Well I'm definitely curious how it'll turn out, I do like the personalities of the characters
I feel like it could stand to give us a little more control over the text-whether it shows up instantly or not-I tend to read fairly quickly. It would also be nice for replaying to be able to move through the scenes we've already gone through quicker, and seeing as it's a Choice based game I'd probably play it at Least twice if not more as a full product ^_^
The Game encounter was fairly neat, easily readable and I liked the special moves I could spend on. I noticed my music and sound settings didn't matter during it, though.
The conversations -feel- a little roughly translated, they could probably do with some polishing for dialogue, but the artwork is very good, and even with that gap the personalities of the characters was pretty clear.
All in all, nice work, putting this on my watchlist =)