i tried this game and it was so awesome, i'm really surprised about the negative comments.
personally i think having a huge amount of fetishes in one game is a huge plus. sure it can be a turn off if there's fetishes you don't like, but it was said many times that if you don't like X fetish you can avoid it. it's very simple really, after your first encounter with each girl you get the idea of what fetishes she has. don't want scat? don't interact with the girls that do scat.
anyway, imo having a big selection is a big plus and the writing is good. i was worried when i read there's no cg but it worked. i played thru the 4 days and i was left wanting more. i think 4 days is too short, and sure that's a bad thing for me, but it speaks highly of the game when a small amount of gameplay got me hooked. and i think this feat is particularly harder to achieve for a text game. besides the wide selection of fetishes, replayability and multiple routes are also huge deals, bonus points for that too.
i enjoyed this game so much, but it was so sad when i reached the end of this version. you know when a certain girl edges you and doesn't let you finish? yeah, that's how i felt. it was fun when she did that to john, it was sad when the game did it to me
so yeah, good job on the game, it's easily one of the best i've seen around here this year. looking forward to the next update. meanwhile, i believe i have more routes to travel, so if you'll excuse me.