Very nice game. I've enjoyed it a lot so far, and I'm looking forward to more content.
A few things I've noticed:
- The earliest parts of the game, especially around the first meeting with Billy, feel much worse written than the rest of the game. I recommend having another look at those and maybe rewriting them?
- In a number of places, the word "in" replaces "on", which, for example, leads to Fauna seemingly putting her hands "in" the MC's dick... Which is not a nice thought.
- Dolla's name is not capitalized a bunch of times.
- Lily's name is spelled with 2 Ls a couple of times.