hukutka94

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Jun 14, 2019
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Dude, keep yourself alive! Hard times, know everything about it, just don't dive right in them, take small steps to solve the mass of misfortunes! Best luck to you!
 
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deathspawn246

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Aug 4, 2017
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If at all possible, would you be able to give us players a way to change the calendar date? More often than not I've never looked at the day or month (Hell I didn't even realize there was a calendar for quite awhile in the game). So if we miss specific dates, such as halloween, we can go back and see the event.

edit: I didn't finish everything apparently. you can go back. I'm a dumb dumb.
 
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peridotslab

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Jan 14, 2019
49
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hmm i just finished everything (including all the halloween events i think. no more are listed to do) and everyone says that they have no more events and the gallery is full but im still missing a whole character from the character guide. what am i missing? (image behind spoiler just in case)
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ladguru

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Oct 18, 2018
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hmm i just finished everything (including all the halloween events i think. no more are listed to do) and everyone says that they have no more events and the gallery is full but im still missing a whole character from the character guide. what am i missing? (image behind spoiler just in case)
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Cassandra? It would match the number of question marks. Charlotte and Celestine are hard to miss...

Can't remember exactly what triggered her.
I think it happened at the Shogukuni at an unusual time.
 

Sir. Cockalot

Member
Oct 11, 2018
119
133
If at all possible, would you be able to give us players a way to change the calendar date? More often than not I've never looked at the day or month (Hell I didn't even realize there was a calendar for quite awhile in the game). So if we miss specific dates, such as halloween, we can go back and see the event.

edit: I didn't finish everything apparently. you can go back. I'm a dumb dumb.
what do you mean go back? you found out how to change the ingame date? how?
 

reaperxninja

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Jun 28, 2019
12
27
Yo, since the overhaul I too have no access to the events tab.
I am aware this is compatibility, so I only ask if someone has an Enhanced Edition save from that point or 0.7?
I can then edit the save to transfer my values over.
Thanks!
 

mrttao

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Jun 11, 2021
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When you open the game again, the main menu changes and you can see the "green firefly", this means that new dialogs and secret events are activated for all the games you play from now on in the future.

The execution of that is a reference to Earthbound from Super Nintendo.


However, my intention is not that it would be a good experience, but that it would be something sudden and uncomfortable. To make it look like a bug, but not really be.

just my 2 cents xD
So. I was trying to replicate the crash for the bug report and it was weirdly difficult... before finding out it is a one time only scene.
It is an interesting idea, I have seen some games that do it well and one thing they did was instead of just a clean shutdown they have very obvious over the top fake "bugs" in the game. a drop to a matrix-like screen followed by returning to main menu would probably work better. A few bits of dialog would not go remiss either like the Mayor saying something like "execute crash_timeline script"

Make it more obvious that this is breaking the 4th wall instead of an actual bug
 

ladguru

Active Member
Oct 18, 2018
947
785
Did Jonan just close the fucking game on me?
Yep, a really silly joke from the dev.
I was already about to delete the game. Then I had a look into the source...
If the dev really insist on nuking the 4th wall for this joke, I would rather recommend a faked renpy-stacktrace.
 
