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maxbishup

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Let's see, the son dies, and the father gets all the girls, no that's not it. The mother dies and the son gets all the boys, no that's not it. The father and son die, and the daughter gets all the girls, no not it either. Ok Ok, they all die, and the dog gets all the cats, yes we have a winner. ;)
 

ffive

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Or, they can put in the work it takes to implement decent English, and not churn out content with bought and borrowed visuals and themes to make a quick buck. The ones who do are hailed for it.
I have yet to see a porn game around here getting hailed specifically for "decent English" of all things. Would you mind naming some of them?
 

Dogorti

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Jan 23, 2021
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So i tried this and....it's not bad but it's not good either it's ok i guess, the renders look good and that's a plus point but there are a lot of things to improve and oh man...that's mainly the dialogue, the problem is not only that it is translated from another language, the problem is that it feels awkward...there are some conversations that don't make much sense like the one between the mc's best friend and the little sister or stuff that feel really weird like when the mc calls his mom "mother", or calling his sister well..."sister" instead of calling her by her name, I mean who in their right mind interacts with their family like this??? you have to be very snoob or have two brain cells left to talk like that

And speaking of the best friend... is it really that hard to make a competent best friend? I mean this game does not have much content but from what is already there it is seen that the friend is a complete idiot!! This troop is very tiresome, why be friends with someone whose life has to be solved all the time? ok solve the life of a girl to get some pussy? ok it is understandable, but to a chump that the only thing he does is give me headaches? no f*cking way!

In any case, I wish the dev luck and I think there is still room for improvement
 
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h3avenw0rd

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Visually it looks great.
Everything else has a lot of room for improvement.
Change of tone happens a lot, kind of without proper context and the choice of wording doesn't help clear up the situation either.
Definitely look into an editor for the dialogue, and work on more scenes (not the same as renders) for this soon or it won't grab enough attention to get anywhere.
 
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TheSkeptic1

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I have yet to see a porn game around here getting hailed specifically for "decent English" of all things. Would you mind naming some of them?
Nah, there's plenty of reviews specifically speaking to the quality of games' English. Not here to do somebody else's homework for 'em.
 
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JohnJG

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May 17, 2018
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The renders are pretty impressive. The story and dialogue have room for some improvement but it's not a bad start.

I think that the Mom character is definitely channelling Angeline Jolie looks wise though. ;):coffee:
 

Crowangel

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Dec 12, 2021
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what a load of utter crap.. closed and deleted by the point U.Woman stands up.. Utter pile of garbage
 

It ain't me

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May 11, 2020
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So :(, i thought it's already done by "version 1.0" . But there maybe a mistake with it, it should be " 0.1" or "0.00001"
 

michael1984

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Well its a pretty short demo

Nothing much to see yet

Besides some character introductions

Probally will have some sharing scenes in the future since the mc his best friend seems into the mc his mom and sister and a neighbouring milf

Hopefully the next update will come soon either that or be bigger
 
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