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jhonatanw
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Very difficult to play this game with such a bad translation. As i understand, developer is spanish and knows english very bad, why can't he\she ask someone to translate everithig, or just use AI i don't know. Maybe with better translation this game is worth playing, but not now.
Because it’s a kinetic prologue.
This game just serves as background to future game.
There’s only one episode left before the end.
So yes Ava is a forced Li and I doubt that will change.
what's the difference between King and Prince, i don't get the choices
anyone can clarify?
anyone can clarify?
Aeakos
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Why is there always a "makeover" and then the girl gets short hair? At least half of her head isn't shaved. Must be these confusing times we live in...
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jhonatanw
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Anyone else confused by the Scandinavian "Government Names"?
And I think this needs some editing and cleaning up. Some typos, issues with tenses - 'planned' instead of 'plan', stuff like that.
But also some weird edits. There is a short scene of a wonam massaging Xiomara's back with Ava saying " Oi- Oi- here eat" in the middle of the Cafe set up sequence that just makes no sense and is very confusing. There are numerous instances of the worng character being the one tagged as the speaker, or at least that how it seems in context. Ultimately it is good, I like the vibe, the relationships etc., but the narrative can get quite hard to follow. Feels like the dev could use another set of eyes to go over it and offer some editorial suggestions.
Just my two pennies worth. Also more Xiomara would be nice...
And I think this needs some editing and cleaning up. Some typos, issues with tenses - 'planned' instead of 'plan', stuff like that.
But also some weird edits. There is a short scene of a wonam massaging Xiomara's back with Ava saying " Oi- Oi- here eat" in the middle of the Cafe set up sequence that just makes no sense and is very confusing. There are numerous instances of the worng character being the one tagged as the speaker, or at least that how it seems in context. Ultimately it is good, I like the vibe, the relationships etc., but the narrative can get quite hard to follow. Feels like the dev could use another set of eyes to go over it and offer some editorial suggestions.
Just my two pennies worth. Also more Xiomara would be nice...
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Canto Forte
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All we see and feel and love and think is XiO ... what nonsense you talking about?
The background animations are just wonderfull, im really looking forward to the rest of the game, thank you for sharing
MadAng
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I like the characters' relationship development and am intrigued as to how the story develops. Nice renders too - Ava is a delight. Re location... Iceland? (mention of Kópavogur and use of kroner). If that's the case it's rather unique as is the choice of latino/a characters (and wether their background will have any bearing in the story). Keep up the good work!
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dont know how you encoded the animation files in this update but they are lagging and that can't be because of the quality.
Cpu is going through the roof while they are playing
the third? animation doggy is fine
bathroom animation is borked again
dont know how you encoded the animation files in this update but they are lagging and that can't be because of the quality.
Cpu is going through the roof while they are playing
the third? animation doggy is fine
bathroom animation is borked again
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lipe2410
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I love Ava. So. Fucking. Much.
Great update Kvitravn. I loved all the sequence of opening day of the restaurant. Liked the new characters too. But the great star is Ava. She is one of the greastes LI's i ever have the pleasure to play in a VN.
Few cons were some few renders seems like graining and with weird stains. In some renders of Dakota's interview her forehead has a black fracture. And just like simulacrum said above, the animations are lagging for me too in the same way. But nothing that could bother me. The Alvaro/Ava was everything i wanted and really hot and lovely. Thank you so much for that!
Can't wait to see what happen nexts with the return of you-know-who in the last render
Great update Kvitravn. I loved all the sequence of opening day of the restaurant. Liked the new characters too. But the great star is Ava. She is one of the greastes LI's i ever have the pleasure to play in a VN.
Few cons were some few renders seems like graining and with weird stains. In some renders of Dakota's interview her forehead has a black fracture. And just like simulacrum said above, the animations are lagging for me too in the same way. But nothing that could bother me. The Alvaro/Ava was everything i wanted and really hot and lovely. Thank you so much for that!
Can't wait to see what happen nexts with the return of you-know-who in the last render
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Felt the same way regarding the location, I've been assuming they were Mexican from the start, given the "Dia De Los Muertos" (Mexican holiday) flashback with Ava. I mean them using terms like "mija" and such hinted at the fact they were speaking Spanish all along, no? Not sure what to make of the "government name" thing either, especially with everyone having scandinavian names.
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The whole premise takes place in a fictional and a bit futuristic version of Iceland, my home country - and since not many (if any) assets are there representing my home country - I'm mixing and matching it with locations mostly based in Europe.
There are Latinos, Native Americans, Irish and Indians in my storyline, so I can dive into more variety of characters other than just archetypes.
Each of those animations took me 16-17 hours to render haha, and that too after feeding them through Neat Video.
But that's not an excuse - just an explanation.
Of course I'll revisit them and improve them as I get better hardware.
Xiomara, and others gonna be a mainstay in my other story's, and while not revolving solely around them - she'll obviously be there in meaningful capacity.
And I'm sorry if you guys are disappointed by the lack of sex - I never meant it to be a porn game.
I want to make something that I'll like.
Yes there have been moments where I thought of making it a full-blown fuck fest but then I wouldn't be able to look at it with full passion neither at myself with pride.
I wanna make something I can look back to and be proud of.
And thank you all again to at least giving it a chance - means a lot really.
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