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tortorus

Member
Aug 29, 2018
136
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Bonjours, i have just finish to test this game, and i write a feedback.
First of all, the caracter designe is really nice, hud is nice i never be lost, the story have potential, parallel world, the sex scene are nice but a little too simple.
The great black point is the writing of caracter... what a mess at start.
Except for primarose, charlotte and mary all the main girl start is to rewrite. Seriously i know it s a porn game but the "He you , yes you... What is your name.... MC. I love you MC... Well when we fuck ? No! (with a broom) go away crazy ! ".... Let us like a little more a caracter before fuck them.... I am not an easy man, and it s not a porn movie, it s a light novel i need more back ground at start, no even if she look nice i don t want a stranger sleep with me (all the more if she can t talk and to know later she is a professional killer !) before know her a little... And please if you put the sand box tag let us more choose our path ! No i m not want to help sasha ! Why i do this ? No i don t want being an partner in crime with a theft and jail an innocent person or be a gangster... Well yes there are a story but in a sand box game like a house of rift for example the story and the lewd are separate, it s a way to do you can chose a girl (just one) and put the story on her with conditions. But avoid to link girl story (other than auto even) beetween her the only one who can do it (cross caracter story) it s the MC. Well on is point why the mc don t ask to sasha with yui case ? She can at les teleport him in very bad time...
It s more a personal state. I HATE mop hero ! you know there is the mc with a mop, the girl come, drop pants, drop a big shit in front of the MC s feet and say fuck you... and the MC ok, i love you dear and mop... i really hate this, a hero could be weak physically, poor, alone, sensitive, good or bad BUT he must have willpower otherwise he goes back to mcdo to sell fries... and more with the women we are supposed to love... And the MC is not a punching ball, what is all this aggressiveness ...? And before comment all caracter i would like to know this a remake of "sayonara zetsubou sensei" ? Did you notice that all the girls had a mental problem ? Primarose nervous breakdown, maxy nymphomaniac, mary agoraphobia, layla whimsical, yui selective mutism, charlotte the tsundere... well there is sasha the manipulative liar at start (3 event) i have really think to call a doctor...

PRIMAROSE, just perfect the little angel... I would like more romantic time there to much of sad for the moment.

MAXY, no, far to fast... love at first look ok why not, not much time ok, but really too direct even for a extrovert. she said she stalk you. why not try to start here with one or two even, it let us more time to let know her. And no i m sorry i dont love maxy. After the even on beach with primarose when she stole bath suit and look surprise when you tell her she make cry prim you see indifference, after this a had an auto event of charlotte and maxy for the 3 some... ok this woman does not care about the harm she does as long as he gets pleasure from it... so we could be friend but nothing more sorry... With a mop hero who don t say anything don t punich them (even when she rape you...) why would you like they change any thing ? Then you must chose who yes and who cant be your lovers. And at start maxy is a bitch ! But after Mary come this caracter change, i like her, she care more other, more affectionnate in the good way.
MARY, just perfect nothing to change the little flower too cute. i would like more romantic even too. i would like when she talk to death the MC make somthing big... with the other girl.
It seem you have to make a choose between them or create a new way as you said as mayor... i wait for the next of her story.

CHARLOTTE, the little rich girl, she is nice. her story is nice. I like this little cat which desperately takes out its claws to protect herself, but after the intimity is install why she is so grumpy ? When the defense is down a tsundere is very affectionnate. normaly... The following of the story with the mother look for the two sister should be interesting.

LAYLA, sorry i hate this girl. then i had not read this story too much. I stop the second time to suggest that the two restaurants work together... I don t dream she get angry and bordering on insult primarose the angel (who lose her familly, struggle with a resto, money and help me and maxy without second think) without knowing her... Fucking mop hero ! It s right to hate people you don t know ? fucking jerk ! (I read the rest of his story diagonally at last...)
Well, she is beautiful ok, but she is choleric, mean, conceited. No i m sorry but we could even not be friend... I said no to all the rest with her but the fucking mop mc fuck her without your opinion (could you delete the sandbox tag svp sand box game it s not chose only in what order you do caracters story who go where it want with or without the player choice).

YUI, no again... no long time after maxy, the same a girl you don t know come and want fuck you... directly... Lazy dev. And after this she come in your bed... no i move her... who sleep with a unknown girl who infiltrate your room who say you 3 words ? well, her story is rich and long and WHAT THE FUCK this mc is a dead weight... alone with this cock he go infiltrate a ennemy mafia hq... Aie ! this not him who is shoot in the back because this link with mafia... and no, all be alright.
This is really stupid but i up my perk and i like up perk in start with money, then when i do yui story after some time and some other caracter, she wait to the yorokobi, i don t like have no choice, a love and sex story is make by the two, not the MC but the player + girl and not he girl only (yes we are in a porn game i know). But in all the yui story (exept when you train with the dragons) fitness perk is useless i have 150 fitness when i go see the master of yui and her goon shoot me in one hit. yui beat me in one hit, i ve near 250 when i fight the dragon blue and red, but again no no use... Perk is to use for the prim resto and the fishing it s all, it s shame it is not unlock another text answer, another event. There is also a thing, yui caracter she love you, she want you love her but she don t want you care to her... to dangerous, this again make me angry, fucking mop hero said somsthing to wake up her... And now i become a part of mafia Youhou coool... Fucking mop hero you could not try to get yui out of hell, no you have to go dive in it and become the new boss...
Well, we know where the yui story will go, i would like to see the end. Cross some carater story would be nice there is a butterfly who can help you, it could help to the player trust more sasha too.

