VN Ren'Py Abandoned Long Lost Daughter [Ch 1-8 fix] [Tawny Fairquim Frolics]

[Crimsonfiend76]

Again, this is a practice game just for fun so pleasing a fanbase is not a priority. The less cartoony appearance of the HS2 characters is leading to a different story tone for the second half of the VN even though the basic personalities are remaining the same. Some folk may like it, others won't.

I actually like the new art style and think it can help trying to ground the characters and their stories into a more realistic setting.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

I actually like the new art style and think it can help trying to ground the characters and their stories into a more realistic setting.

I can feel that already happening since that's the way I'm writing this. I know how this VN will end, but I'm making up the journey to get there as I go along. When I was using Koikatu, the engine and mod resources that went along with it went a long way in inspiring how I wrote the story. That also seems to be happening with HS2.

The main way this will unfold is that there will be less silliness and more realism. You probably won't be seeing as many things like a girl spinning like a top on the MC's dick, but hopefully there will be more immersion. I'm also trying to experiment with less narrative and staying with the character's thought process more. That will be tough for me to do since I've been locked into the narrative style for so long.

 

[kevinscottmiller]

I can feel that already happening since that's the way I'm writing this. I know how this VN will end, but I'm making up the journey to get there as I go along. When I was using Koikatu, the engine and mod resources that went along with it went a long way in inspiring how I wrote the story. That also seems to be happening with HS2.

The main way this will unfold is that there will be less silliness and more realism. You probably won't be seeing as many things like a girl spinning like a top on the MC's dick, but hopefully there will be more immersion. I'm also trying to experiment with less narrative and staying with the character's thought process more. That will be tough for me to do since I've been locked into the narrative style for so long.

i dont supose you might have any idea on a timleine for the next update by chance

 

[FlyingDrums]

No, there is no NTR or netorare in this VN. The overall dynamic is similar to Penthouse where most of the female characters are bisexual, so there is a lot of lesbian shenanigans. There will be opportunities to share parts of your harem with the futa character, but that will always be optional.

Speaking of the futa character, will she have her balls intact, by chance?

please say yes, please say yes, please say yes, please say yes
(or at least include the option)

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

i dont supose you might have any idea on a timleine for the next update by chance

I'm feeling pretty good about March right now.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Speaking of the futa character, will she have her balls intact, by chance?

please say yes, please say yes, please say yes, please say yes
(or at least include the option)

I was wondering when I'd get this question.

The futa character is named Valentina (or Val) in LLD. Her testes are internal. I have a preference for my version of the futa to have no balls.

 

[sader1992]

I have a preference for my version of the futa to have no balls.

I would have said please no creampie from futa into one of the girls

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but it's ok since it's futa not another male character xD

my mind goes to "protecting and spreading the protagonist genes, with no limit" while reading this game

 

[FlyingDrums]

I was wondering when I'd get this question.

The futa character is named Valentina(or Val) in LLD. Her testes are internal. I have a preference for my version of the futa to have no balls.

(I would love you till the end of time if you gave us the option. But I know it's not as simple as it sounds to do and I completely understand that you wouldn't want to waste time and effort into making something that isn't your preference.)

 

[kevinscottmiller]

than

I'm feeling pretty good about March right now.

thanks for the response sounds good cant wait

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

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Whoever can first identify the structure shown through the window of this CG will get to name the fembot tormenting Aiko:

 

[BOBJevent]

Update Report and Preview

Whoever can first identify the structure shown through the window of this CG will get to name the fembot tormenting Aiko:

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It's a lake somewhere.

 

[Vreek]

I probably lack general knowledge about these things (I guess it is in the United States) but I am looking forward to learn something. Also reverse image search gives nothing - damn you Tawny (shakes fist angrily) A dude in green and a big sign though... seems like some site of importance.

Edit: Some sort of school maybe <-- big fat guess

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

I probably lack general knowledge about these things (I guess it is in the United States) but I am looking forward to learn something. Also reverse image search gives nothing - damn you Tawny (shakes fist angrily) A dude in green and a big sign though... seems like some site of importance.

Edit: Some sort of school maybe <-- big fat guess

How many schools have walls like that?!

First hint...it's located in Russia.

 

[otoboke]

Update Report and Preview

Whoever can first identify the structure shown through the window of this CG will get to name the fembot tormenting Aiko:

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It's Solovetsky Monastery.

Lol, you get my attention with that hint about russia, because this is my home, but it took me some time to find right answer, I did almost detective work in googling, and finally get to idea that it should be an monastery, because any other type of building in Russia can't have such design, so I googled most beautiful russian monasteries and stumbled in similar photo.

So, I want you to name that character - Olesya. It's my crush's name, but that girl passed away few years ago, because of cancer.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

It's Solovetsky Monastery.

Lol, you get my attention with that hint about russia, because this is my home, but it took me some time to find right answer, I did almost detective work in googling, and finally get to idea that it should be an monastery, because any other type of building in Russia can't have such design, so I googled most beautiful russian monasteries and stumbled in similar photo.

So, I want you to name that character - Olesya. It's my crush's name, but that girl passed away few years ago, because of cancer.

Wow, talk about being in the right place at the right time! I thought I would need to drop several more hints.

Yes, it is Solovetsky Monastery. According to Wikipedia, under the Bolshevik government the monastery became one of the main prison labor camps and the model for labor camps of the Soviet Gulag Archipelago. This is in keeping with the new somewhat darker atmosphere for the second half of the VN. I say "somewhat" because mostly it will be the same with none of the basic personalities changing at all.

Sorry to hear that your sweetheart died. The meaning of the name "Olesya" is "a girl from the forest". I'm not sure how I'll be able to align that name with a fembot, but I'll come up with something. Also, please note that before you commit fully to that name that the fembot character is going to be fuckable.

 

[Vreek]

How many schools have walls like that?!

First hint...it's located in Russia.

Instead of a wall I took it for some hill with beautiful leaves all over during fall...

 

[265lutab]

Nice work figuring out that location

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

It's Solovetsky Monastery.

Lol, you get my attention with that hint about russia, because this is my home, but it took me some time to find right answer, I did almost detective work in googling, and finally get to idea that it should be an monastery, because any other type of building in Russia can't have such design, so I googled most beautiful russian monasteries and stumbled in similar photo.

So, I want you to name that character - Olesya. It's my crush's name, but that girl passed away few years ago, because of cancer.

So I need to ask... Would it be offensive if I had the fembots all be Russian-made with Russian accents? I can see an opportunity to lighten things up by doing that. While things are getting more serious in LLD, I'm not looking to make this into a serious drama...more of a melodrama. Olesya would be the main fembot character since she patrols the same floor that the MC teaches on.

 

[otoboke]

So I need to ask... Would it be offensive if I had the fembots all be Russian-made with Russian accents? I can see an opportunity to lighten things up by doing that. While things are getting more serious in LLD, I'm not looking to make this into a serious drama...more of a melodrama. Olesya would be the main fembot character since she patrols the same floor that the MC teaches on.

No, why, I don't see anything offensive in it. As well as in sex you mentioned earlier.

 

[Vreek]

So I need to ask... Would it be offensive if I had the fembots all be Russian-made with Russian accents? I can see an opportunity to lighten things up by doing that. While things are getting more serious in LLD, I'm not looking to make this into a serious drama...more of a melodrama. Olesya would be the main fembot character since she patrols the same floor that the MC teaches on.

Quite the time for Russian fembots... Can already see the Fox headline: "Russia strikes first with sexy robots. American support troops in Ukraine totally exhausted after the 'first contact'."