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Ren'Py Abandoned Lucid Dream Remake 2 [v0.6A] [Hendrex]

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Rroarr

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Reading the comment i notice one thing,
when a game waits longer, lets say, till after 0.003 with sex scenes, the thread is full with people crying there is no porn yet and developers milking their patrons *boohoo whéééwhééé*

When you start of with sex, here come the people trashing and crying because it's too fast.
No it wasn't. it fits the story/start. And it was a nice twist when you do the mom visit....it was not a dream:p

Saw some comment about the renders being bad, i liked them. They were not that bad ,seen a lot worse in games with very good reviews. The characters bodies and faces look gorgeous and well proportionate . especially the first render with the teacher in underwear jumped out, made me Rrrrrrrrrrr

I never saw the first attempt of this game and don't know what went wrong but i hope to see more of this one. Keep it up @Hendrx
 

Rroarr

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This game starts off with the developer complaining about bad comments on his/her previous work... Then dictates to the audience that he/she is aware of the bad grammar and doesn't want any complaining about it... Really...
Although i usually agree and enjoy your very fair reviews i disagree with this tiny peace. He knows his writing lacks and asks to, please not to trash talk but appreciates feedback on flaws and errors. looked more like a plead then dictating to me. But i can be wrong, my knowledge of english is lacking too :)

Sounds more like the dev needs to grow a thicker skin because he doesn't know how to cope with trolls
 

Hendrx

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May 18, 2017
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Reading the comment i notice one thing,
when a game waits longer, lets say, till after 0.003 with sex scenes, the thread is full with people crying there is no porn yet and developers milking their patrons *boohoo whéééwhééé*

When you start of with sex, here come the people trashing and crying because it's too fast.
No it wasn't. it fits the story/start. And it was a nice twist when you do the mom visit....it was not a dream:p

Saw some comment about the renders being bad, i liked them. They were not that bad ,seen a lot worse in games with very good reviews. The characters bodies and faces look gorgeous and well proportionate . especially the first render with the teacher in underwear jumped out, made me Rrrrrrrrrrr

I never saw the first attempt of this game and don't know what went wrong but i hope to see more of this one. Keep it up @Hendrx
Reading the comment i notice one thing,
when a game waits longer, lets say, till after 0.003 with sex scenes, the thread is full with people crying there is no porn yet and developers milking their patrons *boohoo whéééwhééé*

When you start of with sex, here come the people trashing and crying because it's too fast.
No it wasn't. it fits the story/start. And it was a nice twist when you do the mom visit....it was not a dream:p

Saw some comment about the renders being bad, i liked them. They were not that bad ,seen a lot worse in games with very good reviews. The characters bodies and faces look gorgeous and well proportionate . especially the first render with the teacher in underwear jumped out, made me Rrrrrrrrrrr

I never saw the first attempt of this game and don't know what went wrong but i hope to see more of this one. Keep it up @Hendrx
Reading the comment i notice one thing,
when a game waits longer, lets say, till after 0.003 with sex scenes, the thread is full with people crying there is no porn yet and developers milking their patrons *boohoo whéééwhééé*

When you start of with sex, here come the people trashing and crying because it's too fast.
No it wasn't. it fits the story/start. And it was a nice twist when you do the mom visit....it was not a dream:p

Saw some comment about the renders being bad, i liked them. They were not that bad ,seen a lot worse in games with very good reviews. The characters bodies and faces look gorgeous and well proportionate . especially the first render with the teacher in underwear jumped out, made me Rrrrrrrrrrr

I never saw the first attempt of this game and don't know what went wrong but i hope to see more of this one. Keep it up @Hendrx
Thank you for your kind
here's my discord link
Can I get that gif link ? xD
 

Zippity

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Haha, dear Zippity, i must say you are just not seeing the forest for the trees ;) I could explain it to you but that would be a huuge spoiler and doesn't even want to put into a spoiler tag :D Really. You are missing the obvious here :eek:penedeyewink:

I don't see it that way. Its more like a change of pace, a little diversion. Because it can't be all over the progression with the girls. In my eyes it servers its purpose alright, we get a tiny bit of glimpse on the personality of the mc. There is nothing wrong with the storytelling here, these moments are the ..hm.. slice-of-life moments. Instead of the annoying shower-scenes. I'd go with this one 10/10 instead of doing the shower/morning-coffee routine. And just to repeat myself, we learn a bit about the mc's personality through this, its not just a placeholder. You might not be interested but i for example am.