SASHA, Well it s maybe the more bad write caracter. Seriously no
she appears, i m at your service... ok i look formy friend, see you next time...
she appears, i can t tell you for you friend now, do you trust me ? well no i don t know you and I don t trust strangers who tell me that they are at my service first time we meet and tell me she choose do not tell me things. ok see you for lunch.
You go to yorokobi, well i m a thief and i m a demi god with red eyes and wite hair and i come from another realm, you have no choice to help me to lock an innocent for years, and become partner in crime with me... ok if you say it... (to the server) miss albino broke a cable could you call psychiatry please...? Besides reval the whole story here nearly the start is not a good choice, parallel world should be know more later. no problem to understand maxy, who is the mayor... etc...
After this she start her plan look for info tell you lot of thing, manipulate you (or try because is so oblivious), and come the first reward to see blue light...
Well i have gift, zoom, cool it work, i didn't believe it work, so we can transfer the powers. Ha ok so your gift is i serve you as a guinea pig to test if nova power could be transfert (at this time you understand you take yui and sasha s power to become mayor)... MMMmmm i want a kiss... Heuuu no. and then the fucking mop hero, ok i trust you... WHAT THE FUCK ! WHY ? NO she do nothing excpt try to manipulate you to found gold and go out... regardless of the victims... In fact i start like this caracter when she start to give up, come to her room, and the event when she drink, well here when she show you weak point, you know she trust you and i can trust her from his point. her caracter change her become more endearing and i like her... But it s near the end of her story for now...

So for ending lot of potential, but try to get help for the writing, and try to let player choose more, i know it s sad people don t see all your work, but you have to let chose player the way they want go a little more than now.
i m sorry for my english, i m french...
 
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Dragon59

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Apr 24, 2020
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Bonjours, i have just finish to test this game, and i write a feedback.
First of all, the caracter designe is really nice, hud is nice i never be lost, the story have potential, parallel world, the sex scene are nice but a little too simple.
The great black point is the writing of caracter... what a mess at start.
Except for primarose, charlotte and mary all the main girl start is to rewrite. Seriously i know it s a porn game but the "He you , yes you... What is your name.... MC. I love you MC... Well when we fuck ? No! (with a broom) go away crazy ! ".... Let us like a little more a caracter before fuck them.... I am not an easy man, and it s not a porn movie, it s a light novel i need more back ground at start, no even if she look nice i don t want a stranger sleep with me (all the more if she can t talk and to know later she is a professional killer !) before know her a little... And please if you put the sand box tag let us more choose our path ! No i m not want to help sasha ! Why i do this ? No i don t want being an partner in crime with a theft and jail an innocent person or be a gangster... Well yes there are a story but in a sand box game like a house of rift for example the story and the lewd are separate, it s a way to do you can chose a girl (just one) and put the story on her with conditions. But avoid to link girl story (other than auto even) beetween her the only one who can do it (cross caracter story) it s the MC. Well on is point why the mc don t ask to sasha with yui case ? She can at les teleport him in very bad time...
It s more a personal state. I HATE mop hero ! you know there is the mc with a mop, the girl come, drop pants, drop a big shit in front of the MC s feet and say fuck you... and the MC ok, i love you dear and mop... i really hate this, a hero could be weak physically, poor, alone, sensitive, good or bad BUT he must have willpower otherwise he goes back to mcdo to sell fries... and more with the women we are supposed to love... And the MC is not a punching ball, what is all this aggressiveness ...? And before comment all caracter i would like to know this a remake of "sayonara zetsubou sensei" ? Did you notice that all the girls had a mental problem ? Primarose nervous breakdown, maxy nymphomaniac, mary agoraphobia, layla whimsical, yui selective mutism, charlotte the tsundere... well there is sasha the manipulative liar at start (3 event) i have really think to call a doctor...

