have to play identify with the letters, just typed it.

But here's Rero/れろ:
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Here's Chuu/ちゅう:
View attachment 2712168 Looks like it at least.

So lick and kiss. Yeah?

Second one looks like yamete - stop it

Can't yamete also just means "That hurts" / "It's painful?"

 

[Clusterfucced]

So lick and kiss. Yeah?

Yes.

Can't yamete also just means "That hurts" / "It's painful?"

That would be 'Itai', painful.

Second one looks like yamete - stop it

Damn, you're right. Yamete/やめて | Chuu/ちゅう
They look the same if you think they're rotated or something. That's what I thought for, some reason.

 

[Raf-Raf]

THe PaTcH NoTeS oPtIoN IsN't TrAnSlAtEd, I CaLl ThIs A fAiLuRe!
WhY ArEn'T ThEy TrAnSlAtEd, I kNeW tHeY'rE F-inG WiTh Me AgAiN. I KnEw iT!
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