- Dec 8, 2021
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(As long as this story creates depth with the characters and overall plot this could be good. Or it could just be some thing to read if you have nothing else to read. Few errors, and the players name is misplaced more than a few times, and there really isn't much else to say since so little has actually gone on. So LONG STORY SHORT, there is a lot of potential for the plot of the story if it brings depth to Vanessa and Alex. Or it could be a waste of time which I won't know until it finishes).