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your port is great, hope i can see you on more threads and bringing some ports in my G.
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She explains that she had to do that to prepare him for what's to come. In order for him to obtain this great power, he had to go through certain transformations. The crap that happened to his mom was the mafia boss's call, not the goddess, and she wasn't happy with him for what he did, and will take his position away as punishment...Translation I got out of it was, it's all part of the process.
MC is to be her most powerful warrior, and lets not forget she's in every sense a god that has created life, and has lost everything. And the last scene, his mom was trying to get through to him that she has more than maternal feelings for her son, and he responds by zapping her with his power, and sending her to bed. Hi
Try the less corrupted options and you'll get a different ending without any "zapping".
I dont know if this is the best way of doing this but I just wanted to say that there are parts where the text is either missing or something wrong happened.
At the start, after the MC is kidnapped he goes to the autoshop and catches the landlady on the sofa and just declares that he is going to join the mafia, when did that happen?
Eh, the corrupt path to be honest is not very corrupt at all IMHO. Honestly, I never really got a sense that there was a moral or corrupt path, the MC is painfully moral and a bit whiny. Honestly, it leaves a feeling this "Lightbringer" they're looking for is in fact the MC all along...he sure acts like it.
I have two different saves (both non-NTR, so I can't speak for what's going on there).
In one of them I go for banging everything, shooting, killing etc. and I got the ending you described. In the other one I'm trying to make more rational but still somehow pervy (I still got the dates and the "happy endings" with both the cop and the doc, but I didn't help the shoplifter, I didn't force anal on the gf and so on) decisions. The last scene is similar, but at the same time quite different. If you want to see it for yourself don't click here. Sara isn't afraid that the MC will become like his dad, she's relatively calm even when he gets angry about his sister, then they sit together on the couch, he goes for a kiss thinking that she's drunk, she stops him "because it's wrong", then she asks for a goodnight kiss and they end up making out. After a while she leaves for her room (with no regrets) and when the MC talks about her being drunk, she playfully says that she's not.
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So some have problems with pathing and reactions to some of the choices. I was focussed on the Renders.. story premise and gameplay. Had a great time. Enjoyed the game and looking forward to where it might lead me. Much better then most of what I've played.. 2 thumbs up.
Ooh boy, seems I have my post-release work cut out for me here.
Besides, the reason why most games do this is because they want the MC to be as much of a blank slate as possible is so that the player can put his personality in the MC and play essentially as himself. I, on the other hand, want the character to have at least some personality. I'm not saying one of these approaches is objectively better, simply, that this is works for this particular story the best.
As for spicing up the scenes, well, my priority is to have the characters established first, then comes the good stuff. Otherwise, what's the point
As for the zapping part, well, I was trying to make it clear that the Mom is scared of MC when she realizes that the MC might be using Darklight though she doesn't really know the specifics that we do.
No but seriously, I try to make sure the events that matter have at least some reasoning behind them to take place. If it doesn't work for you, it doesn't work for you :shrug:
No, but I get what you're saying. When I first joined the game it was obvious how much it draws from Dreams of Desire, it was, it would seem to me, the decision on the part of the previous writer as AG hasn't played DoD yet. Since the similarity between these games is so obvious I decided to turn things on their head a bit. Instead of an MC who is little concerned about the morality of his actions, this MC is so concerned to the point it is admittedly whiny, instead of having a likable creepy magic friend, what we have here is a being so powerful and seemingly evil who MC isn't even sure that he can even trust, instead of the realization that magic exists mattering not at all in the world where the MC lives, here, the world is obviously going to be and already has been changed drastically because of this realization.
Sorry for building a wall of text here in this thread but I want the game to get better and addressing genuine and perceived problems with the game is one of the best ways for it to improve. The general impression here is that the game has too many moments that feel awkward. Some of it is flawed coding, some of it is a flawed patch, some of it, as much as I hate to say it, could be bad writing. Either way, I've said this before, your comments will ultimately help me improve the game.
