VN Unity Mad Turn [S2 v0.3] [DonDimon]

[Jstforme]

Were you disappointed in her after she slept with Ramon behind Matt's back?

I'd say for the vast majority of people like myself that love this game, Anna was a favorite up to the point when she so easily succumbed to Ramon. I have only seen one person (and he was a troll of the worst sorts) speak positively about her betraying her "partner" by doing what she did behind his back.
I hope something terrible happens to her for her betrayal...I wouldn't mind even if it's Ramon, and not Matt that makes her suffer for so carelessly opening her legs for a person she knows is a manipulative dirtbag who enjoys turning women into whores. I don't think she'll stop at Ramon either, she'll probably work her way up to spreading her legs for Chris's whole crew of shit for brains, maybe even Chris himself before it's all said and done....She has proven to be dumb enough at this point.

 

[quyxote]

Were you disappointed in her after she slept with Ramon behind Matt's back?

I was not at all disappointed! I liked it actually. But it seems that some people didn't like it very much. What I meant is that an ending for Matt's revenge for Anna staying with Ramon on his back, for me, would also be cool. The more options the better! I like all the paths you've created! So I don't care because I already know that I will like it. You see?

 

[quyxote]

I'd say for the vast majority of people like myself that love this game, Anna was a favorite up to the point when she so easily succumbed to Ramon. I have only seen one person (and he was a troll of the worst sorts) speak positively about her betraying her "partner" by doing what she did behind his back.
I hope something terrible happens to her for her betrayal...I wouldn't mind even if it's Ramon, and not Matt that makes her suffer for so carelessly opening her legs for a person she knows is a manipulative dirtbag who enjoys turning women into whores. I don't think she'll stop at Ramon either, she'll probably work her way up to spreading her legs for Chris's whole crew of shit for brains, maybe even Chris himself before it's all said and done....She has proven to be dumb enough at this point.

Wow! If she somehow succumbed to the point of spreading her legs for Chris! Man, that would also be really cool. But I like multiple possibilities. I think that's what the author thinks.

 

[texasterry]

Your comments are very informative and useful as usual. Especially for those who doubt whether to play this game or not because of the NTR tag.

You are welcome. But my comments are free, so just remember to always 'take them for what they are worth.' lol

But I stand by my comment that your game IS different from most of the vast variety of NTR games that I've seen float by on here. But I can't go too far out on that proverbial limb, because I'm not a connoisseur of the genre.

From my discussions with you, your game seems more ambitious than the most (in terms of scope and scale, number of locations characters, variety of personalities, length of story, choices that genuinely affect the story, etc.) You seem to have a specific story arc you want to tell and whether of not you have a written outline in hand or you just know the benchmarks in your head. That only makes your game that much more impressive, to my mind, considering that you are an army of one.

I did replay the night club and am dumbstruck at just how many possible options/combinations there actually seem to be. But I think I did find one scenario that fell through the cracks of your play testing though.

Spoiler: Night Club Choices

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[Manul56]

Were you disappointed in her after she slept with Ramon behind Matt's back?

Yes,appart from be stuppid to sleep whit the enemy ,it was also a betrayal even if you dont considerer him a friend ,he is still your partner and in my opinion there is some thing that you dont do out fo respet.Lets see how this situacion will be resolve and if she actually regret it

 

[DANNY12690]

Yes,appart from be stuppid to sleep whit the enemy ,it was also a betrayal even if you dont considerer him a friend ,he is still your partner and in my opinion there is some thing that you dont do out fo respet.Lets see how this situacion will be resolve and if she actually regret it

You mean, regret it with a gangbang ? Hell, I'd love to see that . Randy, Matt, Ramon, Williams, everyone should join the party.
Not to mention Dave with his baton and his baton(the metallic one )

 

[quyxote]

I created this signature because I didn't find any with Anna. Feel free to use!

 

[JackSatcher]

ANy plans to compress this game? it's rather large to download via mega

 

[DANNY12690]

You mean, regret it with a gangbang ? Hell, I'd love to see that . Randy, Matt, Ramon, Williams, everyone should join the party.
Not to mention Dave with his baton and his baton(the metallic one )

I guess DonDimonGames just got an idea .

 

[DonDimonGames]

Wow! If she somehow succumbed to the point of spreading her legs for Chris! Man, that would also be really cool. But I like multiple possibilities. I think that's what the author thinks.

Yes, the ability to choose is what makes games different from books or comics. And since this game has fans with absolutely different opinions, it would be foolish not to take advantage of this difference. Some events, however, will be shared by everyone. I can't say which ones yet, to avoid spoilers.

I created this signature because I didn't find any with Anna. Feel free to use!

It looks great! I like it.

ANy plans to compress this game? it's rather large to download via mega

This is compressed version. It's so large because CGs in the game have an unreasonably large size . But in fact, there is no visible difference between 500kb picture and 2mb picture. Sо, in update 0.10, I'm going to reduce the game's size.

I guess DonDimonGames just got an idea .

It's a porn game, after all.

 

[Morghast]

I have to admit that the whole Anna-Ramon thing was script forced and in an rough way... You never really had the opportunity to brush him of and as Anna knowing he is a minion of your arch rival that would be the logical thing to do... But as player thinking that it was necessary for the scenario to unfold i think I'll give it a break until I see how the story goes... If she goes full corruption mode after all this hard work they put to find evidence personally I will consider it bad writing. Let's hope there would be some kind of redemption in the future...