PRIMAROSE, just perfect the little angel... I would like more romantic time there to much of sad for the moment.

MAXY, no, far to fast... love at first look ok why not, not much time ok, but really too direct even for a extrovert. she said she stalk you. why not try to start here with one or two even, it let us more time to let know her. And no i m sorry i dont love maxy. After the even on beach with primarose when she stole bath suit and look surprise when you tell her she make cry prim you see indifference, after this a had an auto event of charlotte and maxy for the 3 some... ok this woman does not care about the harm she does as long as he gets pleasure from it... so we could be friend but nothing more sorry... With a mop hero who don t say anything don t punich them (even when she rape you...) why would you like they change any thing ? Then you must chose who yes and who cant be your lovers. And at start maxy is a bitch ! But after Mary come this caracter change, i like her, she care more other, more affectionnate in the good way.
MARY, just perfect nothing to change the little flower too cute. i would like more romantic even too. i would like when she talk to death the MC make somthing big... with the other girl.
It seem you have to make a choose between them or create a new way as you said as mayor... i wait for the next of her story.

CHARLOTTE, the little rich girl, she is nice. her story is nice. I like this little cat which desperately takes out its claws to protect herself, but after the intimity is install why she is so grumpy ? When the defense is down a tsundere is very affectionnate. normaly... The following of the story with the mother look for the two sister should be interesting.

LAYLA, sorry i hate this girl. then i had not read this story too much. I stop the second time to suggest that the two restaurants work together... I don t dream she get angry and bordering on insult primarose the angel (who lose her familly, struggle with a resto, money and help me and maxy without second think) without knowing her... Fucking mop hero ! It s right to hate people you don t know ? fucking jerk ! (I read the rest of his story diagonally at last...)
Well, she is beautiful ok, but she is choleric, mean, conceited. No i m sorry but we could even not be friend... I said no to all the rest with her but the fucking mop mc fuck her without your opinion (could you delete the sandbox tag svp sand box game it s not chose only in what order you do caracters story who go where it want with or without the player choice).

YUI, no again... no long time after maxy, the same a girl you don t know come and want fuck you... directly... Lazy dev. And after this she come in your bed... no i move her... who sleep with a unknown girl who infiltrate your room who say you 3 words ? well, her story is rich and long and WHAT THE FUCK this mc is a dead weight... alone with this cock he go infiltrate a ennemy mafia hq... Aie ! this not him who is shoot in the back because this link with mafia... and no, all be alright.
This is really stupid but i up my perk and i like up perk in start with money, then when i do yui story after some time and some other caracter, she wait to the yorokobi, i don t like have no choice, a love and sex story is make by the two, not the MC but the player + girl and not he girl only (yes we are in a porn game i know). But in all the yui story (exept when you train with the dragons) fitness perk is useless i have 150 fitness when i go see the master of yui and her goon shoot me in one hit. yui beat me in one hit, i ve near 250 when i fight the dragon blue and red, but again no no use... Perk is to use for the prim resto and the fishing it s all, it s shame it is not unlock another text answer, another event. There is also a thing, yui caracter she love you, she want you love her but she don t want you care to her... to dangerous, this again make me angry, fucking mop hero said somsthing to wake up her... And now i become a part of mafia Youhou coool... Fucking mop hero you could not try to get yui out of hell, no you have to go dive in it and become the new boss...
Well, we know where the yui story will go, i would like to see the end. Cross some carater story would be nice there is a butterfly who can help you, it could help to the player trust more sasha too.

