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Love the ending with Yumi, guessing it has something to do with Donald? Just seems like merger drama waiting to happen lol. Godspeeed dev.
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v0.2 is almost 90% done. Will be ready to release in next 7-10 days
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- Oct 17, 2017
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Lactation? 
Pregnancy and Femdom planned?
I should have seen this game sooner?
Pregnancy and Femdom planned?
I should have seen this game sooner?
Oh wow, just for my birthday! You shouldn't have!
First time playing, I like it so far; this is honestly kind of my ideal for these types of games where the characters have, well, character but the writing isn't overwrought or tedious. Scenes happen at a good pace.
Now for some nitpicking.
And outside of the nitpicking I can't get the Tiffany gallery to unlock. It says I have 24 out of 25 and I have no idea what I'm missing, seeing as how I've now gone through a couple different times and hit all the choices I can.
edit: Well, I was originally just going to leave it at that but apparently I'd rather troubleshoot porn games than get actual work done.
I dug into the game and the reason the Tiffany gallery won't unlock is that ch2_tsv13 is listed as part of the gallery and in movies.rpy but never actually triggered anywhere in hscenes.rpy, so it never gets seen.
Anyway, my work here is done and I look forward to future content!
First time playing, I like it so far; this is honestly kind of my ideal for these types of games where the characters have, well, character but the writing isn't overwrought or tedious. Scenes happen at a good pace.
Now for some nitpicking.
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And outside of the nitpicking I can't get the Tiffany gallery to unlock. It says I have 24 out of 25 and I have no idea what I'm missing, seeing as how I've now gone through a couple different times and hit all the choices I can.
edit: Well, I was originally just going to leave it at that but apparently I'd rather troubleshoot porn games than get actual work done.
I dug into the game and the reason the Tiffany gallery won't unlock is that ch2_tsv13 is listed as part of the gallery and in movies.rpy but never actually triggered anywhere in hscenes.rpy, so it never gets seen.
Anyway, my work here is done and I look forward to future content!
I'll look into the issues you mentioned. The logic behind the 'water bottle' was that the MC ran to catch the train and got really thirsty, but I get why that would feel weired to a lot of people.
I understood that part of the logic, but unless this train ride was 6 hours long most people would just deal with it until they got to their destination. Like I said, not a big deal it just jumped out at me.
One thing I forgot to add under my nitpicks section is I found the choice of music for the Tiffany sex scene a little too somber. It is music I would associate with more serious scenes as opposed to a good fucking.
But like I also said, overall I did enjoy this quite a bit and am looking forward to more.
One thing I forgot to add under my nitpicks section is I found the choice of music for the Tiffany sex scene a little too somber. It is music I would associate with more serious scenes as opposed to a good fucking.
But like I also said, overall I did enjoy this quite a bit and am looking forward to more.
I forgot I had removed that animation from hscenes because it didn't look very good but now I realize I forgot to remove it from the gallery setup. This will be fixed in the next update
The lack of choices in this game is... odd. Obviously there are choices but at the same time there are moments as I'm playing through where I would expect to be given a decision to make and yet the dev decided what the MC would do already.
The water bottle scene is one rather bizarre example, who drinks from a random stranger's water bottle? If they were in the middle of a desert I'd understand. That is one spot where I would have expected a choice like: "Ask for a drink?" or "Just chat" or "Ignore her". And I would also expect that she could respond in some manner that shows she thinks it is odd that the MC asked for a drink.
The lack of choices is especially noticeable on Saturday with Laura at her house. Staying to watch the movie is automatically decided as is staying in the guest room. Both feel like perfect spots to allow the player to decide to go home and end the day yet no choice is given. The MC literally lives next door and yet because it is raining he is incapable of leaving (is he water soluble?). He even borrows someone else's clothing so he can sleep in the guest room, which is just weird since he lives next door, isn't drunk, and could just go home. It is also incredibly awkward for her to proposition the MC for sex when her children are home (IRL I expect there are very few single parents that will have their first night of sex with a new partner when their children are home and could interrupt them/walk in/hear them). I was hoping for an option to say no for now, not no forever.
In this update there are two opportunities to have sex which I decided against because they are awkwardly presented. Fucking someone that the MC just met - the daughter of a powerful man, a woman who will be a business partner, and could use that information against the MC seems like a bad idea. And the idea of fucking Laura when her kids are home, one already hates the MC, and they could be discovered/caught also seems like a bad idea. I hope that going forward we won't end up constantly blueballing the MC because the sex is always presented in a way that makes it seem dumb to do it.
The water bottle scene is one rather bizarre example, who drinks from a random stranger's water bottle? If they were in the middle of a desert I'd understand. That is one spot where I would have expected a choice like: "Ask for a drink?" or "Just chat" or "Ignore her". And I would also expect that she could respond in some manner that shows she thinks it is odd that the MC asked for a drink.
The lack of choices is especially noticeable on Saturday with Laura at her house. Staying to watch the movie is automatically decided as is staying in the guest room. Both feel like perfect spots to allow the player to decide to go home and end the day yet no choice is given. The MC literally lives next door and yet because it is raining he is incapable of leaving (is he water soluble?). He even borrows someone else's clothing so he can sleep in the guest room, which is just weird since he lives next door, isn't drunk, and could just go home. It is also incredibly awkward for her to proposition the MC for sex when her children are home (IRL I expect there are very few single parents that will have their first night of sex with a new partner when their children are home and could interrupt them/walk in/hear them). I was hoping for an option to say no for now, not no forever.
In this update there are two opportunities to have sex which I decided against because they are awkwardly presented. Fucking someone that the MC just met - the daughter of a powerful man, a woman who will be a business partner, and could use that information against the MC seems like a bad idea. And the idea of fucking Laura when her kids are home, one already hates the MC, and they could be discovered/caught also seems like a bad idea. I hope that going forward we won't end up constantly blueballing the MC because the sex is always presented in a way that makes it seem dumb to do it.
Hmm, there is a fail in the game. I ignord this Ally girl in the bar, but the sisters talk about her and i am hitting on her. And MC responds.
- Dec 4, 2018
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English is my third language, so I make a lot of mistakes. I hope people will excuse that for now. I will try to hire proofreaders once I start getting a bit more support for the game.
I was having some issues with the android port. I'm trying to fix it now. Will post it here once that's sorted out
- Dec 4, 2018
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Well it's minor proofreading, im sure some one would love to do it, i do it for Lukes Way... But i would sugest getting an american to do it for you, as your english style is more that direction rather that the british englis direction... and no, i don't get paid to do text overview and crrections, i do it to help the novelist, as its just some light reading and fixing, it's not the same as if someone helps with animation or renders or the whole programming part...