Belle, I'm thoroughly enjoying the game and it's pretty well written and the characters are hot and funny with some sexy renderings, but if I can make a few suggestion for your next project (since it's kind of late for this one) if you do one. It could really use some more foreplay build up and attacking endogenous zones while fucking. Kissing down the belly, biting those adorable pointy fey ears (like while doggy), stroking the thighs to tease the girl, titty groping (while they're awake) and nipple play, making out while fucking. The kind of stuff that makes sex far more intimate but also more pleasurable. There's also thigh-fucking and buttjobs for build up, which is a fun way to have an MC go more than one round. I know one and done helps advance the plot faster but he's young, he's got the energy and stamina training. And with all of this you could easily have the MC get blue balled and not get to cum and that could be another way to get +1 perversity.
But I do love what you've done with this story and game and sex. I'd feel rude if I didn't stress that, just thought it could use some more spicy. Thanks so much for putting so much effort into it and making it available to us.