One rape scene that happens earlier on in the series but it was an important scene as it shaped the bias against and for a few characters (mostly against).
Neither, really. It has one non-ntr scene though, compared to no NTR scene.
Well AG and I planned on setting up a subscribeStar as soon as this update got out but he kind of overworked himself with the coding so I've decided to it later. The idea is not to just migrate away to SubscribeStar but create build there that is less... inhibited
That shouldn't happen, it'd be great if you sent a screenshot.
So anyway, how's your sex life?Oh hi markView attachment 656494
It is a bug, or rather a faulty patch because in the script I've made sure to call Sara "mom" in bold letters whenever MC addresses her.
One has been removed but I think there should be more. Either way, there's one NTR scene planned in the next update
Few problems here should've been fixed an update ago but couldn't have been as AG was the only coder we had and it's not exactly his forte. I shouldn't blame this on him though as he really worked hard to finish this update. Either way, most of these problems will be fixed with our new coder whose meticulousness is kind of his defining trait. As for others, like mom knowing about MC working for the mafia, this is a problem I solved in the scene where mom and MC are watching TV together there's a little conversation there about this thing. Maybe it wasn't coded in, I'll ask AG just to be sure.Mmh ... its feels like there are missing scenes, pics or sentences. Often its does not add up imho. e.g: The MC tells his GF that he hat to take care of his "mom" because she had a blackout at her yoga course ... but that never happened.
Sometimes the same character has 2 following screens with text and it seems to be a reaction to something the MC said, but he did not.
Or another example. Quite early on the "mom" tels the MC that she wants to apply as a prof at the commity college. Later they talk together an the MC says her she should work at the college as a prof and she says she will think about it ... wtf?
The game is all over the place and so many things make no sense ... or should be explained better. Edit: Oh another one. when the demon tell the MC her name he ask what his powers are, beside the laser shooting ... i never uses his powers up to that point. Tbh - I dint even knew he had powers because I picked the choices not to use them. That shows what I mean - the game never told me that I have powers, what they are or anything.
Edit2: Same problem later when the sister is back and the MC tells her that he works in the casino. After that the "mom" tells him to keep her out of that world ... why does she know that? She got "greenlit" by the black dude and then the scene was over and she never talked to the MC about anything after that. ... sorry - so broken and messed up :/
Dont know what happend here, because in general this is quite fun and the renders are good ...
I wouldn't say he's an extremely moral character. In fact, unless I am mistaken, he pretty much does just one "good" thing in the entire story i.e. saving the old man from Pete, which=would be considered really moral and brave if Pete could've killed MC with the gun but he really couldn't do much that could actually harm the MC so MC didn't really have much to lose either way and he decided to not have what he perceives to be a helpless old man harmed. I guess the point I am making here is that MC doesn't really want to do immoral things which per se doesn't make him particularly moral as much as well, it makes him not immoral. Now THAT is a conscious decision on my path. We've already seen an MC who is a likable pervert who'll turn his mother into a mindless sex doll as soon as he gains mind control powers without giving it a second thought in plenty of games, here, I want the player to have a choice and I want to give the MC the choice to determine if that's what he wants to do. Another problem is that any decent person would not want to do what most protagonists in sex games do to the people who're closest to they are out of willful ignorance. Now this MC would do all those things as well and more but they will be a result of the corruption that the player's choices caused, it wouldn't just be something along the lines of "Hey, I've got these sick powers now, let's see who I'll molest first."
Besides, the reason why most games do this is because they want the MC to be as much of a blank slate as possible is so that the player can put his personality in the MC and play essentially as himself. I, on the other hand, want the character to have at least some personality. I'm not saying one of these approaches is objectively better, simply, that this is works for this particular story the best.
As for spicing up the scenes, well, my priority is to have the characters established first, then comes the good stuff. Otherwise, what's the point
This is something that I honestly cannot solve. What I mean by that is that incest is one of the main selling points of the game and the mom character is simply too central to the story as a love interest to be an option. I should clarify this by saying there are some characters that will be a romantic interest regardless of whether player chooses. This ties into what I was saying above about MC having a distinct personality of his own.
