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It's a really solid start. Love the "My Sweet Neighbors" references.
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Good start and great characters. Love Sarah and Anna isn't bad either.
Some nice mementos of 'My Sweet Neighbours', miss that game.
Some nice mementos of 'My Sweet Neighbours', miss that game.
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Okay, so the word was used twice. Didn't notice it this time. The mom uses it in the apartment in a conversation with the daughter right after MC falls in her apartment, and that's the one I was referencing.
Don't know what to tell you in this instance. Maybe there's something in the drinking water in the apartment building that makes that the default term . . . but it does seem an odd word choice for the MC's internal thoughts, particularly if he's finding the girl sexually attractive.
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Spelling and Grammar niggles, YAY!
Only 2 I've found:
Renaming the MC nets you a dialogue fluff when Audrey says "Your neighbor Ethan" even if Ethan ain't your name.
Anna says "You will? ou can't just go after him" which should be "You will? you can't just go after him"
Only 2 I've found:
Renaming the MC nets you a dialogue fluff when Audrey says "Your neighbor Ethan" even if Ethan ain't your name.
Anna says "You will? ou can't just go after him" which should be "You will? you can't just go after him"
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Somes references with " My Sweet Neighbours " with different scenario, I don't know how much this game will similar in the futur but I will say there a good start.
Waiting too see the next update before making a final opinion.
Waiting too see the next update before making a final opinion.
I have seen some preview images that I couldnt reach (sex scenes), are them not available or am I picking wrong answers?
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There is only one sex scene and it is right at the beginning of the story. The MC has to ignore the call from work when at the bar.
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I would suggest adding this, as well as any other ideas you want to add, to the planned tags
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Liking it so far, very obvious what was the inspiration for it, even going so far as basically mirroring some scenes.
But since "My Sweet Neighbors" has been abandoned for a long time, I just love for someone to go into the very same direction.
Here are two very minor things I didn't like quite as much.
When Sarah is at home after the incident with the three morons, both her friend and her daughter say/think she is dull.
I'm not sure if this is what you are actually trying to say. "Dull" is more like boring.
It's also not so great to repeat the same term twice for two completely different characters, alternatives could be "muted," simply "sad," "quiet," "pensive," "subdued" etc..
It's weird, they call him Mr."MCName". Either use his family name or forget about the mister.
Don't get me wrong, these aren't at all bad or important and would never be a real problem, but if you changed that, a good game would get just another smidge better.
But since "My Sweet Neighbors" has been abandoned for a long time, I just love for someone to go into the very same direction.
Here are two very minor things I didn't like quite as much.
When Sarah is at home after the incident with the three morons, both her friend and her daughter say/think she is dull.
I'm not sure if this is what you are actually trying to say. "Dull" is more like boring.
It's also not so great to repeat the same term twice for two completely different characters, alternatives could be "muted," simply "sad," "quiet," "pensive," "subdued" etc..
It's weird, they call him Mr."MCName". Either use his family name or forget about the mister.
Don't get me wrong, these aren't at all bad or important and would never be a real problem, but if you changed that, a good game would get just another smidge better.
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Seems you took my suggestion but didn't add harem to the planned tags.
Is that no longer applicable?
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man you had this great essay about intrafamilial parent-child infantilization, deprivation of the masculine presence, and narrative language direction.
then Ethan happened
not knocking you, I thought it was great and well said, but I did laugh for about 5 minutes after that