I am not saying this to be mean or hurtful.... I am saying it cause I like the game but it's hard to get through updates with the following issue.
Is there anyone working on the dialog in the game? Does the game have a writer? I love the game but the dialog totally throws me out of it. Some of the lines are so cringe or make no sense at all. Lots of spelling errors that would not even pass if a spellcheck had been used.
Examples of spelling errors, poor word choice or just bad dialog.
"But I would need Asistent's for that" (spelling)
"Here's a great detergent. Proven with an anti-fat effect." (
Degreaser)
"People Haven't not yet come up with anything better than classes." (double negative that makes the sentence the opposite)
"Hey, why did you bounce off me like the boiling water." (ugh)
If it was only a rare ocasion I could look past it since it's a VN and not eveyone can have a paid writer or English is not a first language. The problem is that it's every single interaction with every character. There are also sooooo many errors with wrong words/spelling and also dialog on screen coming from the wrong person.
I'd love to see @
Bear in the Night get someone to clean up the conversations in this game.
There is also an issue with how the MC dialog treats every female character in the game as a overly emotional airhead boobbag who have no valid thoughts of their own without his help but thats another thread.