VN Ren'Py Abandoned Magic Sean [v0.7 + Christmas Dream] [Longfellow Earl]

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Draverik

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I love the the girls and the visuals altogether but i gotta say, wasn't impressed with the rest of it. At all.
What the hell happened? Who is Sean and who the hell are these people?

Is this supposed to be some kind of incest game that requires some patching for it to make any sense?
 
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kxjoh32

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I love the the girls and the visuals altogether but i gotta say, wasn't impressed with the rest of it. At all.
What the hell happened? Who is Sean and who the hell are these people?

Is this supposed to be some kind of incest game that requires some patching for it to make any sense?
This is my 1st time playing this and as far as i can see there isn't any incest nor any real reason to have it.
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Longfellow Earl

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Hey dev, regardless of the issues with the game

i think the concept is really good. I like the story !

is there incest in the game ?
Thank you ;) I'm glad you like it ;) and not sorry but no incest


I love the the girls and the visuals altogether but i gotta say, wasn't impressed with the rest of it. At all.
What the hell happened? Who is Sean and who the hell are these people?

Is this supposed to be some kind of incest game that requires some patching for it to make any sense?
I don't know if the translation is good since I speak via a translator but
the frame is revealed as it goes along

Completely linear, no matter what choice you click.
it may seem like this, but by moving forward in history it will no longer be the case



There are a few things to understand, the biggest problem I encounter and due to translation, I would like to create complex dialogues but the problem is that the more I create complex dialogues in French the more they are poorly translated into English... for the moment I focus on bringing more choice to the game, I understand the critics and believe me I am the first to be disappointed by that
 

Longfellow Earl

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I sent the link for a little bonus episode "Magic Sean Christmas Dream" to the staff ;) I hope you like it, have a nice day ;)
 
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DA22

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the x-mas special is only one scene yeah and not connected to the game it seems, still nice little elf;)
 
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Dipsode

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Bonjour, j'aime bien le jeu mais .. sans vouloir chipoter, le français demanderait quelques corrections.. Au point que je préfère prendre la version anglaise, ça me dérange moins ..
Au cas où , j'ai entrepris de corriger le texte à mes moments perdus :geek::coffee:


Hello, I like the game but... without wanting to make a fuss, the french would like some corrections... So much so that I prefer to take the english version, it doesn't bother me so much...
In case, I have undertaken to correct the text in my spare time
(Thank's to DeepL.com .. Translating is so much easyer and faster ...)
 

Safetydummy

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In this game you play Sean, a man in search of something, but what ? Discover it.
I am 100% sure it is not sex or women.
Or story or plot or sense. I'm sorry, but I've watched some bad, bargain, basement porn with laughable premises and they deserve Oscars or Academy Awards compared to this...story?

No offense, but it makes absolutely 0% of any kind of sense? I get that maybe you're going for a "Pulp Fiction" kinda vibe by telling it out or order or maybe just filling in the plot through a series of flashbacks, but it's really hard to suspend disbelief when none of it is believable... :) I don't even think making or adding "taboo" content could bolster the story/plot/premise at this point.

The character models weren't too bad- I really like Asian Hermione (Lila), Audrey, Tara, and the tall blonde (Sunny)...sadly Mary and Cindy look like the "after" models from those shows about botched plastic surgery. You can, in fact, try to over-attractive someone to the point where they become monsters. I really hope that something happens to make this a lot more cohesive and ties it (somewhat) together...

P.S. What is the "Christmas" content? I didn't see or find anything particularly festive in the game. It was more like a lump of coal in a stocking. :) (Seriously, though...where is it?)
 
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