SASHA, Well it s maybe the more bad write caracter. Seriously no
she appears, i m at your service... ok i look formy friend, see you next time...
she appears, i can t tell you for you friend now, do you trust me ? well no i don t know you and I don t trust strangers who tell me that they are at my service first time we meet and tell me she choose do not tell me things. ok see you for lunch.
You go to yorokobi, well i m a thief and i m a demi god with red eyes and wite hair and i come from another realm, you have no choice to help me to lock an innocent for years, and become partner in crime with me... ok if you say it... (to the server) miss albino broke a cable could you call psychiatry please...? Besides reval the whole story here nearly the start is not a good choice, parallel world should be know more later. no problem to understand maxy, who is the mayor... etc...
After this she start her plan look for info tell you lot of thing, manipulate you (or try because is so oblivious), and come the first reward to see blue light...
Well i have gift, zoom, cool it work, i didn't believe it work, so we can transfer the powers. Ha ok so your gift is i serve you as a guinea pig to test if nova power could be transfert (at this time you understand you take yui and sasha s power to become mayor)... MMMmmm i want a kiss... Heuuu no. and then the fucking mop hero, ok i trust you... WHAT THE FUCK ! WHY ? NO she do nothing excpt try to manipulate you to found gold and go out... regardless of the victims... In fact i start like this caracter when she start to give up, come to her room, and the event when she drink, well here when she show you weak point, you know she trust you and i can trust her from his point. her caracter change her become more endearing and i like her... But it s near the end of her story for now...

So for ending lot of potential, but try to get help for the writing, and try to let player choose more, i know it s sad people don t see all your work, but you have to let chose player the way they want go a little more than now.
i m sorry for my english, i m french...
Shouldn't this be posted in reviews?
 

Stawer

Lucky Paradox
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Jun 6, 2017
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Always the "reviews" take things out of context so much and just call it bad writing, that I don't even feel like responding anymore, because instead of well-intentioned comments, it feels full of aggressiveness... I don't know... I hope I'm not being too prejudiced (although I feel that way).

What I want to say i; I even feel that many want LP to be A or B, or to look like this or that game.... No one would like to be told that your work should be like Juan's or Josh's, just because you like Juan or Josh better.... That's why I don't feel it as constructive criticism, but as a different point of view, and that's fine. I always take the time to read feedback and improve as much as possible, but as long as the vision is the same or at least the player has taken the trouble to understand that vision and not just compare and demand. Because that becomes a destructive criticism instead of being constructive, if a dev listens to all that and seeks to please everyone, the game loses its focus and instead of pleasing everyone, it ends up losing itself. Yes, maybe in terms of money raised it would be better, but I wouldn't feel comfortable trying to please everyone instead of having fun doing what I do.

It is assumed in the game universe that a person should have a "neutral personality", then by splitting a person into an alter and their reflection, you have two extremes of their personality. This is shown in the game with Mary and Maxy's personalities, which are exaggerated opposites, for example. I find it an interesting concept, as LP characters are not designed to be likable, they are opposite extremes of a personality and I know it's hard to empathize with them all (Impossible even for me, I have to admit that I have my favorites and others not so much hahaha ), they are exaggerated and sometimes shocking, but for me, it's what gives personality to the story and I like it that way.

LP is as much of a sandbox as a GTA game, there's a story with multiple outcomes and a lot of optional content. I would have loved to make an RPG with a mute protagonist and only dialogue options and hundreds of story changes and variations (like Fallout New Vegas), but it was too ambitious for my first game, and it wouldn't be as meaningful an ending as I want for LP.

Finally... Sasha isn't supposed to be someone trustworthy.... She's not supposed to be someone nice, nor does she meet any requirements to be a Waifu.... Her interactions are frustrating as she is someone who is manipulative and a liar..... You don't even know if what he says is true (You can assume it's all true, but how do you know? Just because a stranger tells you things you'll believe everything?

I don't know, Sasha for me has been a character that has given me a strange perspective as a writer, as she has been polarizing.... They always say that she's "very well written" or that "she's a mess of a character", honestly as a content creator I must admit it's been a fun experience xD

But I don't know, Lucky Paradox for me is an experiment.... It wasn't thought for a massive audience or to please the majority... It's written as if it were an encyclopedia and demands a lot from the player to connect the dots in a coherent way. It can be a frustrating experience, I accept that.... but to say it's bad writing? I just idk... Maybe you don't like the style, but that doesn't mean it's wrong, it's just different.

Well long post, sorry lol

tl:dr: Welp xD
 

tortorus

Member
Aug 29, 2018
136
142
Always the "reviews" take things out of context so much and just call it bad writing, that I don't even feel like responding anymore, because instead of well-intentioned comments, it feels full of aggressiveness... I don't know... I hope I'm not being too prejudiced (although I feel that way).

