Alright this has some good style to it, the renders are solid and the world interesting.
At first I wasn't digging it because I really don't like being pushed around, how she handed over her money to the dude in the car was ridiculous or just accepted owing that guy half a million and stuff... but getting to wail on those thugs was fun, and if she can become a whirling frenzy of death as hinted at then it might not be so bad...
Some qualms:
Why is the MC is short... there's a bit where she's standing next to her friend in university and legit looks like a stumpy little midget.
More importantly, what's up with her ridiculous hair... I know it shouldn't matter, but it's just so dumb looking, I guess maybe she's trying to gain a few inches to elevate herself beyond 4 foot and look people sized but I found it distracting throughout (especially when she looked normal as a child or when she was a reckless youngster).
Mariko (I think was her name, the Asian one) has serious dude face... unless her backstory is that she was a dude who was forced into gender reassignment surgery so they could prostitute her out then something is very off.
But I enjoyed it, despite not always vibing with female MC games... but as long as I can get through it being a corrupt badass and not taking a dick then I'll be happy.