VN Ren'Py Completed Making Memories [v1.0a] [Kvitravn Tales]

[lipe2410]

This game is the definition of little gem. Everything in the game is sweet and pretty: the renders, the music, the mc's relationship with Xiomara and Ava. And of course, Xiomara and Ava themselfs.
I hope both keep being the main and only LIs. MC doesn't need anyone else and i don't wanna see him spend time with others, just with Ava and Xiomara

And i wish you have so, so much more support kvitravn. This work of art deserve so much more.
I really beg you to not abandon this gem. Keep going with your pace. I need my night of love, desire and passion with Ava

Mi Alma

 

[Tico7533on]

It seems to me that the tag has a definition that does not fit with an ending where only AlvaroxXiomaraxAva remains.
The author always talked about a harem lite... if that doesn't include 4 people it shouldn't carry the harem tag of F95.

4 people? The brother and sister duo, and the daughter of the brother, makes 3. Who is number 4, I'm kinda confused by your post, but maybe I misinterpreted you? And yes, 3 people is not exactly a harem, and I think that's what you were getting at?

 

[sorco2003]

4 people? The brother and sister duo, and the daughter of the brother, makes 3. Who is number 4, I'm kinda confused by your post, but maybe I misinterpreted you? And yes, 3 people is not exactly a harem, and I think that's what you were getting at?

Of course, what I was saying is that it is very likely that this game will only reach a trio, that's why the need to remove the harem tag (although the dev always talked about something lite).

 

[Kvitravn Dev]

 

[Zoomaa]

Well, about Luisa

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Hey dev you have done an amazing job with this game congratulation but I'm curious about the future of Luisa are you going with the idea of adding her to another game what will she be like (LI or a side character ) it's honestly an interesting and brave choice that got me curious most players really hate her character because the reason she cheated was that her peers told her she should ?

 

[Canto Forte]

This: banging the junior NTR bull is the go to idea behind many NTR heavy games.
The cheating wife is there to dissolve all there was that resembled a family to Xio.
As a side effect of such NTR heavy well travelled path, MC and the players behing him, they all
feel a deep devouring sense of betrayal, despair, desilusion and anger, on top jealousy
for the NTR bull who gets a house and a girl of whom Xio and MC thought the world of,
suddenly, totally undeserving and cheaply, she gets dropped by plot/dev ex makina
straight down his ”pants” with that girl being the instigator,
on top of a sexual scandal to cost her her job and all her livelyhood,
as being the boss and effectively treating your juniors, soliciting and then doing the dirty with them while supposedly on the job is the mother of all sex harassment lawsuit where the NTR bull would get everything she ever had.

All NTR instigators, either the cheating floozie or the bull are hated. That is the trope.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I wish they had a mod to explain what the choices represent. Like what does Prince and King means. I think one means love and the other means lust but which one are they?

 

[lipe2410]

I wish they had a mod to explain what the choices represent. Like what does Prince and King means. I think one means love and the other means lust but which one are they?

My guess is: Prince = more charming, loveable MC; King = more assertive MC.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

My guess is: Prince = more charming, loveable MC; King = more assertive MC.

So other words, it's best to choose prince and princess, got you.

 

[crimsonoon]

So other words, it's best to choose prince and princess, got you.

It's just dialogue flavor. There's no best or worse. So far there has been only one major Prince/King decision, which mostly changes what Xiomara wears in certain scene. Don't recall her acting much different in either variation.

 

[Deleted member 3405588]

Can anyone help me incest patch not working

 

[Deleted member 4725210]

Wait this game still don't have a lewd scene yet?whatttttttt?

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

U know what? I'm kinda starting to see why Luisa lost interest in the MC. Bro has no drive or ambition. He'd probably bum off of Mara and Ava if he could. Im sure he bummed off of Luisa as well. What woman wants a man like that? Of course she's still a bitch for what she did to Mara but the MC? I'm sure she's justified. Could've handled it better obviously but I don't blame her for losing interest in him.

 

[Kvitravn Dev]

 

[Azraelith]

So is it me or does the dad look like a corpse for the first few chapters? Does this get better? Dude looks unhealthily/sickly pale.

 

[Akkarin69]

I don't know if it gets better, but the writing/english is really bad at the beginning. With so many mistakes, it's not a fun read.

 

[TheCrimsonRevenger]

Now a couple of downsides, at least for me. You can't rename the MC, and i would really like to. Speaking of the MC, he is pale as fuck for someone who is latino/hispanic, if you contrast that with his daughter and sister, he looks really weird.
Overall a very good first release, and with Harem being planned, i'm keeping an eye on this

Everyone often forgets, all hispanic/latino people are descended from Spain.

And Spain is every bit as white as the rest of Europe. There's blonde spaniards. Redhead spaniards. And you still see that in their various offshoot countries/cultures like Mexico, Puerto Rico, Brazil, etc. Those places tend to be darker complexions because the spaniards heavily intermixed with the natives when they colonized the regions.

Southern spain brushes up against northern africa, and there was a couple of centuries where spain(or the various countries that would eventually become Spain after the Reconquista) were conquered and occupied by Islamic countries. So you do tend to see a prevalence of darker hair and tanned skintones in Spain compared to their next-door neighbors in France. But relatively speaking that's still a minority.

That said, yeah...it's kind of weird if the MC is supposed to be blood relatives to these characters and have such a disparity in coloration. Not impossible, I suppose. Sometimes genetics takes a holiday. But weird.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I included "Lite" because it's not really the pure manifestation of the kink itself, but the theme of domination in that moment itself was there, for example

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That's why I include "Lite" with it.

Is all game femdom like this?

 

[Akkarin69]

IMO the tag is often misused. There are so many games here with the femdom-tag just because the girl is initiating the sex or there is something like a footjob or positions with the girl on top like facesitting/69/cowgirl/lapgrinding in a game, which is basically vanilla stuff but is seen as "femdom" anyway.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

IMO the tag is often misused. There are so many games here with the femdom-tag just because the girl is initiating the sex or there is something like a footjob or positions with the girl on top like facesitting/69/cowgirl/lapgrinding in a game, which is basically vanilla stuff but is seen as "femdom" anyway.

In my case, if femdom is as it has been exposed, it seems fine to me, I'm not a fan of femdom