When you figure out the answer to the first paragraph, this will become clear all of a sudden as well. All shall be revealed i should say! :D Everything makes perfect sense, we could simply argue over the execution as it might be a tad bit too much that other kids weren't around. I can see an explanation for that but THAT part i feel was a bit too much. But overall the scene makes perfect sense when you figure out whats going on :) You know why this is confusing? Because this game, this dev, chooses that kind of realistic approach we aren't used to. In all the other games we are used to being explained what is going on, more or less. We are being told the reason at least. Not here. He isn't holding our hand and through the mc we only know what a boy in his place would. Nothing. At least nothing is explained to us. We have to figure it out by ourselves, put the pieces together and all these scenes makes sense, absolutely. Its just the kid isn't aware of it yet, but we the player can come to realize, all the clues are there already to get the big picture ;)

True. But i'd call this a minor inconsistency because her phone could be loud enough as well so the mc could hear. And even if it isn't, the plot partially -at least could- explains why the mc hears it and more importantly why he isn't aware that this shouldn't be normal. But on the other hand, yes, this can be an oversight. But don't blow this out of proportion. Its a minor thing. A thing still, but a minor one.

Because he has doubts. And since we play through him, we are allowed to see his thoughts. And of course he makes a dicision, he can't just sit there and ponder :) Yes, i of course see whats your point. For now i'd call this a visual novel and definitely not a game. Not yet anyway. Well'll see how it goes. Player choices doesn't really matter that much but to be honest show me a visual novel that offers relevant choices before their 4+ chapter/4-5 update. There is a few. But only a few. I'd say the Dev should definitely keep in mind to make the choices relevant, noticably so. But not all choices has to be like that. I actually don't like when all our choices are important. Can be between nuances. Too early to tell, Dev would definitely do well to keep the player a relevant decision maker too, i don't feel that this is such an issue right now though.

Yes, you are right, in a very general sense. A good story doesn't always serve with an explanation for everything. This isn't a completed story though and like i said previously, it offers an explanation for all these confusions, you just have to figure it out yourself becaus the game won't put it into words for you to read. Thats all. The answer is there.
Clearly you see the island in the storm that I just can't see... But I'm pretty much sticking to my guns on the confusion of the story, regardless if it's intentional or just the writers style... Best of luck to the developers...
 
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Ennoch

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Sounds more like the dev needs to grow a thicker skin because he doesn't know how to cope with trolls
Thats actually a requirement when someone is looking for the support of patrons and the feedback of a community. Trolls are always there, waiting, watching, lurking. Ready to make the jump and start whining :D Its bound to happen here and on patreon too!

But not all "negative" comments are trolling. Zippity reviews are simply honest and in a sense blunt. Not even half as blunt as some others can be though :) And i don't agree with him in everything in most cases but a review is not ment to be some omnipotent truth at any rate anyway.

At the moment i don't think there is something wrong with this game, it will obviously need some polishing here and there but Hendrx should just stick to his idea and stay on course. My own view on the story that it is consisent indeed, as i've explained it previously, and i like how things aren't just explained to us. I hope to see such approach in the future. I love the fact that there was some lewds already (i dislike nonsexual adult games) but while i do feel that the starting scene is justified i hope the progression curve won't be too steep, too fast. A certain degree of suspension does good things with an otherwise interesting story.

Oh and i do love the renders! At the breakfast scene i immersed myself with the mc and kept saying.. the eyes, keep lookin at the eyes, the eyes dangit! Ehscrewit!... :D
 

Zurghi00

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i have read the plot and your "presentation" on patreon @Hendrx and i'm really curious of your idea about the game's plot.
this first concept is....something:i liked the renders and it's really curious the character of the m*m(x'D).really creepy and interesting!
let's see what will happen!
for me,good job for now and keep going ;)
good luck!
 
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h3avenw0rd

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Well, I enjoyed the renders, grammatical errors are understandable and still readable for the story, and overall it wasn't a bad experience.
Looking forward to more though with remakes or new creations since the updates are what makes it worthwhile, not just first impressions.
 
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Do it :) it's short but nice.

no kidding on the short bit :D
its alright but didn't bowl me over none. cant say its better than the original as I deleted that sometime ago and didn't think it was as bad as the impression I get from devs comments. this one left me just as wise with whats what...which is 'not alot'.action from the onset was a great plus...no messing, no long grinding delay for reward, just instant smack dat...but no buttlovin....sheesh :D
 
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sasquach

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i think its a good start should be more content to make a judgement good thought into game , great art but again too little content work on the talking bits and explain a bit better think it might go well
 

Deadlyreaper

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I'm looking forward to the next update it was quite short but it was very good as if it was so if he is done with mom at night and he is in bed, he says if he should go back to his spurts eliminate and what if he would go back then to see how mom relishes the cum of mc relish and makes himself? and sic the sperm

from the mc massaged after she tasted it and she finds it so delicious ^ ^ and sees the mc that ... well no matter i can not wait for the next (and hopefully longer) update to come
 

Jansen

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Just played this game. Nice Renders.. Can someone share link for the old version cause the mega link is down. Thanks
 
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