What I want to say i; I even feel that many want LP to be A or B, or to look like this or that game.... No one would like to be told that your work should be like Juan's or Josh's, just because you like Juan or Josh better.... That's why I don't feel it as constructive criticism, but as a different point of view, and that's fine. I always take the time to read feedback and improve as much as possible, but as long as the vision is the same or at least the player has taken the trouble to understand that vision and not just compare and demand. Because that becomes a destructive criticism instead of being constructive, if a dev listens to all that and seeks to please everyone, the game loses its focus and instead of pleasing everyone, it ends up losing itself. Yes, maybe in terms of money raised it would be better, but I wouldn't feel comfortable trying to please everyone instead of having fun doing what I do.

It is assumed in the game universe that a person should have a "neutral personality", then by splitting a person into an alter and their reflection, you have two extremes of their personality. This is shown in the game with Mary and Maxy's personalities, which are exaggerated opposites, for example. I find it an interesting concept, as LP characters are not designed to be likable, they are opposite extremes of a personality and I know it's hard to empathize with them all (Impossible even for me, I have to admit that I have my favorites and others not so much hahaha ), they are exaggerated and sometimes shocking, but for me, it's what gives personality to the story and I like it that way.

LP is as much of a sandbox as a GTA game, there's a story with multiple outcomes and a lot of optional content. I would have loved to make an RPG with a mute protagonist and only dialogue options and hundreds of story changes and variations (like Fallout New Vegas), but it was too ambitious for my first game, and it wouldn't be as meaningful an ending as I want for LP.

Finally... Sasha isn't supposed to be someone trustworthy.... She's not supposed to be someone nice, nor does she meet any requirements to be a Waifu.... Her interactions are frustrating as she is someone who is manipulative and a liar..... You don't even know if what he says is true (You can assume it's all true, but how do you know? Just because a stranger tells you things you'll believe everything?

I don't know, Sasha for me has been a character that has given me a strange perspective as a writer, as she has been polarizing.... They always say that she's "very well written" or that "she's a mess of a character", honestly as a content creator I must admit it's been a fun experience xD

But I don't know, Lucky Paradox for me is an experiment.... It wasn't thought for a massive audience or to please the majority... It's written as if it were an encyclopedia and demands a lot from the player to connect the dots in a coherent way. It can be a frustrating experience, I accept that.... but to say it's bad writing? I just idk... Maybe you don't like the style, but that doesn't mean it's wrong, it's just different.

Well long post, sorry lol

tl:dr: Welp xD
ok thanks for the answer
Well, you right, it s my opinion, nothing more, and you can ignore it, no problem. But for me in a devellopment stage of a game, to say what i find wrong, this is better for improve game (and for now i thing the writing of some caracter is bad.... yes i know, i had make game too not lewd but...). You see this at unconstructive criticism, ok if you want, i just said what i think of your game nothing more... don t take it at personnal attack, i m here for your game, because i could like it, i m sorry but i m not interest with you personnaly M dev.

So ok you make his game not for every one, you make this game for you, it s your first... and you like it this way, with mains caracters you can t like and only one road... ok Then this game, i think, it s not a good harem/sandbox game, i will never like it then it s not for me...
Thanks for had listen. i don t come bother you again.

ps, gta is just an action open world with fix world and not a sand box game... minecraft is a sand box game because you have to defeat the ender dragon but no i will build a star ship destroyer of 5000 blocks long... i choose the way i want play, this is sand box game... (well, it is above all the fact of being able to take a block and place it anywhere who gave the name of sand box but now, it is also a standard of play free).
 
