You got something there....... I'll bet the sister before the trip made some plans to spice up things sex wise. In the sisters path she treets Bob much like the path we are talking about. Weird though... that in that path Eva husband in an aggressor in the Bully path. In the friend path he still is not a wimp.
I like you... like the paths where MC is not a wimp.. Although he does need to improve his stamina when things get sexy with the wife ! Love to see something with him where He is the boss ! Perhaps the vanilla route. It was HIS decision to hand over Eva to Albert for the BJ. She wants more ....but he can control that. He could even bring in Albert and Robin in the mix . Make Eva beg for outside sex........ That would be a fun path Just some thoughts.
You raise some great points. I did enjoy much of the story. I just think some things could be developed better. MC and Eva discuss the possibility of opening up their marriage and without much discussion, 2 days later she is up to all sorts of mischief, mostly behind MCs back. It isn't the way opening up a relationship works. It takes time and a lot of discussion about boundaries and things. I understand its just a story, but it is the realism that makes a great story about opening up a relationship. Secrets and sneaking around will destroy even a cuck marriage real quick.
Eva just comes across as another cheater with no respect for her husband or marriage sadly. I was hoping for a story of step by step progression where Eva gradually becomes more liberated and the couple mutually enjoy these encounters, which can happen various ways. She could tell him during sex, she could share her diary with him, he could witness encounters, etc. Honesty and communication are essential in the process, something Eva doesn't understand, then again maybe the Dev's end goal is the destruction of the marriage which would explain much. Anyway, I find the evolving tensions in this format to be very interesting when done well. As I said in my post earlier, perhaps I am looking for too much from this one.