 

[texasterry]

DonDimonGames

So I had a couple questions buried in my last post. I'm not surprised you missed them since I tend to be 'long winded.'

But they were:

Spoiler: Night Club Choices

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Anyway, despite my nitpicking comments, the massive variety of options in that update left me stunned. I don't recall, of the top of my head, any game with that many genuine options. Good job.

 

[quyxote]

I couldn't control myself and create this one more.

 

[DonDimonGames]

DonDimonGames

So I had a couple questions buried in my last post. I'm not surprised you missed them since I tend to be 'long winded.'

But they were:

Spoiler: Night Club Choices

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Anyway, despite my nitpicking comments, the massive variety of options in that update left me stunned. I don't recall, of the top of my head, any game with that many genuine options. Good job.

Spoiler: Night club choises

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[DonDimonGames]

I couldn't control myself and create this one more.

I definitely like your style. The images you've made clearly show that the girls ' lives have taken a turn. The only pity is that I can't have more than two pictures in the sign.

 

[texasterry]

Spoiler: Night club choises

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That's OK. Honestly, given the large volume of stuff I have written here lately, I'm impressed you haven't missed a lot more... lol

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[quyxote]

I definitely like your style. The images you've made clearly show that the girls ' lives have taken a turn. The only pity is that I can't have more than two pictures in the sign.

Thanks!

I'm playing more slowly, and I have to say: the story of this game is so good! The characters are well built and the flow of dialogue is really good. Sometimes it reminds me of the movie Pulp Fiction. The soundtrack is also very well placed. This leads me to think: have you been inspired by any other work to think about this story?

I'm curious to know more about this mysterious old man, John Smith (Old Chap). How does he know so much? Is it Matt's super ego? A hallucination of him as in the movie Fight Club?

The game isn't even over yet and I'm already speculating what a sequel would look like: Mad Turn 2!

I think you just don't have any more supporters for lack of a more pleasant interface, because everything else is very good! Point and click gameplay, mini games ...

 

[texasterry]

Thanks!

I'm playing more slowly, and I have to say: the story of this game is so good! The characters are well built and the flow of dialogue is really good. Sometimes it reminds me of the movie Pulp Fiction. The soundtrack is also very well placed. This leads me to think: have you been inspired by any other work to think about this story?

I'm curious to know more about this mysterious old man, John Smith (Old Chap). How does he know so much? Is it Matt's super ego? A hallucination of him as in the movie Fight Club?

The game isn't even over yet and I'm already speculating what a sequel would look like: Mad Turn 2!

I think you just don't have any more supporters for lack of a more pleasant interface, because everything else is very good! Point and click gameplay, mini games ...

I agree with most of what you said, but after this latest betrayal/revelation, Matt might be a little mentally 'fragile' and I just hope for his sake that the old man from the park doesn't later betray him by turning out to be William's consigliere! I think I'm gonna have nightmares of Matt walking up behind the old man sitting on a park bench only to see Williams handing him a bottle of cheap wine wrapped in a brown paper bag as his offering for the next 'consultation with the Oracle'.... lol
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And according to the game's developer, this game is only 50% (or maybe less) complete. So there may not be as much 'story left to tell' at the end for a sequel? We shall have to wait and see. I just hope he finishes this one properly.

 

[quyxote]

I agree with most of what you said, but after this latest betrayal/revelation, Matt might be a little mentally 'fragile' and I just hope for his sake that the old man from the park doesn't later betray him by turning out to be William's consigliere! I think I'm gonna have nightmares of Matt walking up behind the old man sitting on a park bench only to see Williams handing him a bottle of cheap wine wrapped in a brown paper bag as his offering for the next 'consultation with the Oracle'.... lol
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And according to the game's developer, this game is only 50% (or maybe less) complete. So there may not be as much 'story left to tell' at the end for a sequel? We shall have to wait and see. I just hope he finishes this one properly.

I find it very difficult for John to be Christopher's partner. He is very sincere in his advice. Matt's Mad Turn I see more as a second birth for him. He never had relationships before Patti. He's learning as a teenager how to deal with girls. John is helping him with this. So I think it's just his inner self talking to himself, you know?

 

[texasterry]

I find it very difficult for John to be Christopher's partner. He is very sincere in his advice. Matt's Mad Turn I see more as a second birth for him. He never had relationships before Patti. He's learning as a teenager how to deal with girls. John is helping him with this. So I think it's just his inner self talking to himself, you know?

Yes, your observations are certainly valid, and definitely more 'thoughtful' than mine were there.

Mine are admittedly more sarcastic. While some of my cynical views are partly attributable to my 'nature,' the rest are due to how EVERY important figure in Matt's life (wife, boss, and now Anna) that he has relied upon, has not only failed him, but actively or passively betrayed him. So, logic turned and pointed it's boney figure of accusation to the poor old man since he IS the last figure to have not betrayed Matt SO FAR...

But seriously, yes, I too am hopeful that the old man will continue to be sort of a 'spirit guide' to Matt.

And story aspects like this are one of the reasons that I, of all people, am playing an NTR game. It has a reasonably balanced, or fair story, for the most part (except for the Anna/Ramon part in the last chapter, which I have commented on previously.) The story gives and takes. It allows you to root for/associate with/hope for the protagonist as he endures these trials. This makes for a more interesting story as a result.

Most NTR games seem to grind their protagonist's bones into meal, they are so utterly crushed. That may work for a '100% pure porn kink delivery system' kind of game (if that is your thing) but not so great for a compelling story associated with your porn.