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MasterWizard1

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Jul 31, 2019
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Bonjours, i have just finish to test this game, and i write a feedback.
First of all, the caracter designe is really nice, hud is nice i never be lost, the story have potential, parallel world, the sex scene are nice but a little too simple.
The great black point is the writing of caracter... what a mess at start.
Except for primarose, charlotte and mary all the main girl start is to rewrite. Seriously i know it s a porn game but the "He you , yes you... What is your name.... MC. I love you MC... Well when we fuck ? No! (with a broom) go away crazy ! ".... Let us like a little more a caracter before fuck them.... I am not an easy man, and it s not a porn movie, it s a light novel i need more back ground at start, no even if she look nice i don t want a stranger sleep with me (all the more if she can t talk and to know later she is a professional killer !) before know her a little... And please if you put the sand box tag let us more choose our path ! No i m not want to help sasha ! Why i do this ? No i don t want being an partner in crime with a theft and jail an innocent person or be a gangster... Well yes there are a story but in a sand box game like a house of rift for example the story and the lewd are separate, it s a way to do you can chose a girl (just one) and put the story on her with conditions. But avoid to link girl story (other than auto even) beetween her the only one who can do it (cross caracter story) it s the MC. Well on is point why the mc don t ask to sasha with yui case ? She can at les teleport him in very bad time...
It s more a personal state. I HATE mop hero ! you know there is the mc with a mop, the girl come, drop pants, drop a big shit in front of the MC s feet and say fuck you... and the MC ok, i love you dear and mop... i really hate this, a hero could be weak physically, poor, alone, sensitive, good or bad BUT he must have willpower otherwise he goes back to mcdo to sell fries... and more with the women we are supposed to love... And the MC is not a punching ball, what is all this aggressiveness ...? And before comment all caracter i would like to know this a remake of "sayonara zetsubou sensei" ? Did you notice that all the girls had a mental problem ? Primarose nervous breakdown, maxy nymphomaniac, mary agoraphobia, layla whimsical, yui selective mutism, charlotte the tsundere... well there is sasha the manipulative liar at start (3 event) i have really think to call a doctor...

PRIMAROSE, just perfect the little angel... I would like more romantic time there to much of sad for the moment.

MAXY, no, far to fast... love at first look ok why not, not much time ok, but really too direct even for a extrovert. she said she stalk you. why not try to start here with one or two even, it let us more time to let know her. And no i m sorry i dont love maxy. After the even on beach with primarose when she stole bath suit and look surprise when you tell her she make cry prim you see indifference, after this a had an auto event of charlotte and maxy for the 3 some... ok this woman does not care about the harm she does as long as he gets pleasure from it... so we could be friend but nothing more sorry... With a mop hero who don t say anything don t punich them (even when she rape you...) why would you like they change any thing ? Then you must chose who yes and who cant be your lovers. And at start maxy is a bitch ! But after Mary come this caracter change, i like her, she care more other, more affectionnate in the good way.
MARY, just perfect nothing to change the little flower too cute. i would like more romantic even too. i would like when she talk to death the MC make somthing big... with the other girl.
It seem you have to make a choose between them or create a new way as you said as mayor... i wait for the next of her story.

CHARLOTTE, the little rich girl, she is nice. her story is nice. I like this little cat which desperately takes out its claws to protect herself, but after the intimity is install why she is so grumpy ? When the defense is down a tsundere is very affectionnate. normaly... The following of the story with the mother look for the two sister should be interesting.

LAYLA, sorry i hate this girl. then i had not read this story too much. I stop the second time to suggest that the two restaurants work together... I don t dream she get angry and bordering on insult primarose the angel (who lose her familly, struggle with a resto, money and help me and maxy without second think) without knowing her... Fucking mop hero ! It s right to hate people you don t know ? fucking jerk ! (I read the rest of his story diagonally at last...)
Well, she is beautiful ok, but she is choleric, mean, conceited. No i m sorry but we could even not be friend... I said no to all the rest with her but the fucking mop mc fuck her without your opinion (could you delete the sandbox tag svp sand box game it s not chose only in what order you do caracters story who go where it want with or without the player choice).

