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I like this game so far, but there are some basic gramatical errors in the text like mixup of he/she,or this one:
- Thea would be furious with me if she saw this
- I never allowed his to interfere with my dressing
- She'd be offended if she saw....
Just strange
Another example:
(offer is to a girl)
- Thea would be furious with me if she saw this
- I never allowed his to interfere with my dressing
- She'd be offended if she saw....
Just strange
Another example:
(offer is to a girl)
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Good work but i really don't like games with every meaning of words "video without game"... or in other words "playing clicky" with mouse!
Thanx anyway.
Thanx anyway.
- May 15, 2018
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Grammatically, it's correct but worded badly. It has nothing to do with him questioning his gender. Why even go there?
Here is a good alternative.
The main character suffered from long-term depression after his childhood love left him. This story is about how he returned to a normal everyday life.
Here a another example.
The main character, Gunizz, who suffers from long-term unawareness after being abandoned by their childhood binkie and their journey to return to their normal life within their daily routine.
Does the developer roll the dice every time he defines a gender? Her,His,She,Him even "It" WTF
I like this game so far, but there are some basic gramatical errors in the text like mixup of he/she,or this one:
- Thea would be furious with me if she saw this
- I never allowed his to interfere with my dressing
- She'd be offended if she saw....
Just strange
Another example:
(offer is to a girl)
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I think game is machine translated from Turkish to English. Some meaningles sentences make sense when you translate them to Turkish word by word.
And there is no gender specific phrase in Turkish like he/she, him/her, his/hers, etc. There is only it and plural they for everything. That is why machine translates can change he to she in next sentence.
- Oct 26, 2017
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Umm... OK, The problem is the team is not taking the next step and having the translation polished to fit English grammar and syntax, which is the root of our frustration. This game has gone on too long with too many iterations of the story and the look of some characters. It's too late to save this game.
I did proofreading for them at the beginning for free, and they used a fraction of my work. As a proofreader, you can't have that and be credited for proofreading the game. It reflects badly on your reputation.
IMO the team should scrap this game and start over with a new cast and new story with great dialogue.
- May 15, 2018
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Don't get me wrong, I am not trying to defend bad grammar in game. I just shared my opinion about why it can be like that. I played first episode 5 and do not know how it developed. We are talking about a visual novel, of course it should have at least decent English to enjoy and have fun. For me story and how it is told is more importand that visuals.
I am talking about the language but do not judge me, I am not native English speaker
I am talking about the language but do not judge me, I am not native English speaker
dude this gender thing makes me laugh so hard. I think a beta version should be released first to correct these grammar mistakes, other things doesn't bother me but gender mismatches are hilarious. Now I know why people are taking pronouns so seriously.
- Feb 8, 2018
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She did not forget her turban, only men wear turbans. She forgot her head scarf or hijab.
I realize this is a trivial point but there is so much that is misunderstood about Muslim culture that I wanted to correct at least this part.
So this developer just abandoned another game(Silent House) he started. Good luck with this one
Nope, Silent House has a new name: https://f95zone.to/threads/world-of-secrets-prologue-rwa-studios.169591/
- Aug 24, 2019
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Was trying this one and I have to say the story unfolds nicely and somehow it really pulls you in. Also like the chars sofar. Hope this continues as its written from a story quite nicely.
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