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Dimajio333... Can you throw us a couple teasers where we can talk about what is comming ? I know you do not want to give anything away ! Something where we can use imagination .... and be wrong when it comes out ... LOL
I wish to do this... but so far, I am working on the second part of a short novel "Make me happy" (I will release it within two weeks) and at the same time writing the text for LiP. It's only been a couple of days since my short vacation endedDimajio333... Can you throw us a couple teasers where we can talk about what is comming ? I know you do not want to give anything away ! Something where we can use imagination .... and be wrong when it comes out ... LOL
Really? I thought the couple would not have sexual activities with others, I guess I have to replay the vanilla route.Wonder what will happen on the Vanella route. MC just allowed Eva to have a BJ with Albert while he was there watching ! But he knew she wanted more !!
This sounds very hot and erotic to me.It would have been very sexy to have a drip or two on her lips or face that she cleans up while looking at MC ...then swallows.
Yea man ! Love to see that in the game somewhere. Bob's wife would be up for that too ! But my heart is with Eva ! Can't wait to see some new teaser... then then what Dimajio333 has in store for the release !This sounds very hot and erotic to me.
Showing her husband the cum of the other guy on her face, then smiling at him and licking her lips clean.
Immediately afterwards swallowing the cum and saying "yummy" to hubby with a twinkle in her eye. (still smiling at him)
Dimajio333 said ...I forgot about this event My bad I will try to reveal this topic in Eva's memoirs.Dimajio333.... at some point will we learn what happen in Albert's room when Ava went in during the dare game and closed the door ???
Agree. I found it a disappointment as well. It really weakens the MC and makes a mockery of their marriage. I enjoyed the other path a lot more. Although, I would have thought MC and the sister might have had a conversation about Eva before they jumped each other. Maybe I expect too much.Not sure I like the Dominate role Eva plays in the cheating path. When she sets up rules to justify her having sex with Albert. Also the MC becomes a weak husband accepting it . on the other side ...... Love the sex scene.....
You raise some great points. I did enjoy much of the story. I just think some things could be developed better. MC and Eva discuss the possibility of opening up their marriage and without much discussion, 2 days later she is up to all sorts of mischief, mostly behind MCs back. It isn't the way opening up a relationship works. It takes time and a lot of discussion about boundaries and things. I understand its just a story, but it is the realism that makes a great story about opening up a relationship. Secrets and sneaking around will destroy even a cuck marriage real quick.You got something there....... I'll bet the sister before the trip made some plans to spice up things sex wise. In the sisters path she treets Bob much like the path we are talking about. Weird though... that in that path Eva husband in an aggressor in the Bully path. In the friend path he still is not a wimp.
I like you... like the paths where MC is not a wimp.. Although he does need to improve his stamina when things get sexy with the wife ! Love to see something with him where He is the boss ! Perhaps the vanilla route. It was HIS decision to hand over Eva to Albert for the BJ. She wants more ....but he can control that. He could even bring in Albert and Robin in the mix . Make Eva beg for outside sex........ That would be a fun path Just some thoughts.
https://f95zone.to/threads/make-me-happy-v1-0-dimajio333.157993/new post on pateron ???
Dear Friends,what does the post say..... I know it is the announcement for the other game... Is there anything for LIP ???