YUI, no again... no long time after maxy, the same a girl you don t know come and want fuck you... directly... Lazy dev. And after this she come in your bed... no i move her... who sleep with a unknown girl who infiltrate your room who say you 3 words ? well, her story is rich and long and WHAT THE FUCK this mc is a dead weight... alone with this cock he go infiltrate a ennemy mafia hq... Aie ! this not him who is shoot in the back because this link with mafia... and no, all be alright.
This is really stupid but i up my perk and i like up perk in start with money, then when i do yui story after some time and some other caracter, she wait to the yorokobi, i don t like have no choice, a love and sex story is make by the two, not the MC but the player + girl and not he girl only (yes we are in a porn game i know). But in all the yui story (exept when you train with the dragons) fitness perk is useless i have 150 fitness when i go see the master of yui and her goon shoot me in one hit. yui beat me in one hit, i ve near 250 when i fight the dragon blue and red, but again no no use... Perk is to use for the prim resto and the fishing it s all, it s shame it is not unlock another text answer, another event. There is also a thing, yui caracter she love you, she want you love her but she don t want you care to her... to dangerous, this again make me angry, fucking mop hero said somsthing to wake up her... And now i become a part of mafia Youhou coool... Fucking mop hero you could not try to get yui out of hell, no you have to go dive in it and become the new boss...
Well, we know where the yui story will go, i would like to see the end. Cross some carater story would be nice there is a butterfly who can help you, it could help to the player trust more sasha too.

SASHA, Well it s maybe the more bad write caracter. Seriously no
she appears, i m at your service... ok i look formy friend, see you next time...
she appears, i can t tell you for you friend now, do you trust me ? well no i don t know you and I don t trust strangers who tell me that they are at my service first time we meet and tell me she choose do not tell me things. ok see you for lunch.
You go to yorokobi, well i m a thief and i m a demi god with red eyes and wite hair and i come from another realm, you have no choice to help me to lock an innocent for years, and become partner in crime with me... ok if you say it... (to the server) miss albino broke a cable could you call psychiatry please...? Besides reval the whole story here nearly the start is not a good choice, parallel world should be know more later. no problem to understand maxy, who is the mayor... etc...
After this she start her plan look for info tell you lot of thing, manipulate you (or try because is so oblivious), and come the first reward to see blue light...
Well i have gift, zoom, cool it work, i didn't believe it work, so we can transfer the powers. Ha ok so your gift is i serve you as a guinea pig to test if nova power could be transfert (at this time you understand you take yui and sasha s power to become mayor)... MMMmmm i want a kiss... Heuuu no. and then the fucking mop hero, ok i trust you... WHAT THE FUCK ! WHY ? NO she do nothing excpt try to manipulate you to found gold and go out... regardless of the victims... In fact i start like this caracter when she start to give up, come to her room, and the event when she drink, well here when she show you weak point, you know she trust you and i can trust her from his point. her caracter change her become more endearing and i like her... But it s near the end of her story for now...

So for ending lot of potential, but try to get help for the writing, and try to let player choose more, i know it s sad people don t see all your work, but you have to let chose player the way they want go a little more than now.
i m sorry for my english, i m french...
While I understand you are French and maybe translation went wrong somewhere but a few things sounded a bit rude. I think the first thing to understand is that all the characters have different personalities and you don't have to like them all. Hopefully you at least understand their story and why they feel a certain way. Everyone likes different things just like the characters that have their own likes and dislikes too. You can also choose to develop with a character or not. You don't have to be in a relationship with all of them.

You talked about how you hate Layla but also you said you completely skipped reading her story entirely. You also mention how you don't understand why Charlotte is grumpy but it is explained in the game how she doesn't like her time being wasted and comes from a strict family. All of the characters take a bit of time to develop before you can get intimate with them. Maxy is the exception because that is who she is: crazy, obsessed with you, and wants your kittens. That is her character. All the characters deal with their own issues just like all of us in real life. None of us are perfect or have perfect lives. We all struggle with something.

Also telling someone "to get help for the writing" is kinda rude to say. Stawer didn't do anything wrong to you or was rude to you at all. It is fine to have criticism but I think that was uncalled for. You also mention how he was a "Lazy Dev" when maybe you meant lazy writing? Even then I don't think that was appropriate when Stawer works very hard to put a new update out. Tons of work goes into the story, renders, and various other things. I don't think that is lazy at all, and nothing from the game feels like that.
 

UncleFredo

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Stawer:
Speaking as someone who almost never plays anything close to a sandbox, I have to say this is an amazingly enjoyable game. One that I impatiently wait for your next update. Of course falling for Maxie may have colored my judgement, but none the less, my congratulations on creating an amazing game, and my thanks for the same, and your ongoing commitment that make this possible.

Seriously you've created a fantastic game.
 
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