This argument reminds me of one a lot of theists make when asked why there's evil in this world if the god is all-knowing, all-powerful, and all-good. It goes something along the lines of "Evil and suffering exist because it's god's plan and we, as mortals, do not and cannot understand his divine plan." Now I am not here to argue for or against this argument but the problem in our story here is that it's pretty obvious right away that Zel is neither all-knowing nor all-powerful and certainly not all-good especially when she decides she will kill MC's mom if he doesn't do what she wants, we realize that she isn't all good. So yes, what she is doing is intended to make MC stronger but given the general air of distrust between her and Carl and her and MC, there's no real reason for MC to believe that she has his best interest in mind in the long term.
As for the zapping part, well, I was trying to make it clear that the Mom is scared of MC when she realizes that the MC might be using Darklight though she doesn't really know the specifics that we do.
I AM LITERALLY BUILDING AN ENTIRE WORLD, A MAGIC SYSTEM AND A PANTHEON OF GODS OUT OF THIN AIR WHAT MORE DO YOU WANT FROM ME?
No but seriously, I try to make sure the events that matter have at least some reasoning behind them to take place. If it doesn't work for you, it doesn't work for you :shrug:
Well, there are problems with the code that need to be fixed, hopefully we'll iron such inconsistencies out with our new coder. As for my "attention quote," well, this is the thread for my game so I will inevitably end up being somewhat close to the center of the attention. Besides, I don't really gain much from getting attention in an online forum for pirating games, the idea of being here, interacting with the player-base, is to get constructive criticisms about the game so that it can improve. I've tried to be as open-minded as I can about it.
MC isn't really what I would call corrupt yet. I've said here before that the paths would really start diverging by episode 3's end, that's when I will have more room and more of a foundation for a corrupt MC, for now, my aim is to establish the characters and the general feel of the world so that things like worldbuilding and foreshadowing don't get in the way of the story when the game really picks up the pace in terms of sex scenes.
Shhh... THEY don't know that.I feel like i already played a game with almost same story But it was another game no idea wich game it was
No, but I get what you're saying. When I first joined the game it was obvious how much it draws from Dreams of Desire, it was, it would seem to me, the decision on the part of the previous writer as AG hasn't played DoD yet. Since the similarity between these games is so obvious I decided to turn things on their head a bit. Instead of an MC who is little concerned about the morality of his actions, this MC is so concerned to the point it is admittedly whiny, instead of having a likable creepy magic friend, what we have here is a being so powerful and seemingly evil who MC isn't even sure that he can even trust, instead of the realization that magic exists mattering not at all in the world where the MC lives, here, the world is obviously going to be and already has been changed drastically because of this realization.
Sorry for building a wall of text here in this thread but I want the game to get better and addressing genuine and perceived problems with the game is one of the best ways for it to improve. The general impression here is that the game has too many moments that feel awkward. Some of it is flawed coding, some of it is a flawed patch, some of it, as much as I hate to say it, could be bad writing. Either way, I've said this before, your comments will ultimately help me improve the game.
This only leads to one of 4 Android patchs, not Incest.
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Thank you for taking the time to write out your thoughts and plans for the game. You clearly have a thought out plan for this, and you're not a halfwit without a clue; that goes a long way for me and following this game. I respect your thoughts, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds...many of my concerns have been alleviated.
Thank you for taking the time to write out your thoughts and plans for the game. You clearly have a thought out plan for this, and you're not a halfwit without a clue; that goes a long way for me and following this game. I respect your thoughts, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds...many of my concerns have been alleviated.
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I don't get why MC continuously talks shit about his drug addicted sister instead of using darklight on her to help her?
Did they remove the ntr between mom and carl, becouse every time i try loading a save where mom is getting ntr by carl just gives me an error and when i started a new game all those images are removed?